lekar zindagi humse

[vaishali]

Lekar zindagi humse,
zindagi jeene ki hasratein de di
cheen kar pyas mere labon ki
sare samndar ki bangi hume de di
gujarte hue lamhe rok na sake hum
in lamho ne zindagi bhar ke liye yadien de di
de kar zahar nafraton ka
tanhayion bhari muskrahat de di.
.................................................. . vaishali

[Dhaval]

Lekar zindagi humse,
zindagi jeene ki hasratein de di
cheen kar pyas mere labon ki
sare samndar ki bangi hume de di
gujarte hue lamhe rok na sake hum
in lamho ne zindagi bhar ke liye yadien de di
de kar zahar nafraton ka
tanhayion bhari muskrahat de di.


vaishali ji aapki ye peshkas ke ehsas e bayan pasand aaye mujhe aur ye tanhai bhari mukurahat dedi kya baat kahi hai aapne muje ye bat pasand aayi

bas uhi aap likkhte rahiyenga khus rahiye

aapka dost
dhaval

[vaishali]

hi aapne meri kavita pasand ki usake liye bahut bahut shukriya
thanks alot
hope i write more btter than this
take care bye

[KARAN1234]

Ek Lamhe Mein
Unhone Hamari Zindagi
Savaar Di
Ek Lamhe Mein Unhone Hamari Zindagi Ujaad Di
Kasoor Unka Nahi Hamaratha
Jo Un Do Lamhon Mein
Hamne Apni Sari Zindagi Guzaar Di

[KARAN1234]

Phir Chupke Se
Yaad Aa Gaya Koi
Phir Ankhon Ko Meri
Rula Gaya Koi
Kaise Us Meharbaan Ka
Shukriya Karoon
Mujh Nacheez Ko
'shyar'bana Gaya Koi

[aru]

hi vaishali,its really very nice , i like it very much
aise hee likhte rahiye

[vaishali]

hi thanks alot
u sent me thread after so many days seems to be busy
hmm i was also busy a bit
hmmm bas dua kijiye ki yunhi hum likhate rahen
can u suggest me if i want to publish my book then to whome shud i contact thanks take care bye

[aru]

hivaishali jee. i hv replied after a long time ,but u never read any of my ....... nu said bout book ,actuaaly i also want to know the procedure. if u get ans.plz also tell me. ok best of luk n take care