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' Agar Daastaan-e-Ishq Apna SunaaegaaŽAmanush` -
11th November 2010, 03:16 AM
Ek muddat baad ishq forum par kuch pesh kar rahe heiN hum,
umeed hai ki hamari yaha koshish aapki nazron main jagah paayegi...!  Jaise chali gayi thi, yaqeen hai ussi tarha aayegi Issi moD par mujhse judaa houi issi jagha aayegi Jaanti hai koyi bhuula houa vaada nibhaanaa hai Wafaadaar itnaa hai woh zaroor issi vajha aayegi Kya nazaara thaa jab jaagi thi meri baahoN main Mann kehta rehtaa hai phir se wohi subha aayegi Eh waqt !Khudaa jaane kab se safar maiN ho tum Zaraa paas thahar jaana jab milne ko waha aayegi Shaayri ko meri naseem saa banaa do, mere Rab ! Saare haal-e-dil meri mahboobaa ko kaha aayegi Agar daastaan-e-ishq apna sunaaegaaŽAmanush` Mumkin hai ambar se ek nayi GaNga baha aayegi Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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11th November 2010, 09:06 AM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob har ashar pasand aaya bahut samay baad aapko ishq par likhte dekh achha laga daad dil se kubul karen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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11th November 2010, 10:10 AM
Danny bhaiya:
Pranaam! aik Khoobsoorat koShiSh ! dil Shaad-Shaad ho gayaa..! yeh Sher bahot hi pasand aaya Quote:
KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath jaazat jSk.. ! aapka ~Dhaval |
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11th November 2010, 05:33 PM
Kya nazaara thaa jab jaagi thi meri baahoN main
Mann kehta rehtaa hai phir se wohi subha aayegi Danny Bhai ! Namaste ! Iss Sher ke saath matlaa aur maqtaa bhi khaas panand bane humari ... bahut hi umdaa rahi aapki yeh peshkash ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th November 2010, 07:05 PM
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danny sahab aadab ,, wah kahen ya ahh ,, bahoth khoob ..dad behad o hisab khubool karen ...allah apko khush rakhe .. dua go qadeertoopchi |
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11th November 2010, 07:11 PM
Danny ji,
bahut khoob.... bahut achchi rahi aapki ye koshish... dil se daad hazir hai janab... yuhi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye...  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa koii hamnaam teraa , koii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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11th November 2010, 08:34 PM
hmmmmm..............bhaiya tusi te chaa gaye
 khoobsurat kalam se khoobsurat kalaam......daad hazir hai hamari taraf se regards aapki behan .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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11th November 2010, 09:00 PM
Kya nazaara thaa jab jaagi thi meri baahoN main
Mann kehta rehtaa hai phir se wohi subha aayegi Wah Boss, It's too good, You composition is full of emotions and love, i love every verse a lot, especially quoted verse, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th November 2010, 12:18 AM
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Shukriya jo aapne iss rachna ko pasand kiya, aaindaa ishq par jyaada likhne ki koshish kareiNge hum...! Aap ki daad sar ankhoN par Apna khuub khayaal rakheiN, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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14th November 2010, 03:10 PM
Jaise chali gayi thi, yaqeen hai ussi tarha aayegi
Issi moD par mujhse judaa houi issi jagha aayegi Jaanti hai koyi bhuula houa vaada nibhaanaa hai Wafaadaar itnaa hai woh zaroor issi vajha aayegi Kya nazaara thaa jab jaagi thi meri baahoN main Mann kehta rehtaa hai phir se wohi subha aayegi Ji ... pehle teeno sher bhaut khaas rahe .. very nice ......... Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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14th November 2010, 06:44 PM
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aadaab bahot khoob khaase dilchasp khiyaalat hain daad haazir hai masood hassaas |
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19th January 2011, 02:07 AM
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Jaan kar khushi bahut houi ki yaha rachna paDhkar aapke dil shaad shaad houa...! Aap ke daad sar ankhoN par...! YuN hi saath dete raheiN aur apna khayaal bhi thik se rakheiN, ok...? Aashirvaad ke saath Jai Shree KriShna Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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19th January 2011, 02:13 AM
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Aap ko yaha peshkash bhi pasand aayi so hum behad khush houe, aap ke aashirvaad saath rahe to aage bhi aise hi likhne ki koshish kareiNge...! Tah-e-dil se daad qabul hai...! Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...? Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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19th January 2011, 02:18 AM
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Iss rachna ke liye aap ke daad paakar bahut khushi houi...! Khudaa Ji aapko sadaa salaamat rakhe, yahi hamari duaa hai...! Apna khayaal rakheiN Regards Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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19th January 2011, 10:09 AM
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Bahot khoob janaabe aali bahot khoob... kya dilfareb kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne Danny bhai ki bas poocho mat... mazaa aa gaya bhai is pur-khuloos kalaam ko padhkar... likhte rahen bhai... Duaaon me yaad rakkhen. shaad... |
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13th December 2012, 11:56 PM
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We miss you...! With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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13th December 2012, 11:58 PM
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Apna khayaal rakhna, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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15th December 2012, 11:01 AM
behtareen gazal ke liye mubarakbad kubool karen janaab .....
Jaanti hai koyi bhuula houa vaada nibhaanaa hai Wafaadaar itnaa hai woh zaroor issi vajha aayegi Kya nazaara thaa jab jaagi thi meri baahoN main Mann kehta rehtaa hai phir se wohi subha aayegi ye ashaar kuch khas pasand aaye |
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15th December 2012, 05:48 PM
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Tasleemaat Danny jee.... MashaAllah kya baat haye.... the collection of gems both interms of poets like you and works like these amaze me each day... Aakhree do ashaar dil ko choo gayay! Dhayro daad qaboul frmayayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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18th December 2012, 10:56 PM
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Wah!...bohat khoob danny ji..... Its always a pleasure to read your ghazals....Infact i love every single line of it.... Waiting anxiously to read something new from your side..... Tc......:-) Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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