Teri umm'eed ki tapish se.........

[vikramjethi]

Teri umm'eed ki tapish se zinda hai.n ab tak varna hawa to bahut sard thee
Kar dete kaise teri yadoo.n ko Yak saar
drmiyaa.n hmaare vahi to ik taar thee
Hosh to huzn mei.n hi gaya tha kahi.n
Vo jo bolti thee vo shraab thee
Har oo'r tmaasha e' ishq hai barpa vo jo hm mei.n thee vo baat aur thee
Afsaane meri zaat ke bane to bahut
Baat jo uthi vo baat aur thee
Saaki to mehfil mei.n hai.n bahut
Vo jo tujh mei.n thee vo baat aur thee
Mere ashaar hi ab ha.n'ste hai.n mujh par
Aaine mei.n jo thee vo tasveer aur thee

[kwahish]

Wah Vikram jii...... Nice to know your thoughts....... Bahut khoobsuraat ahsaas hai aapke... nice post keep wrriting.. keep posting ...
This lines are too much good...

Teri umm'eed ki tapish se zinda hai.n
ab tak varna hawa to bahut sard thee
Saaki to mehfil mei.n hai.n bahut
Vo jo tujh mei.n thee vo baat aur thee
Mere ashaar hi ab ha.n'ste hai.n mujh par
Aaine mei.n jo thee vo tasveer aur thee

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[vikramjethi]

kwahish ji,

Aapki hausla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya....
Likhne waalon ko iski hmesha zaroorat rehti hai..

Vikram Jethi