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Apnii Pehchaan - 13th August 2009, 02:27 PM
Pyaare DostoN Aadab,

YuuN to kahteN haiN ke pyaar ki koi wajah nahi hoti, magar fir bhi hum sab apne pyaar meiN kuch khuubiyaaN to zaruur dekhte haiN aur unki wajah se unhe pasand bhi karte haiN. Magar insaani fitrat ya ana keh leiN hum unhi khuubiyoN ko apne raNg mein dhaalne ki koshish meiN lag jaate haiN, mano do alag insaan ek raah chal hi nahi sakte. Mai zyaati taur par is muktalif pehchaan ko dafanaa dene meiN yakeeN nahi karta aur isi jazbaat ko apne is nazm mein bayaaN kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai pasand aayegi…


Kaisey bhuul gaye aap, pyaar ka bhi usuul hai?
Gar bhula do kaydoN ko, to rishtaa fazuul hai.

Aap ki bhi pehchaan hai, aur hum bhi haiN nirale,
chahuuN agar aapko badalna, to kya ye qabuul hai?

kyuN banana chaahte haiN mujhey apna sa?
Aap-hi sa banuN to-hi Aapka, ye soch bhuul hai.

Kya mere wajood se inkaar kar sakte haiN Aap?
KyuN badal duun merii siirat? Ye ghair maqbuul hai.

Hai kudrat ka kanuun, har shai ki alag pehchaan,
Gehraa, fiika har raNg ka, chaman meiN phuul hai.

Is farq ko tasliim kareN aur fir bane mere humsafar,
Humaari pehchaan hi humaari ziinat hai, baaki dhuul hai.

Jab aapki shinaakht ho mujhsey, to hum do se ek nahi,
Ek hi tuut kar huey do, kyun deta apni anaa ko tuul hai

Na dhal apne saaNche meiN mujhey o “naadaan”,
Banaaya muktalif khuda ne tumhe, hume aur rasuul hai.


Love and Peace to all,
Shyam

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
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13th August 2009, 02:51 PM
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Pyaare DostoN Aadab,

YuuN to kahteN haiN ke pyaar ki koi wajah nahi hoti, magar fir bhi hum sab apne pyaar meiN kuch khuubiyaaN to zaruur dekhte haiN aur unki wajah se unhe pasand bhi karte haiN. Magar insaani fitrat ya ana keh leiN hum unhi khuubiyoN ko apne raNg mein dhaalne ki koshish meiN lag jaate haiN, mano do alag insaan ek raah chal hi nahi sakte. Mai zyaati taur par is muktalif pehchaan ko dafanaa dene meiN yakeeN nahi karta aur isi jazbaat ko apne is nazm mein bayaaN kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai pasand aayegi…


Kaisey bhuul gaye aap, pyaar ka bhi usuul hai?
Gar bhula do kaydoN ko, to rishtaa fazuul hai.

Aap ki bhi pehchaan hai, aur hum bhi haiN nirale,
chahuuN agar aapko badalna, to kya ye qabuul hai?

kyuN banana chaahte haiN mujhey apna sa?
Aap-hi sa banuN to-hi Aapka, ye soch bhuul hai.

Kya mere wajood se inkaar kar sakte haiN Aap?
KyuN badal duun merii siirat? Ye ghair maqbuul hai.

Hai kudrat ka kanuun, har shai ki alag pehchaan,
Gehraa, fiika har raNg ka, chaman meiN phuul hai.

Is farq ko tasliim kareN aur fir bane mere humsafar,
Humaari pehchaan hi humaari ziinat hai, baaki dhuul hai.

Jab aapki shinaakht ho mujhsey, to hum do se ek nahi,
Ek hi tuut kar huey do, kyun deta apni anaa ko tuul hai

Na dhal apne saaNche meiN mujhey o “naadaan”,
Banaaya muktalif khuda ne tumhe, hume aur rasuul hai.


Love and Peace to all,
Shyam
bahut sahi kaha apne...........
apki ghazal bi un ehsanso ko describe karti hui acchi lagi..........
daad kabool kijiye

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15th August 2009, 03:23 PM
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bahut sahi kaha apne...........
apki ghazal bi un ehsanso ko describe karti hui acchi lagi..........
daad kabool kijiye

regards
Manish Sahab Aadab Arz Hai,

Aur aapki pichli ghazal "Daaman pe khuna O ashq" ke liye bhai jaan, Farshi Salaam. Maasha-Allah kalam to.d kar syaahi pee gaye janaab. Aur meri is adna koshish pe daad ke liye bahot bahot shukriya bhai. Mashq jaari hai beh'r ki taaliim ki aur jald hi haazir houNga ek ghazal ke saath.

Tab tak apna khayaal rakhiyega,
Rab Rakha,
Shyam

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
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17th August 2009, 12:33 PM
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Manish Sahab Aadab Arz Hai,

Aur aapki pichli ghazal "Daaman pe khuna O ashq" ke liye bhai jaan, Farshi Salaam. Maasha-Allah kalam to.d kar syaahi pee gaye janaab. Aur meri is adna koshish pe daad ke liye bahot bahot shukriya bhai. Mashq jaari hai beh'r ki taaliim ki aur jald hi haazir houNga ek ghazal ke saath.

Tab tak apna khayaal rakhiyega,
Rab Rakha,
Shyam
shyam sahab aadab
ye meri khush nasibi hai ki ap jaise fankar ko thoda pasand aa jata hu....
koshish to mai jurur karunga ki agee bhi apka khayal aisa hi bana rahe
apki daad ke liye bahut shukriya..............bhale hi apne galat thread par daad di hi.....magar usse kya?
baat to wahi hai !!!!!!!!
ek baar phir shukriya.......

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30th September 2009, 05:17 PM
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Pyaare DostoN Aadab,

YuuN to kahteN haiN ke pyaar ki koi wajah nahi hoti, magar fir bhi hum sab apne pyaar meiN kuch khuubiyaaN to zaruur dekhte haiN aur unki wajah se unhe pasand bhi karte haiN. Magar insaani fitrat ya ana keh leiN hum unhi khuubiyoN ko apne raNg mein dhaalne ki koshish meiN lag jaate haiN, mano do alag insaan ek raah chal hi nahi sakte. Mai zyaati taur par is muktalif pehchaan ko dafanaa dene meiN yakeeN nahi karta aur isi jazbaat ko apne is nazm mein bayaaN kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai pasand aayegi…


Kaisey bhuul gaye aap, pyaar ka bhi usuul hai?
Gar bhula do kaydoN ko, to rishtaa fazuul hai.

Aap ki bhi pehchaan hai, aur hum bhi haiN nirale,
chahuuN agar aapko badalna, to kya ye qabuul hai?

kyuN banana chaahte haiN mujhey apna sa?
Aap-hi sa banuN to-hi Aapka, ye soch bhuul hai.

Kya mere wajood se inkaar kar sakte haiN Aap?
KyuN badal duun merii siirat? Ye ghair maqbuul hai.

Hai kudrat ka kanuun, har shai ki alag pehchaan,
Gehraa, fiika har raNg ka, chaman meiN phuul hai.

Is farq ko tasliim kareN aur fir bane mere humsafar,
Humaari pehchaan hi humaari ziinat hai, baaki dhuul hai.

Jab aapki shinaakht ho mujhsey, to hum do se ek nahi,
Ek hi tuut kar huey do, kyun deta apni anaa ko tuul hai

Na dhal apne saaNche meiN mujhey o “naadaan”,
Banaaya muktalif khuda ne tumhe, hume aur rasuul hai.


Love and Peace to all,
Shyam

Bohat khoobsurat ehsaas haiN shyam saheb,......mujhe behad acchi lagi aapki yeh ghazal.....

khayaal bohat hi sacche aur seedhe saadhe haiN...

yuhi likhte rahiye....



Zainy


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6th October 2009, 02:24 PM
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Bohat khoobsurat ehsaas haiN shyam saheb,......mujhe behad acchi lagi aapki yeh ghazal.....

khayaal bohat hi sacche aur seedhe saadhe haiN...

yuhi likhte rahiye....

Zainy Ji Aadab,

Tah-e-dil se shukriya jo aapne kalaam ko saraaha. Koshish karuNga ke aage aur bhi behtar likh sakuuN aur aap ke saamne pesh kar sakuuN.

Aap ke waqt ke liye fir se shukriya.
Khush rahiye,
Shyam

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
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Post 6th October 2009, 08:47 PM
thank u very much shyam isse post karne ke liye bohut hi khubsurat
ghazal hai

Har ek prem kahaani main,
mera hi kissa aata hai..........
surat main apni dekhu,
aur nazar woh aata hai..........
   
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