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Apne aap ko sazaa na do... -
25th April 2005, 08:47 PM
This poem is very close to my heart...it's a special one!
Apne aap ko sazaa na do Youn khamosh rehkar apne aap ko sazaa na do Khaataa meri hi to hai apne aap ko sazaa na do Apne aap ko sazaa na do… Iss pyaar ke phool ko bahaaron ki zarourat hai Iss tarha se toum khafaa hokar isse fizaa na do Apne aap ko sazaa na do… Aahein apni sanson se jyaada hoti jaa rahi hein Toum meri na rahi…iss dil ko ye andaazaa na do Apne aap ko sazaa na do… Kamzor hai ye dil mera kahin wo rouk na jaaye Jisse wo seh na sake eissa zakhm taazaa na do Apne aap ko sazaa na do… Toumko dekhne ki chaah meri ankhon main hai Dil ko sazaa do par meri ankhon ko sazaa na do Apne aap ko sazaa na do… Toumse mile bina iss jahaan se chala na jaaoun Amanush ko eissi baat kehne ka taqaazaa na do Apne aap ko sazaa na do… Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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Re: Apne aap ko sazaa na do... -
25th April 2005, 10:46 PM
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Aapke liye special hai...aur aapne humare saath share karke... humme special feel kara diya... thank u so much... Ab kuch aapki kavita ke baare mein Bahut khoob behtareen.... Kahin koi gehra raaz hai ismein shayad.... Likne wale ke lafzon mein nazar aata hai... Dil ki gehrai se keh raha hoon.... Bahut khoob likha hai aapne... A line from me... "A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Thanks Rohin |
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26th April 2005, 02:20 PM
Rohin Bhai...!
Kavita ko saraahkar aap ne ousse bahout hi barappan di hai... Aap ke ehsaanmand houn... A line from me... "A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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26th April 2005, 02:33 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin |
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26th April 2005, 02:40 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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26th April 2005, 02:50 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin |
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26th April 2005, 02:59 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin One line more "A drop of wine...I wish your lips could have the touch of it" Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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26th April 2005, 03:04 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin One line more "A drop of wine...I wish your lips could have the touch of it" Amanush... Another one liner "A drop of rain.....I wish I could hide my tears in it" Rohin |
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26th April 2005, 03:11 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin One line more "A drop of wine...I wish your lips could have the touch of it" Amanush... Another one liner "A drop of rain.....I wish I could hide my tears in it" Rohin One more "A drop of poison...I wish I could surrender my life in it" Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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26th April 2005, 03:16 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin One line more "A drop of wine...I wish your lips could have the touch of it" Amanush... Another one liner "A drop of rain.....I wish I could hide my tears in it" Rohin One more "A drop of poison...I wish I could surrender my life in it" Amanush... One more "A drop of oil....I wish I could burn like lamp in it" Rohin |
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26th April 2005, 03:22 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin One line more "A drop of wine...I wish your lips could have the touch of it" Amanush... Another one liner "A drop of rain.....I wish I could hide my tears in it" Rohin One more "A drop of poison...I wish I could surrender my life in it" Amanush... One more "A drop of oil....I wish I could burn like lamp in it" Rohin One more "A drop of milk...I wish I could have the pureness of it" Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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26th April 2005, 03:27 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin One line more "A drop of wine...I wish your lips could have the touch of it" Amanush... Another one liner "A drop of rain.....I wish I could hide my tears in it" Rohin One more "A drop of poison...I wish I could surrender my life in it" Amanush... One more "A drop of oil....I wish I could burn like lamp in it" Rohin One more "A drop of milk...I wish I could have the pureness of it" Amanush... One more "A drop of ink.... I wish I could put my feelings on paper with it" |
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26th April 2005, 03:47 PM
A line from me...
"A drop of water.....I wish I could hold on to it" Rohin A line from me too... "A drop of tear...I wish I could get drowned in it..." Amanush... A line again from me "A drop of dew....I wish to give you the sparkle in it" Rohin One line more from me "A drop of honey...I wish I could give you the sweetness in it" Amanush... One line again... "A drop of blood...I wish I could show your name in it" Rohin One line more "A drop of wine...I wish your lips could have the touch of it" Amanush... Another one liner "A drop of rain.....I wish I could hide my tears in it" Rohin One more "A drop of poison...I wish I could surrender my life in it" Amanush... One more "A drop of oil....I wish I could burn like lamp in it" Rohin One more "A drop of milk...I wish I could have the pureness of it" Amanush... One more "A drop of ink.... I wish I could put my feelings on paper with it" One more "A drop of the ocean...I wish I could compare the depth of your feelings with it" Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Re: Apne aap ko sazaa na do... -
28th April 2005, 03:22 PM
Apne aap ko sazaa na do
Youn khamosh rehkar apne aap ko sazaa na do Khaataa meri hi to hai apne aap ko sazaa na do Iss pyaar ke phool ko bahaaron ki zarourat hai Iss tarha se toum khafaa hokar isse fizaa na do WaaaH... khoobsurat sher!! Aahein apni sanson se jyaada hoti jaa rahi hein Toum meri na rahi…iss dil ko ye andaazaa na do Kamzor hai ye dil mera kahin wo rouk na jaaye Jisse wo seh na sake eissa zakhm taazaa na do Beautiful... Very beautiful!! Toumko dekhne ki chaah meri ankhon main hai Dil ko sazaa do par meri ankhon ko sazaa na do Toumse mile bina iss jahaan se chala na jaaoun Amanush ko eissi baat kehne ka taqaazaa na do Waaaaahhh... !!! Bhaiya! Ek baar fir aapki saadgi ka main kaayal ho gaya hoon... kya khoobsurat tareeke se aapne har ehsaas kaha hai....Mujhe bahut pasand aaya....Basss yun hi likhte rhaiyega... meri daad to apke saath hi hai!!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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1st May 2005, 05:43 PM
Hi Chote Bhai...I
Toumne iss baar bhi hamari choti si koshish ko pasand kiya...ahobhagya hamara! Yuonhi daad dete rehna... aur hum likhte rehne ki koshish kareinge...! Amanush Bhaiya...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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20th May 2005, 11:09 PM
Hi Amanush,
its really nice..........very touchy also.........................i liked it very much........ Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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21st May 2005, 12:11 AM
Isse pasand karne ke liye Bahout Shukiya...Nidhi ji!
Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st May 2005, 09:53 AM
Amanush...
tumhe padhna humesha achha laga hai........ meena |
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2nd June 2005, 03:24 AM
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Dhanyavaad Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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31st January 2012, 09:38 AM
Amanush,Ji
Iss pyaar ke phool ko bahaaron ki zarourat hai.. Aapki ye peshkash bahut hi sundar saarthak aur vajandar hai..... khus rahiyegaa............ meri duaa hai.... http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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