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Rashk-ae-Khamer...... - 11th March 2013, 09:52 AM

Ghazal

Rashk-ae-Khamer nahin noon
Raushan seher nahin hoon

(Khamer-----moon)

Main aoongi palat ker
Mulk-ae-badar nahin hoon

(Mulk-ae-badar......driven away from country)

Hai maut maerae peechae
Main bae-Khaber nahin hoon

Jis main lagaen hoon kaantae
Main wo shajar nahin hoon

Kus ker kamer chaloongi
Tooti kamer nahin hoon

Much main hain phool pattae
Main bae-samer nahin hoon
(Samer----fruit)

Main hoon saber kii moorat
Main bae-saber nahin hoon

Mitti ki RAZ hoon main
Laal-o-goher nahin hoon

RAZIA YASMEEN RAZ
   
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11th March 2013, 10:51 AM

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Ghazal

Rashk-ae-Khamer nahin noon
Raushan seher nahin hoon

(Khamer-----moon)

Main aoongi palat ker
Mulk-ae-badar nahin hoon

(Mulk-ae-badar......driven away from country)

Hai maut maerae peechae
Main bae-Khaber nahin hoon

Jis main lagaen hoon kaantae
Main wo shajar nahin hoon

Kus ker kamer chaloongi
Tooti kamer nahin hoon

Much main hain phool pattae
Main bae-samer nahin hoon
(Samer----fruit)

Main hoon saber kii moorat
Main bae-saber nahin hoon

Mitti ki RAZ hoon main
Laal-o-goher nahin hoon

RAZIA YASMEEN RAZ


Masha Allaah... Raziya bahen....

Dil cheer ke rakh diyaa aapne.. kamaal ke sher kahe hain aapne ek se badhkar ek... subhan allaah.... Dard ki intehaan nazar aai hai is kalaam me... Allah tumhari zindgii khushiyon se bhar de... aur kare zore kalam aur bhi ziyaadah...

Shaad...


Shaad...
   
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11th March 2013, 11:00 AM

razia didi:

namaste!

bahot hi Khoob Ghazal... ehsaas dil ko Chhu gaye... yuuNhi aate rahiye... liKhate rahiye aage bhee... dil se daad

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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11th March 2013, 11:31 AM

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Ghazal

Rashk-ae-Khamer nahin noon
Raushan seher nahin hoon

(Khamer-----moon)

Main aoongi palat ker
Mulk-ae-badar nahin hoon

(Mulk-ae-badar......driven away from country)

Hai maut maerae peechae
Main bae-Khaber nahin hoon

Jis main lagaen hoon kaantae
Main wo shajar nahin hoon

Kus ker kamer chaloongi
Tooti kamer nahin hoon

Much main hain phool pattae
Main bae-samer nahin hoon
(Samer----fruit)

Main hoon saber kii moorat
Main bae-saber nahin hoon

Mitti ki RAZ hoon main
Laal-o-goher nahin hoon

RAZIA YASMEEN RAZ
Wah!.....kya baat hai....

Dil ko chu gayi aapki ghazal raziya saheba......

Yuhi likhti rahiye

Khush rahiye.....




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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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11th March 2013, 05:13 PM

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Masha Allaah... Raziya bahen....

Dil cheer ke rakh diyaa aapne.. kamaal ke sher kahe hain aapne ek se badhkar ek... subhan allaah.... Dard ki intehaan nazar aai hai is kalaam me... Allah tumhari zindgii khushiyon se bhar de... aur kare zore kalam aur bhi ziyaadah...

Shaad...
Tum Shaad raho , aabaad raho
Her glum sae Sadat aazaad raho
Shukriya kae much na-chez ka ae Kalam tumhaen pasand aya
Apnae hi ro main likhti chali jati hoon
Dil kii Aawaaz ghazal
Ghum ka andaaz ghazal
Maera Anjaam bhi ae
Maeri aaghaaz ghazal
Razia
   
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