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Originally Posted by Qasid
Bahut umdaa kavita likhi hai Madhu, mazaa aa gaya padhkar..khaaskar yeh do lines bahut pasand aayi
Sapno ko baha na asuan me..na preet ko yun ruswa kar tu
Nadan na ban tu hosh me aa dil khud ko zara samajha re ab...
Yunhi likhti raho..
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Shukriya anu...aapne pasand kiya mujhe bahot achcha laga..mere sath kai baar aise hota hai ki kalam chalti hai aur koi nagma aise banta hai ki bas usme changes karne ka man nahi hota ye unme se ek hai.....bhale hee technically bahot strong na ho par ehsaas seedhe dil se nikle huye aur pure and strong....
Akhiri line mujhe bhi bahot pasand hai aur khaas baat ye ki vo post dalte vaqt hee likhi gayi hai....
Ek baar phir thank u ....