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Smile "Mahfil-e-Ishq" sabke liye khuli bazam - 25th July 2008, 11:25 AM

Dosto ajj hum ek naya silsila shuru karne ja rahe hai.N

jisme app sab ka tahe dil se suwagat hai.... Title se hi appko andaza ho gaya hoga ki kerna kiya hai phir bhi meiN thoda sa explain kerna chahoNgi...

Kerna sirf itna hai , ki app ne apne chahat bhare ahsaso.N ko ash'aar ke sahare bayan kerna hai, chahat se bharpoor, umda khayalooN ko app apne ash'aar meiN bhi bayan ker sakte haiN aur kisi aur shayar ke ash’aar se bhi, mager ager apna sher na to "NM" ya " Not Mine" ya phir shayar ka naam ager maloom ho to zaroor likhna hai, hum ek saath do sher post nahi kareNge....ek member ke sher ke baad doosra member sher post karega...................... Umeed hai app sab ka bharpoor saath milega

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25th July 2008, 11:39 AM

KISI KE ISHK MEIN HUM NE AJEEB KAAM KIYA
KI KHUD HI KHUD KO MITAANE KA INTZAAM KIYA.

PRASHANT VASL in KASH AISA KABHI HUA HOTA(published'1976)
   
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25th July 2008, 11:53 AM

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KISI KE ISHK MEIN HUM NE AJEEB KAAM KIYA
KI KHUD HI KHUD KO MITAANE KA INTZAAM KIYA.

PRASHANT VASL in KASH AISA KABHI HUA HOTA(published'1976)


welcome prashnat ji.....

"Ibadat rab ki aur soorat yaar ki ho,
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ashiqo ke mahzab ka kaya kahna,
zikar rab ka aur baat yaar ki ho"

-NM


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25th July 2008, 12:59 PM

Chaliye hum bhi aa gayeN.......


Jis simt bhi dekhoun, Nazar aata hain kay tum ho
Ae Jaan-e-jahan,yeh koi tumsa hain kay tum ho


Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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Chaliye hum bhi aa gayeN.......


Jis simt bhi dekhoun, Nazar aata hain kay tum ho
Ae Jaan-e-jahan,yeh koi tumsa hain kay tum ho

welcome dear....


teri bahho mai aakar sakoon milta hai mujhe,
kaya meri tarah yoon hi bekarar ho tum......

-sunita virender


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25th July 2008, 01:56 PM

teri nigahon se aisi sharaab pi main ne
ki phir na hosh ka dawa kiya kabhie main ne
woh aur honge jinhe maut aagyi hogi
nigahe yaar se paayi hai zindagi main ne

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25th July 2008, 01:58 PM

mehfil kahe jise hum
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marte the hum bhi jaana
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ishq hai pyaare khel nahii.n hai
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Ishq Pagal Kar Gya To Kia Karo Gay Soch lo
Saniha Aisa Hua To Kia Karo Gay Soch Lo


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Ishq Pagal Kar Gya To Kia Karo Gay Soch lo
Saniha Aisa Hua To Kia Karo Gay Soch Lo


"dil-e-naadaa.N tujhe huaa kyaa hai
aaKhir is dard kii davaa kyaa hai "

~Ghalib ~


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25th July 2008, 05:27 PM

Ishq ne Ghalib nikammaa kiya
Warna hum bhi aadmi kaam ke thhe

by Gaalib jii


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"Dhadka hai dil-e-yaar tere zikar se phele,
jab bhi kisi mahfil meiN teri baat chali"

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Koii do mast aanKho.N me.N ham bhi Khogaye the
Woh kyaa zamaana thaa ki aashiq ham bhi hogaye the
Guruur-e-husn unko bhi thaa, shaq-e-sitam woh bhi raKhte the
Hame.N Khushio.N se hochuki thi nafrat, unke gham bhaagaye the

Hello friends! I am new here and those are the line I wrote just for this thread. My Urdu is not very good since I never studied it formally. I listen to Ghazals and try learning Urdu through them. Do let me know if I make mistakes and help me improve my Urdu.

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Koii do mast aanKho.N me.N ham bhi Khogaye the
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Guruur-e-husn unko bhi thaa, shaq-e-sitam woh bhi raKhte the
Hame.N Khushio.N se hochuki thi nafrat, unke gham bhaagaye the

Hello friends! I am new here and those are the line I wrote just for this thread. My Urdu is not very good since I never studied it formally. I listen to Ghazals and try learning Urdu through them. Do let me know if I make mistakes and help me improve my Urdu.

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kuchh to havaa bhii sard thii kuchh thaa teraa Khayaal bhii
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berabt ehsaasaath ko tu afsana na bana
apni hikmat se kisi ko deewana na bana


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ji bhar ke kar le pyaar aur zindagi luta
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26th July 2008, 04:00 PM

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ji bhar ke kar le pyaar aur zindagi luta
woh bewafa sahi tu to wafa nibha
apni kahani ch-od khabar yaar to rakh
dard -e -zabaani bhool zara dil se sada laga

Bahut achchaa sher hai. Lekin hame.N 'dil se sada laga' ne kaa matlab samajh me.N nahin aayaa. Mai.N Urdu abhi abhi siiKh rahaa huu.N. To aap please mujhe bataa_iye uskaa matlab kyaa hotaa hai.


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26th July 2008, 04:27 PM

prasad ji thanks a lot
dard-e-zabaani bhool zara dil se sada laga

sada yaani awaaz
ab yahan dil se sada laga ka matlab hai
jab hum kisi ko pyaar karte hain izhaar karne mein jhijhakte hain darte hain
ki kahin sab khatam na ho jaaye
but agar us ke dil mein bhi kuch ho to hamaari baat ko samjh sakti hai yaa sakta hai

bade bade shayar likhte hain ki agar do log raazi hain but izhaar na hua hai to shuruwaat mein un ke dil ek doosre se izhaar kar lete hain
aur yeh shayad sahi bhi hai jab hamaara dil yaa dimaag kisi cheez ko samajhta hai usi ke baad zabaan se iqraar karta hai ki koi cheez acchi hai kharaab hai

bas yehi express karna chaha hai ki pehle dil se dil ko samjha baad mein zabaan se kehna

hope aap ko ab koi doubts nahi honge

aur haan aap ek baat note kijiye main apni gazal mein (dard) word baar baar use karta hoon but dard ka matlab takleef har baar nahi zyaada tar mere dard ka matlab hota hai ehsaas kyunki dard aur khushi dono ehsaas hi to hain
jaise apni indians maan mein hota hai khushi ke aansu

aap ko ek sher bhi pesh karta hoon ismein bhi doubts hon to pooch len plz

MILA HAI SABR AUR TANHAAIYON KE DAUR
JAHAN KHUSHI KA HAI JASHN WAHAN HAI GAM KITNA

main bhi koi khaas urdu nahi jaanta bas koshish karta hoon
aap bhi kijiye aur ho sake to aap meer taqi meer ke kalaam refer kijiye
is se aap ko tehreer banane mein bahot hi khaas tareeke milenge

zyaada typical urdu aana zaroori nahi hai zaroori hai
lafzon ki dhun ko samajhna aur un ko un ki sahi jagah pe naqsh karna

app aur kuch bhi poochna chahte hain to bila jhijhak pooch sakte hain
aap ka yeh adna dost waqt bewaqt aap ke kuch kaam aa jaaye


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26th July 2008, 04:58 PM

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prasad ji thanks a lot
dard-e-zabaani bhool zara dil se sada laga

sada yaani awaaz
ab yahan dil se sada laga ka matlab hai
jab hum kisi ko pyaar karte hain izhaar karne mein jhijhakte hain darte hain
ki kahin sab khatam na ho jaaye
but agar us ke dil mein bhi kuch ho to hamaari baat ko samjh sakti hai yaa sakta hai

bade bade shayar likhte hain ki agar do log raazi hain but izhaar na hua hai to shuruwaat mein un ke dil ek doosre se izhaar kar lete hain
aur yeh shayad sahi bhi hai jab hamaara dil yaa dimaag kisi cheez ko samajhta hai usi ke baad zabaan se iqraar karta hai ki koi cheez acchi hai kharaab hai

bas yehi express karna chaha hai ki pehle dil se dil ko samjha baad mein zabaan se kehna

hope aap ko ab koi doubts nahi honge

aur haan aap ek baat note kijiye main apni gazal mein (dard) word baar baar use karta hoon but dard ka matlab takleef har baar nahi zyaada tar mere dard ka matlab hota hai ehsaas kyunki dard aur khushi dono ehsaas hi to hain
jaise apni indians maan mein hota hai khushi ke aansu

aap ko ek sher bhi pesh karta hoon ismein bhi doubts hon to pooch len plz

MILA HAI SABR AUR TANHAAIYON KE DAUR
JAHAN KHUSHI KA HAI JASHN WAHAN HAI GAM KITNA

main bhi koi khaas urdu nahi jaanta bas koshish karta hoon
aap bhi kijiye aur ho sake to aap meer taqi meer ke kalaam refer kijiye
is se aap ko tehreer banane mein bahot hi khaas tareeke milenge

zyaada typical urdu aana zaroori nahi hai zaroori hai
lafzon ki dhun ko samajhna aur un ko un ki sahi jagah pe naqsh karna

app aur kuch bhi poochna chahte hain to bila jhijhak pooch sakte hain
aap ka yeh adna dost waqt bewaqt aap ke kuch kaam aa jaaye

Aapkaa bahut bahut shukriyaa, dost! Mere ek sawaal ke jawaab keliye aapane waqt nikaalaa aur itani achchi-achchi baate.N bhi ki to mujhe behad Khushii hu_ii. Aapkaa samkhaane kaa tariiqaa bhi mujhe pasand aayaa.

Abhi abhi mai.N ne apani ek Ghazal ko pesh ki "Aapki Shayri" forum me.N. Mujhe aur bhi bahut Khushi hogi agar aap uske baare me.N kuchh liKh de.Nge to. Mujhe taariif kaa shauq zyaadaa nahi.N hai to aapko meri uss naa-qaabil-e-taariif Ghazal ki ko_ii taariif karne ki zaruurat nahi.N hogi. Aap bas meri apani Ghalatiyo.N ko samajh ne me.N meri madat kare.N taaqi mai.N achchaa liKh sakuu.N.

Aapke waqt keliye shukriyaa.


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26th July 2008, 07:36 PM

dil mein jo dard hai
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hum ne dekhi hai in aakhon ki mehakti khushboo
haath se chu ke in rishton ko ilzaam na do
ek ehsaas hai yeh rooh se ise mehsoos karo
pyaar ko pyaar hi rehne do koi naam na do

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TUM PER HI KHATAM YE SAARI CHAHAT HOGI,

PHIR NA KISI AUR PER YE INAYAT HOGI,

KUCH IS TARAH SE KARENGE YAAD TUMHE,

NA ZAMANE KO SHIKWA NA TUMHE SHIKAYAT HOGI,...


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Appne bhut ache shayri ke ha hamen bhut ache lage plz ase he likhte rahe
our ham parte rahe........

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28th July 2008, 11:47 AM

"tum tanhai mein jab mere dil par dastak dety ho,
soye hue armaano.n ko aake jagga detey ho,
yeh alag baat hai ki mera wajood hai tumse juda,
magar khayaalo.n mein aakar ek kasak si jaga dety ho"

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Love Nice - 29th July 2008, 06:15 PM

bheed ka sath dene ki chahat
har kissi ko nahi hoti hai



pyaar ke liye zinda hai jo

unko yeh hasrat nahi hoti hai



kissi ek ke liye hi manzil ban jawo

rab se har pal ibadat yahi hoti hai



sab ko manane ki arzoo rehti nahi

na hi feer aur kissi ki jaroorat hoti hai!!!!
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