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Post ek guzaarish - 23rd August 2009, 04:54 PM

aap dosto.n se ek guzaarish hai ke aap jab kisii bhii Ghazal/nazm ko paDhe.n to chup chaap paDh kar hii naa guzar jaayaa kare.n, apney ta'asuraat/raa'ey se nawaazaa bhii kijiye, meharbaanii hogii. is se likhane waale dost ki hausila afzaaii hotii hai...

har likhane waale kii koshish rehtii hai kii hameshaa achchhaa hii likhe, aur yeh hamaaraa farz hotaa hai kii, ham unhe bataaye.n kii , unhone kaisaa likhaa hai, un kii kamiyaa.n bhee bataaye.n taakii woh aur behtar likh sake.n ..ummeed hai aap sab dost meri is guzaarish par zaruur dhyaan de.nge..

shukriyaah aap sab ka

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aap dosto.n se ek guzaarish hai ke aap jab kisii bhii Ghazal/nazm ko paDhe.n to chup chaap paDh kar hii naa guzar jaayaa kare.n, apney ta'asuraat/raa'ey se nawaazaa bhii kijiye. meharbaanii hogii. is se likhane waale dost ki hausila afzaaii hotii hai...

har likhane waala ki koshish rehti hai kii hameshaa achchha hii likhe, aur yeh hamaara farz hota hai kii, ham usay bataaye.n kii ,us ne kaisa likhaa hai, us kii kamiyaa.n bataaye taakii, woh aur behtar likh sake..ummeed hai aap sab dost is par zaruur dhyaan de.nge..

shukriyah aap sab ka

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mayank bhai apne bahut acha kiya jo ye post apne banadi. kyu ki muje hi gazal likhna nahi aata hai aur jese likhta hu vese bhej deta hu. kyu ki use padhne wala koi nahi hota hai to jese likha vese bhej diya. koshish hamesha yahi rehti hai ki achi gazal likhu per kabhi likh nahi paya. ab apne ye post banadi hai to jarur hame bhi thoda hosla milega ki hum achi gazal likhe. aur kaha galat likh rahe hai ye bhi pata chal sake.


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Mayank ji.........aapne ek sahi prastaav rakha hai...is se naye likhne walo ko toh hausla milega hi....saath hi woh apne lekhan mai sudhaar bhi kar payenge........dusra khaali padhkar nikal jaane se .....likhne wale ko yeh nahi pata chalta....jo woh kehna chaah raha hai.....padhne wale ne use kis roop liya.....yeh sab ek dusre ki partikiriya se hi maalum padega.....main bhi yahi chahata hu......aur apne sabhi dosto se bhi chahunga.....mayank bhai ke is prastaav ka welcome kare....amal mai bhi laaye.....is mai sabhi ka laabh hai....

shukriya.....mayank ji....aapki guzarish ka suwagat hai.....




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mayank bhai apne bahut acha kiya jo ye post apne banadi. kyu ki muje hi gazal likhna nahi aata hai aur jese likhta hu vese bhej deta hu. kyu ki use padhne wala koi nahi hota hai to jese likha vese bhej diya. koshish hamesha yahi rehti hai ki achi gazal likhu per kabhi likh nahi paya. ab apne ye post banadi hai to jarur hame bhi thoda hosla milega ki hum achi gazal likhe. aur kaha galat likh rahe hai ye bhi pata chal sake.
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Mayank ji.........aapne ek sahi prastaav rakha hai...is se naye likhne walo ko toh hausla milega hi....saath hi woh apne lekhan mai sudhaar bhi kar payenge........dusra khaali padhkar nikal jaane se .....likhne wale ko yeh nahi pata chalta....jo woh kehna chaah raha hai.....padhne wale ne use kis roop liya.....yeh sab ek dusre ki partikiriya se hi maalum padega.....main bhi yahi chahata hu......aur apne sabhi dosto se bhi chahunga.....mayank bhai ke is prastaav ka welcome kare....amal mai bhi laaye.....is mai sabhi ka laabh hai....

shukriya.....mayank ji....aapki guzarish ka suwagat hai.....

aap dono ka tah-e-dil se shukriya.. kam-az-kam aap dono ne meri is Guzaarish par gaur farmaayaa aur is ka swaagat kiyaa....

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namste zainy ji main kafi dino se sdc family ko padh raha hu or use bhi kar raha hu kafi umda shayar hai aapke parivaar main jinke kehne ka andaaz kafi kabil-e-tarif hai or hosla afzai karne wale bhi behed sunder tarike se pesh aate hai

haan ye sach hai ke main kuch khaas nahi likhata aap jese shayaro ko padh padh ke likhne laga hu

lekin ek sawaal jo mujhe kafi dino se mere mann main hu use aapke sath bhi share kar raha hu take it seriouselly pls


jab yaha koi purana shayar like naresh ji , zainy ji, ishq sahab zidd ji,muskan ji koi gazal ya kuch bhi post karte hai to agle hi din unke paas kam se kam 10 se 15 reply pahuch jate hai cahe unki peshkesh ordanary hi q na ho lekin une kafi appriciation milta hai jabki jo naye shayar hai uhone kitni bhi achi kosish ki ho lekin baaki shayaro ko unke baare main do shabad kehne main bhi pareshani hoti hai or bilkul nahi karte.

naye parivaar ke membor tab aapki family main jyada khush hokar rahenge jab unhe apna pan mehsus hoga, or ye apna pan tabhi ho sakta hai jab aap unke thread pe comment kare ya unhe unki galtiyo se reberu karaye unhe lagega ke haan unki bhi koi care karta hai isse unhe hosala milega or ve purzor kosish karenge or acha likhne ki or unme nikhaar bhi aayega or ve sada sdc parivaar se jude rahenge ...

umeed hai main jo kehna cahta tha vo hi aap tak pahucha hai main kisi ko hurt nahi karna cahta bt ye muje laga to maine keh diya iska


ye meri feelings thi aapke sath share ki baaki jo apko sahi lage hume bhi ussse rubaru karaye


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namste zainy ji main kafi dino se sdc family ko padh raha hu or use bhi kar raha hu kafi umda shayar hai aapke parivaar main jinke kehne ka andaaz kafi kabil-e-tarif hai or hosla afzai karne wale bhi behed sunder tarike se pesh aate hai

haan ye sach hai ke main kuch khaas nahi likhata aap jese shayaro ko padh padh ke likhne laga hu

lekin ek sawaal jo mujhe kafi dino se mere mann main hu use aapke sath bhi share kar raha hu take it seriouselly pls


jab yaha koi purana shayar like naresh ji , zainy ji, ishq sahab zidd ji,muskan ji koi gazal ya kuch bhi post karte hai to agle hi din unke paas kam se kam 10 se 15 reply pahuch jate hai cahe unki peshkesh ordanary hi q na ho lekin une kafi appriciation milta hai jabki jo naye shayar hai uhone kitni bhi achi kosish ki ho lekin baaki shayaro ko unke baare main do shabad kehne main bhi pareshani hoti hai or bilkul nahi karte.

naye parivaar ke membor tab aapki family main jyada khush hokar rahenge jab unhe apna pan mehsus hoga, or ye apna pan tabhi ho sakta hai jab aap unke thread pe comment kare ya unhe unki galtiyo se reberu karaye unhe lagega ke haan unki bhi koi care karta hai isse unhe hosala milega or ve purzor kosish karenge or acha likhne ki or unme nikhaar bhi aayega or ve sada sdc parivaar se jude rahenge ...

umeed hai main jo kehna cahta tha vo hi aap tak pahucha hai main kisi ko hurt nahi karna cahta bt ye muje laga to maine keh diya iska


ye meri feelings thi aapke sath share ki baaki jo apko sahi lage hume bhi ussse rubaru karaye


sdc parivaar ka hitteshi

Hmm plzz unka naam bhi batayeN ... jinhone ye shikayat ki hai .....
isme chupane wali koe baat nahi, shikayat jayz ho sakti hia nahi bhi ..
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Isi liye tou maine is pm ko yahaaN paste kiya, taaki sab isay padhe...
lekin kya woh bhi sabko padhteN haiN .............

aur woh kitne thread banate hai ye bhi to depend karta hai....
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Aur naam batana hi chahiye nahi to, unki shikayat kaise door hogi ....!!
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ye baat theek hai ki kisne kaha uska naam important nahi hai par shikayat ka pata hona jaruri hai par ye shikayat puri tarah jayaz nahi kahi jaa sakti sabhi yahan jab aaye hain to naye hi the unhe dheere dheere members ne padha aur unki hausla afzai ki tabhi sab yahan sthapit hue hain naye members ko dhairy ki jarurat hoti hai aur hamesha prayaas karte rahna chahiye aur maine to hamesha mahsoos kiya hai ki aap mushkil jee dhaval jee naresh bhai sunita jee sazid bhai hamesha naye members ki hausla afzai karte hi hain tabhi is parivaar me itne naye members judte hain aur ye parivaar khoob fal fool raha hai

Main bhi karta huN ishq bhaye,
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pata nahi jis mohterma ne ye pm bheja hai unko aisa kyu laga??

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pata nahi jis mohterma ne ye pm bheja hai unko aisa kyu laga??

aaur bhaiyyo mai bhi to karta hu....mujhe bhi include karo....acche kaam me
vikas bhai aur zidd bhai
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are aap sab to include hain hi naam likhne se rah gaya hai sorry for it


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DostoN yeh is baat ka dusra pehlu hai....maiN bhi aap ki baat se sehmat huuN, aur maine us member ko reply me bhi yahi kuch likha hai ke

1) Har member kuch dino tak naye hi hota hai, aur dheere dheere hi puraana hota hai, log jaanne lagte haiN, tou comments bhi badh jaate hain..hum sab bhi kabhi naye hi they,hamaare posts per bhi shuru shuru me koi reply nahi milte they, bas thode se sabr aur mehnat ki zarurat hai

2) kuch naye members yahaaN wahaaN se copy paste karte haiN, jab tak hum tasalli nahi kar lete ke ,yeh unka hi likha hai, hum koi comment nahi karte

3) kuch naye members aate hi roz ke 10-12 post karte haiN (may be their own), sabko reply kar paana mumkin nahi

4)aur kuch members naye naye ids banaate haiN, aur sirf apni post count badhate hain...

5) kuch members ghaltiyan nikaalne per bhadak jaate hain, bhala bura kehna lagte hain,ab jhooti tareef karna sabko nahi aata, isiliye kuch members naye members ko avoid karte hain..

so kayi batonN ko dhyan me rakhna padhta hai....

Per in sab ke baavjood, koshish yahi rehti hai ke ke har naye member aur unki posts ko pura dhyaan mile..

Isiliye puraane members se meri guzarish hai ke,

1) na sirf apni threads per dhyan deiN, balki dusre members ki threads ko bhi padhe aur unki hausla afzaai kare...

2)baar baar apni threads aur posts ko reply kar kar ke main page per mat layiye ,aap dusre members ki posts ko main page rehna ka mauQa dein...





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Aur Bitiya...!

Jab koyi senior member kissi newbie ki shaayri ko bakwaas kahe to kyaa kiya jaaye...?



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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Aur Bitiya...!

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mere khayaal se kisi bhi member ko kisi ki bhi shayri ko bakwaas kehna ka koi haq nahi hai,...yeh naasirf SDC ke rule ke khilaaf hai, balki yeh bhi saabit karta hai ke woh member ko bohat zyada attitude aur over confidence hai...




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Aur Bitiya...!

Jab koyi senior member kissi newbie ki shaayri ko bakwaas kahe to kyaa kiya jaaye...?

MaiN batauN bhayee ...

jisne kaha hai ki bakbaas hai,

use kaheN ki prove kare kaise bakbas hai,
aur nahi kar paye to

he/she shud say sorry to newbie...

nahi to simply ban him/her

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MaiN batauN bhayee ...

jisne kaha hai ki bakbaas hai,

use kaheN ki prove kare kaise bakbas hai,
aur nahi kar paye to

he/she shud say sorry to newbie...

nahi to simply ban him/her

I agree with you,...jo bhi aysa comment kare, tou usko saath me yeh bhi batana chahiye ke kya ghalti hai aur usay kaise theek kiya jaa sakta hai...

Per is reason ke liye ban nahi kiya jaa sakta...






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DostoN..

Ek baar phir aap sab se yahi guzarish hai..........

Members ko padhiye,reply kijiye,deserving posts ko reputations dijiye aur members ki hausla afzaai kijiye....

Yeh hum sab ka farz hai....:-)




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DostoN

Ek guzarish hai aapse...barahe karam, deserving posts ko zarur reps diya kareiN

Reps dete waqt dosti ko beech me mat laayiye..

.yahan yeh bhi dekha gaya hai ke kuch log 2 ids banaker apne aap ko reps de rahe hai....its really a shame and most unexpected act from reputed shayers....


Jo log waqay deserving hai..unka haq banta hai ke woh sdc reputation list me nazar aaya..

.aur siirf aap log hi aysa kar sakte hain.....give more and more reps to the deserving posts...




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Jo log waqay deserving hai..unka haq banta hai ke woh sdc reputation list me nazar aaya..

.aur siirf aap log hi aysa kar sakte hain.....give more and more reps to the deserving posts...

Zainy jee jahaan tak baat hai logon ko padhne ki to main bataana chahunga ke mujhe har roz badii hi besabrii se nai post ka intzaar rehta hai... fir bhale hi wo kisi newbee ka ho ya old members ka.. sabko padhta hoon aur jo lagta hai wo keh deta hoon...

Meri bhi iltijaa hai members se ke sabko padhen aur padhke jo dil me aaye Accha /buraa comment kar dein.. taaki shayar ko ye maloom ho ke usne kya accha likha ya kya ghalat likha hai...

Aur rahi baat reputation ki to behad mushkil hai ke 20 active members ka intzaar karna.. baushkil 8 se 10 members aise honge jo continue ikhte haiN.. aur zaruri nahi ke har likhne wala aisa likhe ke reps diya ja sake.. isiye jo 20 members ke baad repetition ka chakkar hai use band kar dena chahiye.. haan ye repetition 5 ka kar dein to behtar hogaa....

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Aur rahi baat reputation ki to behad mushkil hai ke 20 active members ka intzaar karna.. baushkil 8 se 10 members aise honge jo continue ikhte haiN.. aur zaruri nahi ke har likhne wala aisa likhe ke reps diya ja sake.. isiye jo 20 members ke baad repetition ka chakkar hai use band kar dena chahiye.. haan ye repetition 5 ka kar dein to behtar hogaa....

Shukriyaa....
20 members ki limit shayed is liye rakhi gayi hai taaki zyada se zyada members ko reps mil sake...

Aur haan yeh zaruri nahi ke hum sirf ghazal ya nazm ko hi reps dein...hum koi bh deserving post ya comments ko bhi de sakte hain....dusre section ( other than shayri)..ke members like english poetry,hindi poetry, quotes stories...sabko de sakte hain...its just a matter of encouraging them.

But anyways main admin sahab se baat karungi ki limit 10 kar di jaaye...




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20 members ki limit shayed is liye rakhi gayi hai taaki zyada se zyada members ko reps mil sake...

Aur haan yeh zaruri nahi ke hum sirf ghazal ya nazm ko hi reps dein...hum koi bh deserving post ya comments ko bhi de sakte hain....dusre section ( other than shayri)..ke members like english poetry,hindi poetry, quotes stories...sabko de sakte hain...its just a matter of encouraging them.

But anyways main admin sahab se baat karungi ki limit 10 kar di jaaye...
hmmm aap sahi keh rahi hai........ we will try to encourage the members..

and thanks once again for the consideration..... take care

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