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Ajeeb baat hai tu usko bhool jaata hai -
3rd February 2008, 01:26 PM
Dear friends
Aaj fir kuchh likha tha to aap sabhi ke saamne rakh raha hun is gajal ko likhne ke liye mujhe parul ne kaha to unhi ko dedicate kar raha hun achhi lage to batana or agar kuchh kami lage to jaroor batana halanki kain dino baad fir se likhna ajeeb lag raha hia bahut par fir bhi ban pada jaisa likha andar se jo awaaj aayi unhe kagaz par utaar ke aap sabhi ke saamne rakh rha hun Jindgi tujhse bahut door chali aayi hai… Khwaab main bhi mere ek tanaha see tanahai hai ! Na koi saya na majhi na hi hamraah koi .. Bekhudi jane mujhe aaj kanha laayi hai ! Suna diya hame kisi ajnabi ka afsaana Asal jo baat thee wo baad main batai hai ! Dard kee saari haden paar kar chuka hun main Khud apne haathon maine har shama bhujhai hai ! Ajeeb baat hai tu usko bhool jaata hai Jafa bhi jisne teri bawafa nibhai hai ! Purane chahre naye daur main bhi jinda hain ne jane unane kitni keematen chukain hai ! Sukun kee baat pe ab mujhko hasi aati hai Kuchh is kadar se hamne dil pe chot khai hai ! bahut haseen tha wo waqt saath tha jab tu usi ko soch ke aankhon main nami aayi hai ! tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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3rd February 2008, 07:04 PM
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hello ji Anish ji kaise hai aap? umeed hai acche se honge...kafi tym baad apki taraf se padhne ko mila...accha laga padhkar Jindgi tujhse bahut door chali aayi hai… Khwaab main bhi mere ek tanaha see tanahai hai ! waise toh poori GHAZAL khoobsoorat hai per shuru ki do lines bahut zyada pasand aayi bas yun hin likhte rahiye take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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5th February 2008, 09:39 AM
Wow App Toh Bohot Ache Shayar Hein Janab
Really Nice And Beautiful Piece of Poetry Bohot Ache Aur Zabardast Keep Writting Like This Appki Poetry Ka Intezar Rahe Ga   Jub Hua Zikar Zamane Mein Muhabbat Ka Mujhko Appne Dil Ki Nakami Peh Rona Aya |
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10th February 2008, 06:00 PM
hi shweta
ek baar fir tum meri rachna ka reply karne main apna waqt mujhe de rahi ho iske liye shukriya sach kaha main kafi time baad aaya hun sach kahun to aajkal fursat ke wo pal chhin gaye hain jo kabhi mere pas beshumar the log kahte hain bada ho gaya hun jimmedariyan samjhni chahiye to shayad usi koshish main laga hun samjh lo isliye time nahi de pata par jab bhi kuchh likhta hun yanha pesh karta hun hi Ajnabi Larki ajnabhi ho par dost ho hai na thanks ke aapne meri rachna ko saraha aapne waqt nikala meri gajal ke liye shukriya apki sarahana hee to ham shayaron kee asal punji hai gajal bhi ajeeb cheez hai na dard par wah karna padta hai hame aapka meri post par reply karna achha laga achhe dost milte hain to achha lagta hai ab fir chahe wo ajanabi kyun na ho dost hain bas itna kaafi lagta hai khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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11th February 2008, 12:30 PM
Bahut khoob anishji..........
Har ashar bahut hi khubsurat hain..Dil se daad kubool kare.........sahin kaha aapne..mashrufiyat ke chalte hume waqt hi nahin milta likhne ka..........par zaroor koshish kare ke aap yaha ki ronak badhate rahe...aur ek baat shayri-dard mein post kare to jyada logoka dhyan jaayega....aur ek acchi koshish ka lutf sab utha payenge.. mausam  Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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11th February 2008, 07:33 PM
dear mausam ji
pahle to aapka dil se shuriya ada karta hun ke aap yanha aaye or meri rachna ko saraha har baar kee tarah dil ko tassalli hui ke abhi bhi dil ke kuchh jakhm hare hain jinka dard aap sabhi doston ko apna sa lagta to hai abhi hamari shayari main kuchh samjhane ke hasiyat hai ye jaankar kuchh sakoon bhi mil jata hai waise aapne jo sujhaw diya main jaroor apnaunga thanks again for reply khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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12th February 2008, 02:06 PM
hi dast juth mat likho
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12th February 2008, 05:00 PM
hi tejesh ji
apne kaha juth mat likho main samjha nahi kya aap mujhe samjhayenge ke maine kanha juth likha ya fir shayad main apka matlab nahi samjh paya hun kya aap mujhe matlab samjhane ke liye thoda time nikal payenge waise aap yanha aaye or mujhe waqt nikal ke reply kiye iske liye tahe dil se shukriya kabool kijiye khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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1st April 2008, 12:08 AM
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Hello anish bahut hi achha likha hai aapne, har ek line me dam hai, really goood job  GOD IS GREAT
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2nd April 2008, 01:38 PM
meri taraf se apko ek sher pasand aaye to jawab dena
zindagi na jane kis muqam pe le aayi hai dil main na-khuda na kisi ki khudai hain soch kar pareshan hua main bhi ke kya teri yad kufrr tak le aayi hain kuffr means not beliving in god |
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12th April 2008, 11:52 AM
hi adhoori heer ji
sorry for late reply jaisa maine pahle hee kaha hai ke aajkal waqt hee nahi de pata main us mahfil ko janha se kabhi mujhe ek pahchan or maksad mila tha kya karun aaj yanha aaya to aapka reply padha or khushi hui ke aapko mera likha kuchh achha laga thanks khush rahhiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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12th April 2008, 11:56 AM
hi dear aqs jee
achha laga aap aaye maine der se raply kiya iske liye sorry waise aapki dono lines bahut hee khubsurat ahsaason ka ahsaas kara rahi hain aapne meri is koshish ko saraha iske liye thanks khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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12th April 2008, 12:48 PM
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhh bas yehi kehta rahunga shayad... anish bhai... bahot touching likha hai.... bahot gehra... bahot hi achhe kya baat hai...wah yuhi likhte rahiyega Copyright @ Infinity, Ziyaad. http://apurvaoka.blogspot.com http://houndingtheworld.blogspot.com |
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18th April 2008, 05:11 PM
dear ziyaad ji
thanks ke aapne meri is rachna ko pasand kiya apka tahe dil se shukrgujar hun khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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18th April 2008, 07:29 PM
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25th July 2010, 02:25 PM
hi dear
kya jhoot likh diya hamne tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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30th July 2010, 04:58 PM
Dear anish_ekshayar Ji! Adab !
Aap ki ghazal paRhne k baad aap se kuchh baat karna chaahta tha. ChooNke maiN yahaN new hooN to maiN ye poochhna chaahta hooN k aapko kaise personal message kar sakta hooN, kuchh zururi baateiN karni thiN. (Waquif Ansari) Jindgi tujhse bahut door chali aayi hai… Khwaab main bhi mere ek tanaha see tanahai hai ! Na koi saya na majhi na hi hamraah koi .. Bekhudi jane mujhe aaj kanha laayi hai ! Suna diya hame kisi ajnabi ka afsaana Asal jo baat thee wo baad main batai hai ! Dard kee saari haden paar kar chuka hun main Khud apne haathon maine har shama bhujhai hai ! Ajeeb baat hai tu usko bhool jaata hai Jafa bhi jisne teri bawafa nibhai hai ! Purane chahre naye daur main bhi jinda hain ne jane unane kitni keematen chukain hai ! Sukun kee baat pe ab mujhko hasi aati hai Kuchh is kadar se hamne dil pe chot khai hai ! bahut haseen tha wo waqt saath tha jab tu usi ko soch ke aankhon main nami aayi hai ![/QUOTE] |
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24th February 2011, 08:37 AM
WAQUIF ANSARI
you can try quick link and privet massage option and send a new private massage tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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