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Ab naam mohabbat ke, ilzaam to aaya hai,
jo chahe saza dedo,sar hamne jhukaya hai...



beautiful verse from a song....
"haatho.n ki lakeero.n mein tujko likhvaya hai,
zamane se darna kaya tujhe naseeb banaya hai"

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ASHK AANKHON MERI DEKH KAR KHUDKO TADAPAATI KYUN HO,
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Sookh Jaatay hai lab, lafz miltay nahi
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"mohabat kabhi kisi ko seekhai nahi jati,
yeh aag khud lag jati hai lagai nahi jati"

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Naam tera rehta hai har pal inn labo par
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Unki ek yaad bechain kar jaati hai
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Aisa haal kiya unhone hamara
Ke neend aati hai toh aankh bura maan jati hai .NM


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"mohabat kabhi kisi ko seekhai nahi jati,
yeh aag khud lag jati hai lagai nahi jati"

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Shukraguzar hoon tera mein, intezar jo tune ab tak hai kiya
Pyar mila itna tujhse, saara zamana humne bhula hi "DIYA".......NM


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Chahe jidhar bhi rukh ho hawa ka Diya _Jale
Jab tak chala na jaaye andhera Diya _Jale
hume bahat pasand aayi........sukriya........

jab apna saya tumhara saath chor de
umid rakhna mere saath ki ......Ek Diya jalake



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just a reaction ..technical..Zainy - 3rd August 2008, 07:29 PM

Bayan-e-ishk hota ishk-e-bayan...jis ne bhi likha hai..GALAT hai..
Bayan-e-ishk yaani..ishk ka bayaan...aur ishk-e-bayan ka matlab hua Bayan ka ishk..
Sochiye!auron se,jinhe sachmuch urdu shayri ka theek se pata ho..Baaqi phir..
Agar meri bina maangi salah se aap badzan(naraz) hain,to Sorry.
magar aakhir mein aap ko aur clear karne ke liye main,aap ka thoda dhyaan,neeche ki lines par chaahoonga..

ye hain aap ki bheji lines:

Sookh Jaatay hai lab, lafz miltay nahi
Hoota nahi humse ishk-e-bayaan
Unhay kaise bataa doon dil ki lagi…

Kayse sikhaaoon aankhoo ki zubaan


aur ye thodi her pher ke saath nayi lines..(just to convey the point clearly)

Sookh jate hain lab,honth hilte nahin
ishk ka humse hota nahi hai bayaan
kiase dil ki lagi un ke aage kahen
kaise aankhon ko apni banaayen zuban.
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"ab jo mileNge to juda na hoNge kabhi,
aisa rishta tere saath bana leNge hum"

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Bayan-e-ishk hota ishk-e-bayan...jis ne bhi likha hai..GALAT hai..
Bayan-e-ishk yaani..ishk ka bayaan...aur ishk-e-bayan ka matlab hua Bayan ka ishk..
Sochiye!auron se,jinhe sachmuch urdu shayri ka theek se pata ho..Baaqi phir..
Agar meri bina maangi salah se aap badzan(naraz) hain,to Sorry.
magar aakhir mein aap ko aur clear karne ke liye main,aap ka thoda dhyaan,neeche ki lines par chaahoonga..

ye hain aap ki bheji lines:

Sookh Jaatay hai lab, lafz miltay nahi
Hoota nahi humse ishk-e-bayaan
Unhay kaise bataa doon dil ki lagi…
Kayse sikhaaoon aankhoo ki zubaan

aur ye thodi her pher ke saath nayi lines..(just to convey the point clearly)

Sookh jate hain lab,honth hilte nahin
ishk ka humse hota nahi hai bayaan
kiase dil ki lagi un ke aage kahen
kaise aankhon ko apni banaayen zuban.
Prashant vasl

thanks a lot prashant ji....bura manne ka to koi sawaal hi payda nahi hota....ham to yahan kuch seekhne ke liye hi aaye hai...hame khushi hain ke apne hamein hamari ghalti samjhayi....lekin yeh sher hamara nahin hai...shayed jisne bhi likha hai..."zubaan"word se rhyme karne ke liye ishk-e-bayaan likha hoga....ya phir wo "ishk ka bayaan" ...likhna chahta tha ho.....hamse ghalti ye hogayi hamne theek se is baat par ghaor nahi kiya...aage se dhyan rakhenge...


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Thanks Zainy
I am glad that i could be of some help..
keep it up.achchi shayri likhne waalon se zyada wo log achche hote hain jo achcha sher sanajhte hain..achcha padhiye aur phir khud ba khud aap achcha likhne bhi lag sakti hain..
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AAYE THE TO LOGON NE SEENE SE LAGAAYA THA
MEHFIL SE UTHE HAIN TO HAR AANKH PARAI HAI.
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jinke yaad main hum raat bhar so na paye
wohi poochte hain tum kaal sapno main kyun nehin aaye .......?



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khud kaise ye faisla karoon..kyon ki:
CHAHTA HAI AADMI,HAR EK KO PEHCHAN-NA
KIS QADAR DUSHWAAR HAI APNI HAQEEQAT JAN-NA.

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Husne matla mulaheza farmayen:

Milta rahe jahan ko ujala diya jale
Dil ki hai aarzoo ke hamesha diya jale..........
kabhi tum bhi humse youn milakaro
itezar ki Diya ab hum jalaye rakhe hain



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Na jhilmila teri ankhieN keh mer na jaaoN
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Tere Jaado-e-husn ne behkaya hai iskader
darrta hoN keh badnaam tujhe ker na jaaoN


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Kahi.n savera hoga to kahi.n shaam hogi,
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Ek baar ae dost kuch maang ke to dekh,
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Kahi.n savera hoga to kahi.n shaam hogi,
Meri har khushi tere naam hogi.
Ek baar ae dost kuch maang ke to dekh,
honto pe hansi aur ye zindagi tere naam hogi....!


"Chandni raat mein jab tumhe dekha tha,
saba bhi tab kuch sargoshi kar rahi thi,
woh 2-2 channd dekh kar pashemaaN thi,
mujhe bhi laga asmaan ka chaand dokha tha"

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ye ishk mhumein aaj kis mukaam par laya hai...
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ye ishk mhumein aaj kis mukaam par laya hai...
roye jab bewafai mein to labon par usi ka naam aaya hai....
"humne bhi tumhe yaad kiya hai raat bhar,
uth uth ke tera naam pukarte rahe raat bhar"

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5th August 2008, 06:14 PM

[quote=tishna;299318]Na jhilmila teri ankhieN keh mer na jaaoN
Nigah-e-Qatil ka waar sehan ker na paaoN
Tere Jaado-e-husn ne behkaya hai iskader
darrta hoN keh badnaam tujhe ker na jaaoN
Betab tamannao ki kasak rahne do,
manzil KO pane ki talab rahne do,

aap bhale hi raho dur nazro se,

par band palko me apni jhalak rahne Do...



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Tere ishq main jiti hun tere ishq main marti hun
tere liye zalim main kya kya karti hun .........
THODI SI MOHLAT HUMEIN MOHABBAT MEIN DI HOTI,
THODI WAFA BHI KARNI THI AGAR HUMEIN DIL SE MOHABBAT KI HOTI...
DETE KOI BHI SAJA HUMEIN MANJOOR THI USKE BAAD,
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kabhi tum bhi humse youn milakaro

itezar ki Diya ab hum jalaye rakhe hain
bhulo sabko is duniya me,
par kisi k liye khud ko mat bhulo.............


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bhulo sabko is duniya me,
par kisi k liye khud ko mat bhulo.............
khud ko unke pyar main faana kar chuki hun
ab to udhar ki jindegi main jee rahi hun



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THODI SI MOHLAT HUMEIN MOHABBAT MEIN DI HOTI,
THODI WAFA BHI KARNI THI AGAR HUMEIN DIL SE MOHABBAT KI HOTI...
DETE KOI BHI SAJA HUMEIN MANJOOR THI USKE BAAD,
AGAR HUMNE APSE KABHI KOI SHIKAYAT BHI KI HOTI....



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bahut khoob bhai nice written u.............


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jo keh na sake wo fasana yaad aata hai
guzra hua dilkash jamana yaad aata hai
jab husn se ishq takraya tha kabhi
ghayal hua tha ek parwana yaad aata hai
dil se mohabbat ke tufaan uthe the
jab aankhon ka sapne sajana yaad aata hai
kasturi jaise din mehakte the
mere raaton ka gungunana yaad aata hai
aankhon ka mil kar jhuk jana nahin bhula
hothon ka thar_tharana yaad aata hai
mera usko kankhiyon se dekhna
baar baar aur uska wo muskurana yaad aata hai
raaton ko tanha yaad mein kisiki...
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uth uth ke tera naam pukarte rahe raat bhar"

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chupaye dil me gamo ka jahan baithe hai
hum teri yaad me bas bejawan baithe hai
ye baat aur hai ki hum manjil tak na pahuch sake
magar hum saare kante bhare rahon ko chan baithe hai
aur gardish me takdir hame kya satayegi
luta ke ishq me naamonisan baithe hai
ek lafjon mohabbat hi dil ka dushman hai
jise sariyat maan baithe hai.


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Ehsaason ke samandar mein
Dard ki lehron par
Aansoo behne lagte hein teri yaad mein
To dil poochta hai mujh se
ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI
Jab dil ko tod kar,mujh ko thukra kar
Dilbar is dil ko hazaar zakhm deta hai
To dil poochta hai mujh se
ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI
Tarasti aankhon ko Bechain dil ko
Jab wo tadpa jaata hai
Mohabbat ka jab koi anjaam nahi milta h
Bhavna: Tarasti aankhon ko Bechain dil ko
Jab wo tadpa jaata hai
Mohabbat ka jab koi anjaam nahi milta hai
To dil poochta hai mujh se
^ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI
Hum ne to jaana tha
zindagi khoobsurat hai,zindagi ek suhaana sapna,
zindagi mohabbat ka doosra naam hai
Jab ki haqeeqat mein sirf gham milta hai
To dil poochta hai mujh se
ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI
Zindagi kyon aati ho tum
Har baar koi naya naam liye
Har baar chali aati ho tum
ghamon ka saagar liye
Jaana hai kahan tujhe
Ab tu bata zindagi tu koun hai


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THODI SI MOHLAT HUMEIN MOHABBAT MEIN DI HOTI,
THODI WAFA BHI KARNI THI AGAR HUMEIN DIL SE MOHABBAT KI HOTI...
DETE KOI BHI SAJA HUMEIN MANJOOR THI USKE BAAD,
AGAR HUMNE APSE KABHI KOI SHIKAYAT BHI KI HOTI....



FIR YAAD AAYI AAJ WO BEWAFA SANAM.....................
Kabhi jo apne berukhi se hame ghayal karte the!
Aaj apne chahat bhare nazro se dil me dastak diye ja rahe hai..



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