Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Mai Koi Ashk Nahi................
Old
  (#1)
manvinder singh
THE HEART
manvinder singh will become famous soon enoughmanvinder singh will become famous soon enough
 
manvinder singh's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 134
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: MANN --- ME
Rep Power: 17
Mai Koi Ashk Nahi................ - 22nd March 2009, 11:02 PM

MAI KOI ASHK NAHI JO CHALAK JAU

MAI KOI KHWAB NAHI JO TOOT JAU

MAI KOI HAKIKAT NAHI JO BHULADO MUZKO

MAI KOI AFSAAN HANI JO DOHRAYA JAU

MAI KOI TAKDIR NAHI

MAI KOI TASWIR HANI

NA HU MAI KOI DARPAN

MAI HU BUS MAI , MAI HU " MANN '


MANN
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
Mayank
Registered User
Mayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comMayank is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Mayank's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 4,715
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Khariar, Odisha
Rep Power: 0
23rd March 2009, 09:21 AM

waah bohat khuub!

-Mayank
  Send a message via MSN to Mayank  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
manvinder singh
THE HEART
manvinder singh will become famous soon enoughmanvinder singh will become famous soon enough
 
manvinder singh's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 134
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: MANN --- ME
Rep Power: 17
24th March 2009, 05:04 PM

Dhanyawad Mayank Ji........... I'll Try To Improve More And More.............
Manvinder Singh


MANN
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
LAMHA
beautiful moment.........
LAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant futureLAMHA has a brilliant future
 
LAMHA's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 6,429
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: u.s.a
Rep Power: 42
24th March 2009, 06:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by manvinder singh View Post
MAI KOI ASHK NAHI JO CHALAK JAU

MAI KOI KHWAB NAHI JO TOOT JAU

MAI KOI HAKIKAT NAHI JO BHULADO MUZKO

MAI KOI AFSAAN HANI JO DOHRAYA JAU

MAI KOI TAKDIR NAHI

MAI KOI TASWIR HANI

NA HU MAI KOI DARPAN

MAI HU BUS MAI , MAI HU " MANN '


good one......keep it up........................


"LAMHA"

mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
  Send a message via Yahoo to LAMHA  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
manvinder singh
THE HEART
manvinder singh will become famous soon enoughmanvinder singh will become famous soon enough
 
manvinder singh's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 134
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: MANN --- ME
Rep Power: 17
24th March 2009, 06:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by LAMHA View Post
good one......keep it up........................
shukriya lamha ji..............
actualy i 've written it for my intro... in kavi sammelan , goshti's ...........etc..... thanks for giving an eye to it................ be in touch.................


MANN
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
Mujeeb
Registered User
Mujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud of
 
Offline
Posts: 2,855
Join Date: Sep 2007
Rep Power: 33
25th March 2009, 04:29 PM

kiyaa kehne

acha laga peRh ker

maiN hoN bus maiN "maiN hoN"


keep it up likhte rahiye
  Send a message via Yahoo to Mujeeb Send a message via AIM to Mujeeb Send a message via Skype™ to Mujeeb 
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
manvinder singh
THE HEART
manvinder singh will become famous soon enoughmanvinder singh will become famous soon enough
 
manvinder singh's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 134
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: MANN --- ME
Rep Power: 17
25th March 2009, 09:43 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mujeeb View Post
kiyaa kehne

acha laga peRh ker

maiN hoN bus maiN "maiN hoN"


keep it up likhte rahiye



आदरणीय मुजीब जी सर्व प्रथम मै आपको धन्यवाद् करता हु जो आपने अपना कीमती वक़्त मुझे दिया .........मुझे ऐसे हिसुझाव देते रहिये ताकि मुझमे और सुधार आ सके


MANN
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
Mujeeb
Registered User
Mujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud ofMujeeb has much to be proud of
 
Offline
Posts: 2,855
Join Date: Sep 2007
Rep Power: 33
25th March 2009, 10:18 PM

mujhe hindi nahi peRhna aati , app roman script maiN likh sakte haiN
  Send a message via Yahoo to Mujeeb Send a message via AIM to Mujeeb Send a message via Skype™ to Mujeeb 
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
manvinder singh
THE HEART
manvinder singh will become famous soon enoughmanvinder singh will become famous soon enough
 
manvinder singh's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 134
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: MANN --- ME
Rep Power: 17
26th March 2009, 08:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mujeeb View Post
mujhe hindi nahi peRhna aati , app roman script maiN likh sakte haiN

Dear mujeeb ji , i'm sorry for u'r inconvience , i'm thankful to u for u'r thougths and more ever for giving me u'r priceless time............ thanks for alll.................be with me................


MANN
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#10)
manvinder singh
THE HEART
manvinder singh will become famous soon enoughmanvinder singh will become famous soon enough
 
manvinder singh's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 134
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: MANN --- ME
Rep Power: 17
29th March 2009, 03:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mujeeb View Post
mujhe hindi nahi peRhna aati , app roman script maiN likh sakte haiN



Dear mujeeb ji , i'm sorry for u'r inconvience , i'm thankful to u for u'r thougths and more ever for giving me u'r priceless time............ thanks for alll.................be with me................


MANN
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#11)
kwahish
An Incomplite Dream
kwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud ofkwahish has much to be proud of
 
kwahish's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
29th March 2009, 03:45 PM

Maan Ji Maan gaye aapko bahut achche ahsas hai jatane ke liye.
Wonderful keep writting. good bless you. Thanks for sharing.


  Send a message via Yahoo to kwahish  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#12)
manvinder singh
THE HEART
manvinder singh will become famous soon enoughmanvinder singh will become famous soon enough
 
manvinder singh's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 134
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: MANN --- ME
Rep Power: 17
29th March 2009, 04:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by kwahish View Post
Maan Ji Maan gaye aapko bahut achche ahsas hai jatane ke liye.
Wonderful keep writting. good bless you. Thanks for sharing.


DHANYAWAD KWAHISH JI............... I M JUST TRYING TO BE..................


MANN
   
Reply With Quote
Reply


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Ashk mein shayar to Shayri-e-Dard 0 4th January 2007 12:22 AM
ashk nandan Shayri-e-Dard 3 16th May 2005 05:31 PM
Ashk kaifi Shayri-e-Ishq 0 22nd January 2005 01:33 PM
ashk kishor Shayri-e-Dard 2 27th October 2003 11:28 PM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com