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6th September 2009, 10:44 PM
ahl e buzm ko mera aadaab..........
ek nayi ghazal peshe khidmat hai............... apni rai se jarur nawaziyega............... iska beher hai.. 1212 1212 1212 1212  famous song isme hai jiske dhun se beherbandi ki hai: "kadam kadam badaija,khushi ke geet gaaye jaa ye zindagi hai kaum ki ,tu kaum pe lutaye jaa" bahut interesting beher hai ye....iski taktee pe jarur gaur kijiyega..... UPdownUPdown// ki wajah se dhun bhi bahut fast hai....... agar ap is gaane ki dhun par bhi ye ghazal padenge to shayad maza aaye aapko ye zindaagi jawaab hai yaa zindagii sawaal hai koi isse samajh sakaa kisiki kya majaal hai I_zhaar tha vo pyaar kaa yaa aapki thi dillagii Dono.n surato.n me hunar aapka kamaal hai jo paa liya bahut huaa jo kho gayaa so gum nahi Kisise ab gilaa nahi na ab koi malaal hai Na jaane meri shakl ke hai kitne aks rubaru ye chehre ka fareb hai ya aaine ki chaal hai mire kisi khayal se vo mutmain nahi hai zidd a.b_ap hi bataiiye ye bhi koi khayal hai? |
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6th September 2009, 11:36 PM
Zidd ji...Aadab.....aap kaise hai.......bahut khub likka hai aapne....sabhi ashaar zindgi ke bahut kareeb lage mujhe....aap toh hamare guru ji hai...main toh bas itna kahunga....ek behtreen peshkash rahi aapki...aise hi likhte rahiye....aur hame daad dene ka mauka dete rahiye....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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6th September 2009, 11:38 PM
ye zindaagi jawaab hai yaa zindagii sawaal hai [/quote]koi isse samajh sakaa kisiki kya majaal hai I_zhaar tha vo pyaar kaa yaa aapki thi dillagii Dono.n surato.n me hunar aapka kamaal hai beautiful ................ jo paa liya bahut huaa jo kho gayaa so gum nahi Kisise ab gilaa nahi na ab koi malaal hai bahut hi kamaal hia bhayee zabardast Na jaane meri shakl ke hai kitne aks rubaru ye chehre ka fareb hai ya aaine ki chaal hai zabardast tanz maarna .... woh bhi saleeke se ... bahut aata haia apko maien jab pahle pahal padha tha to ye baat khaas payee thi ab bhi kayam hai .. kayam hi rahe ameen mire kisi khayal se vo mutmain nahi hai zidd a.b_ap hi bataiiye ye bhi koi khayal hai? |
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7th September 2009, 03:59 PM
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kaise hai ap? apki hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya...... dil ko sukuun mila ki ap jaise umda shayar ne meri adna si koshish pe nazar dali.... apka teh e dil se shukriya regards |
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7th September 2009, 04:17 PM
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apne jo gazal liki hai muze achi lagi apki gazal apne jo gana baaya uski un pe to hai per apki gazal ka matla saaf nai sher saaf nai laga mai zada jankar nai hun is lye maaf kerna. muze ye sher acha laga. I_zhaar tha vo pyaar kaa yaa aapki thi dillagii Dono.n surato.n me hunar aapka kamaal hai Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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7th September 2009, 05:26 PM
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Yaar kadam kadam to aap nahi ba.Dh raheN haiN, Masha Allah aap to leaps and bounds se ba.Dh raheN haiN. Aakhri misra aur maqte ne to janab dil khush kitta. Subhan Allah. Aise hi likhte rahiye aur bazm ki raunaq bane rahiye. Namashkar Shyam HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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8th September 2009, 02:03 PM
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wah wah huzur..........bahot khub kahi hai aap ne dil ko chu gayi aap ki yeh ghazal daad qabul kare aur likhte rahe dost mujhe yeh lines bahot pasand aaye I_zhaar tha vo pyaar kaa yaa aapki thi dillagii Dono.n surato.n me hunar aapka kamaal hai Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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8th September 2009, 05:52 PM
zidd saahab aadab arz hai......
aap kii Ghazal padhiii, hameshaa ki tarah kuchh naye khayaal ko qalamband kiyaa hai aap ne... behr ke lihaaz se Ghazal almost paas hai....yeh behr mujhe behad pasand hai, aur aap ne jo zameen chuni hai woh shahryaar saahab kii zameen se miltii jultii hai.. albattaa behr bhii wohii hai.... matla kuchh yuu.n hai shahryar saahab kii ghazal me.n.. ye kyaa jagah hai dosto ye kaun saa dayaar hai hadd-e-nigaah tak jahaa.N Gubaar hii Gubaar hai ab aate hai.n aap kii Ghazal par.... Quote:
par duusra misra klaafi sust lag rahaa hai, isay yuu.n kar ke dekhiye...yeh zi.ndagii jawaab hai yaa zindagii sawaal hai samjh sakaa hai kaun isay kisii ki kyaa majaal hai Quote:
dono.n : 22 suurate.n:212 pahla misraa kuchh yuu.n kiyaa jaa sakta hai.... junuun thaa woh pyaar kaa ya dil lagii thee aap kee duusra misra aap sochiye...................  Quote:
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bas, khayaal thoDa sa aur saaf kar leejiye.... daad Quote:
aap kii yeh kavvish ek achchihi koshish hai, is ke liye meri aur se daad aur mubaaraq baad qubool kar hii leejiye aur aise hii koshish zaarii rakhiye... likhate rahe.nhimmate mardaa, madad-e-khuda mayank |
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9th September 2009, 08:30 PM
Zidd Ji,
BOht khob likha hai, aisey hi likhte rahiye Take care tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th September 2009, 11:07 PM
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vikasji.....aadaab kaise hai aap? apke hausla afzai ke liye bahut shukriya.......... apka saath pahle se naseeb hua hai...............accha laga ab bhi apki wahi rai hai.......... apka teh e dil se shukriya sahab regards |
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11th September 2009, 01:56 PM
Ziddi jee,
Yun hi dard ki mahfil se guzar rahi thi aur aapki ghazal per nazar padi.... ghazal ki saare aashar hume pasand aayi.....aapki soch main humesha ek nayapan rahta hai ......sachai ko naye andaaz se bayaan karte ho aap ek khubsoorat ghazal per daad kabul kijiye mahfil ko humesha roshan karte rahiye...... aapki Dost Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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12th September 2009, 12:51 AM
Nice one Zidd, esp this one
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13th September 2009, 10:15 AM
aadaab !
baRe miyaaN ! app ki koshish passand aaii aur meN moHteram mayanK saaHeb ki her aik baat se mutafiq hoN , achii koshish per meri jaanib se daad qabool fermaaieN likhte rahieN Mujeeb |
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13th September 2009, 05:56 PM
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Janab kaise hai aap..? yeh yahan puchna padh raha hai  Chaliye aapki gazal ki taraf to sahab aapki gazal bahut khoob lagi highlighted sher behad sahiN aur bahut khoob lage.... Dil se daad kabool kijiye.. Likhate rahiye Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez.. 
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14th September 2009, 08:42 PM
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vikasji............SSA behad khushi hui apki nazar hamari koshish par padi....... ap ne to shuru se hausla afzai ki hai meri......... bahut shukriya.....sahab.. teh e dil se apka shukriya......... agee bhi saath dete rahiyega regards |
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14th September 2009, 09:46 PM
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Mujhe khushi ka ehsaas hua aapki is dil fareb ghazal ko padh kar... sabhi sher umda hai ... aur apni apni jagah liye hue hai .. aur behad khoobsoorat alfaazoN se sajaya hai aapne is ghazal ko .. maiN aapki salamti aur aapke kalam ke noor ke liye dua karta huN Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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15th September 2009, 07:24 PM
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agee jarur koshish karunga ki likhai me aur jyada safai aaye........ koshish karunga apko shikayat ka mauka na du....... teh e dil se shukriya |
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16th September 2009, 01:39 PM
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agar aapko lagta hai ki mai sudhar raha hu..........to jarur usme apki hausla afzai ka bada haath hai............. baki mai ethnically hi punjabi hu.........baki hu theeth bhaiyya........ tohar jee khush hua to hamauu muska diye na tohaar saath saaath....teh e dil se apka shukriya regards |
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16th September 2009, 10:48 PM
zidd ji
kaise hai aap daad kabul kijiyega wakai me bahut khubsurati ke saath alfaajo me dhala hai aapne khus rahiyega aur kamyaab hote rahe duaa hai meri ajay nidaan http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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17th September 2009, 09:33 PM
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hausala afzai ke liye bahut shukriya......... apko bhi august GTM ki jeet mubarak ho.......... apka hunar wakai kamaal hai !!!!!!!! congratulations regards |
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17th September 2009, 09:40 PM
Zidd ji..
Na jaane meri shakl ke hai kitne aks rubaru ye chehre ka fareb hai ya aaine ki chaal hai ek baar phir aapki kalam ke tez ko mehsoos kiya... Likhte rahiye.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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17th September 2009, 09:48 PM
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aadaab aapko aaj pehli baar suna hai naam kay anoroop aapki lekhini main ek Zid dikhai deti hai .................aapnay is rachna ko ek naya aayaam diya hai .........jiskay liye aap meri aur say daad kabool farmaiyega...... aapkay liye chand line.......... aasha hai aapko pasand ayengi Zidd ki jo zid hai yaa zidd ka kamaal hai gazal ki duniyan main doston Zidd ek dhamaal hai aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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19th September 2009, 05:20 PM
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mayank sahab........aadaab kaise hai ap? apki daad kabul hai teh e dil se aur mubarakbaad ke liye bhi shukriya......... apne jo jo surat batai hai vo sab bahut pasand aayi.......... apne kuch sheron me kaha hai dobara koshish kijiye......... magar problem ye hai ki kisi bhi ghazal me mera interest tab tak hi rahta hai jab tak mai naya post na kar du........jaise hi koi nayi ghazal post karta hu mera liye purana kalaam khariz ho jata hai............ mai apne post kiye hue kalaam ki koi copy bhi aj tak save nahi ki.......... abhi aise kalaam nahi bana pata hu jisko save karne ka mann kare... apki hausla afzai ke liye mai apka abhari hu........... koshish karunga aur behtar likhne ki........... baki hadd e dil.......jiska abhi pata nahi kuch regards |
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20th September 2009, 01:13 PM
bahut umda likha hai Apne
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1st October 2009, 11:54 AM
[QUOTE=Hassan Rasheed;365625]Zidd Ji,
BOht khob likha hai, aisey hi likhte rahiye Take care[/QUOTE] hassan sahab...aadaab apki daad ke liye teh e dil se shukriya.......... aise hi hausla afzai ki umeed agee bhi bani rahegi apse teh e dil se apka shukriya regards |
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2nd October 2009, 02:56 PM
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yu hi nazar daalne ka bahut shukriya......... apki daad to hamesha hi khas rahi hai teh e dil se apka shukriya regards |
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3rd October 2009, 12:56 PM
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6th October 2009, 06:02 PM
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apka teh e dil se shukriya.......... apki daad badi khaas hai.......hamare liye ek baar phir teh e dil se shukriya |
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7th October 2009, 04:33 PM
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ghazal par nigaah dalne ke liye bahut shukriya...... apki daad teh e dil se kabul hai........ jeete raho... regards |
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12th October 2009, 03:25 PM
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ap jaise umda shayar ke dil ko chu sake isse badke khushi aur kya ho sakti hai......... apki hausla afzai ke liye teh e dil se shukriya....... regards |
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12th October 2009, 03:26 PM
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hamesha saath deye rahiyega regards |
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12th October 2009, 03:27 PM
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yun hi saath dete rahiyega........ khayal rakhiyega regards |
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12th October 2009, 03:30 PM
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apne sahab bahut badi daad di hai............. mera uske liye teh e dil se shukriya kabool kijiye.......... apka sher bhi bahut accha kaga ek baar phir apki hausla afzai ke liye teh e dil se shukriya......... regards |
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12th October 2009, 03:31 PM
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6th June 2010, 02:43 PM
ye zindaagi jawaab hai yaa zindagii sawaal hai koi isse samajh sakaa kisiki kya majaal hai I_zhaar tha vo pyaar kaa yaa aapki thi dillagii Dono.n surato.n me hunar aapka kamaal hai jo paa liya bahut huaa jo kho gayaa so gum nahi Kisise ab gilaa nahi na ab koi malaal hai Na jaane meri shakl ke hai kitne aks rubaru ye chehre ka fareb hai ya aaine ki chaal hai mire kisi khayal se vo mutmain nahi hai zidd a.b_ap hi bataiiye ye bhi koi khayal hai? [/QUOTE] Aaj Phir Aapko Padha Toh Har Ashaar Kamaal Hai Yeh Zidd Sahab Ki Qalam Ka Hoonar Be-misaal Hai... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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7th June 2010, 02:24 AM
Kya kahe janab hum...........har sher bemisaal hai.
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10th June 2010, 09:50 AM
jo paa liya bahut huaa jo kho gayaa so gum nahi
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