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Post kuchh namak se bhari thailiyaN kholiye - 13th December 2006, 10:50 PM
kuchh namak se bhari thailiyan kholiye.
phir mere ghav ki pattiyan kholiye.

mere par to katar hi diye aapne,
ab to pairon ki ye rassiyan kholiye.

pehle aahat ko pehchaniye to sahi,
jaldbazi me mat khidkiyan kholiye.

bhej sakta hai kagaz ke 'bum' bhi koi,
aise jhatke se mat chitthiyan kholiye.

jisko bikna hai chupke se bik jaega,
yun khule'aam mat mandiyan kholiye.
   
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17th December 2006, 11:22 PM
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kuchh namak se bhari thailiyan kholiye.
phir mere ghav ki pattiyan kholiye.

mere par to katar hi diye aapne,
ab to pairon ki ye rassiyan kholiye.

pehle aahat ko pehchaniye to sahi,
jaldbazi me mat khidkiyan kholiye.

bhej sakta hai kagaz ke 'bum' bhi koi,
aise jhatke se mat chitthiyan kholiye.

jisko bikna hai chupke se bik jaega,
yun khule'aam mat mandiyan kholiye.

wah janab bohat bohat acha likha hai alfaz nahi hain meray pas aap ke likhay ki tareef ke liye aesay hi likhtay rahiye

Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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18th December 2006, 12:48 PM
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kuchh namak se bhari thailiyan kholiye.
phir mere ghav ki pattiyan kholiye.

mere par to katar hi diye aapne,
ab to pairon ki ye rassiyan kholiye.

pehle aahat ko pehchaniye to sahi,
jaldbazi me mat khidkiyan kholiye.

bhej sakta hai kagaz ke 'bum' bhi koi,
aise jhatke se mat chitthiyan kholiye.

jisko bikna hai chupke se bik jaega,
yun khule'aam mat mandiyan kholiye.
bahut khoob janab bakai main loot liya aapki shayri ne
dil se daad kabool farmaiye janab
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18th December 2006, 09:55 PM
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kuchh namak se bhari thailiyan kholiye.
phir mere ghav ki pattiyan kholiye.

wah dost wha bahot khub agaaz kiya hai aapne achha laga

mere par to katar hi diye aapne,
ab to pairon ki ye rassiyan kholiye.

azadi ka ehsas......

pehle aahat ko pehchaniye to sahi,
jaldbazi me mat khidkiyan kholiye.

bahot khub mere dost bilkul sahi bata kahi hain aapne

bhej sakta hai kagaz ke 'bum' bhi koi,
aise jhatke se mat chitthiyan kholiye.

kagaz ke bam? ye dusri line bahot pasdand aayi aise jhatke se mat chhithiyan kholiye ha hota hai dost kabhi kabhi aise hi jaisa aapne kaha hai sach kaha hai

jisko bikna hai chupke se bik jaega,
yun khule'aam mat mandiyan kholiye.

bahot hi khub anjaam diya hai mere dost aapne
mere dost yeti om ji janab namskaar!!

bahot hi khub likhte ho dost ek damdar kalaam k liye dad hazir hai dost ummid hai aage bhi aapke aise hi behtrin se kalaam is mehfil mein hame padhne ko milenge

khus rahiye aur apna khayal rakhiye

is duaon ke sath iajajat leta hun

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