Have aa Udhaar chodi do..

[sahilmehta111]

Have aa Udhaar chodi do,
ramvano aa jugaar chodi do,

Kyarek ane kasek maut aavani,
Zindigi ne aam khechvi lagataar chodi do,

Maun tamne maan aapavse jaroor,
Shabdo ni chalavi talvaar chodi do,

Jya sona-chandi ni tulna a hoi prem,
Tya dil ni aap-le no vyaapar chodi do,

Kaanta par sattat sutela phoolon nu su ?
Aapna dard ange no pukaar chodi do,

Khotu kaam karta Bhagwaan ne bhooli javai,
To bhakti ane pooja no vyavhaar chodi do,

Jiv va no utsaah lai ne chalta j raho,
Pachad su thai che a vichaar chodi do,

Samay male to "YOGI" vicharje khud nu,
Bijao no karvo Uddhar chodi do.

[Parul]

wah sahil..... bahuj saras lakhyu chhe......

Khotu kaam karta Bhagwaan ne bhooli javai,
To bhakti ane pooja no vyavhaar chodi do,

Jiv va no utsaah lai ne chalta j raho,
Pachad su thai che a vichaar chodi do,

Take care!

[sahilmehta111]

Thank you so much parul ji, for your compliments.

[komal5]

Wowww..saahill
awsome work
gujrati ma avu...utkrusht lakhaan bahu wakhte vaanchva malyu!
ek pukht.ta che aapna lakhva ma...keep it up buddy
read u first time but luved it!
tc
komal

[sahilmehta111]

Thank you so much, Komal ji for your compliments, but actually I dont deserve this, coz this poetry is written by my friend Yogi, and I dont want to fool the world by gaining fake complements, ya but I will sure convey all the compliments to him. I neither smoke, nor do I chew tobacco, but still I go to one such panwala where I find this guy, and I love his work.

Thank you once again, Komal ji.

[Pulkit_gupta]

Hi Saahil

I am able to understand a bit.. Will ask somebody to translate this for me... But u do accept my heartiest praises on sharing this wonderful work.. and most importantly letting us know that its not mine....Just write "Not Mine" below the poetries not yours and there wud be no confusion...


Daad kubool ek baar fir se kar lijiye.. Do keep sharing such Gems...

[sahilmehta111]

thanks a lot Pulkit, for your compliments and advice too. I need such advice's in order to improve myself.

Thanks once again,
regards,
sahil

[Pyarali Rajan]

Wah Sahil ji,

Kaanta par sattat sutela phoolon nu su ?
Aapna dard ange no pukaar chodi do,


Khubaj sara!!

Rajan