mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo
Kya baat hai janaab..100 daad pesh hain is ek sher par....
Waah!!!!!
Matla behad asar daar to maqta seedhe dil ko chhoota hua....kamaal ashaar huye hain sabhi manikhej aur purasar..
Hamari daad ko bhi jagah dijiyega apni bazm me.....likhte rahiye aur bhi behtar..
.....bada intzaar karaya mahfil ko is baar par chaliye ghazal aisi pesh ki hai ki mafi di ja sakti hai....
Khush rahein..
Madhu..