Khuda-hafiz...

[Saddia]

Ek koshish jo dil se niklee hai...

Muqddar hee hamara kuch easa huva hai
Kyo naa hum easaa koyii gunnaah kar le
Ke mere Bhagwaan ko bhi Khuda hafiz keh de hum
Rukhii ankon se rukhsat kartee hu ab tujhe
Rehatin hu ab wahaan jahaan tum nahi hote

[ghayalparwana]

Ke Khuda ko bhi Khuda hafiz keh de hum

Wah saddia ji!kahan se aaya aapke zehan mein aisa khyaal..aapki soch ki daat deni padegi..

Likhte rahiye
Ghayalparwana

[abidhussain]

hi saadia,
kya baat hai.khud to gunehgaar ho rahi ho..upar se tareef karne wale bhi saath ho rahe hai..khud aki khudaai koi cheez ya to koi shaqs ki tarah nahi hai jisse chutkara mila jaa sake..
Qaafir bhi allah ki bandagi nahi karta hai magar usse bach nahi sakta..
YAAD RAKHO,,"CHAND TAREEFE HAASIL KARNE KE LIYE KUFR NA KARO"
ALLAH TUMHE NEK HIDAYAT DE..

[Saddia]

ghayalparwana jee...shukriya ap ki tarifh karne ka.....


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abidhussain...Janaab..
shukriyaa mashware kaa..wese ek baat bataye hum ap koo humarii baat shayaad ap nahi samjh sake humnne uparwale ki shaan main gusthakii nahi kee hain...woh ek soch hain jiise humne khuda kaha thaa..khair sorry gar ap ko bura laga tau....aur ek baat ap ke liye ke ap namoo se kisi ko muslamaa ya kafir na kahen......hamara koyee mazab nahi hai sirfh hum insaan ban jaye tau thik hoga hamare liye...haan par apke liye hum ne iss poem ko badal diyaa hai. ab ap ki pareshani ka vaiiz hum na honge...!!!!!!!!!!

Muqddar hee hamara kuch easa huva hai
Kyo naa hum easaa koyii gunnaah kar le
Ke mera Bhagwaan ko bhi Khuda hafiz keh de hum
Rukhii ankon se rukhsat kartee hu ab tujhe
Rehatin hu ab wahaan jahaan tum nahi hote

[abidhussain]

hi saddia,
samajh me nahi aa raha hai tumne kya likha hai.
ise mashwara bhi kaha hai, shukriya ada bhi kiya hai,fir sorry bhi kaha hai, fir hamare liye isme tabdili bhi layi hai..????samajh me nahi a raha hai kuch,waise agar aap pehle insaan banna chahti hai to vo bhi to nemat allah ki di hui hai or insaan to har koi hai magar musalmaan bohot chand log..or mujhe koi etraaz nahi tum isme koi chabge lau ya nahi kyuke dekhnewala to upar baitha hai.
Ham to uski raza ke liye kaam karte hai or uski gustakhi hamse bardhasht nahi ho sakti..agar aap ko hamari baat na samajhme aaaye to hamari friend "zahra" se kuch mashwara le lena, vo tumhe samjha dengi hum kaise mujahid hai..

[Saddia]

abidhussain janaab..........ap ko hamari baten samjh main nahi atee hain tau kyoo ap ye koshish kar rahe hoo kii hum kuch samjhe..ap ki pareshanii dur kardee hain humne..aur bakii baten mazabii tau ye woh jagah nahi hai ki hum iis mauzu par ap se gufhtagoo karen..humare satha joo kuch bhii ho usske jimmedar hum khud hain ap ko pareshaan hone ki koyee jarurat nahi hai aur nahi hume kisi se kuch puchne jana hain..behatar hoga ki ab iis mozu par aur koyee bate na hoo..

Ap ke liye mirza sahaab ki gazal pesh haii

hazaaro.n Khvaahishe.n aisii ki har Khvaaish pe dam nikale
bahut nikale mere armaa.N lekin phir bhii kam nikale


Dare kyuu.N meraa qaatil kyaa rahegaa usakii gardan par
vo Khuu.N jo chashm-e-tar se umr bhar yuu.N dam-ba-dam nikale


[chashm=eye; tar=wet; dam_ba_dam=continously]


nikalanaa Khuld se aadam kaa sunate aaye hai.n lekin
bahut be-aabaruu hokar tere kuuche se ham nikale


[Khuld=Paradise; be-aabaruu=disgrace; kuuchaa=street]


bharam khul jaaye zaalim tere qaamat kii daraazii kaa
agar is turraa-e-purapech-o-Kham kaa pech-o-Kham nikale


[qaamat=stature; daraazii=length/delay; turra=ornamental tassel worn in the turban]
[pech-o-Kham=curls in the hair]


magar likhavaaye koii usako Khat to hamase likhavaaye
huii subah aur ghar se kaan par rakkhar qalam nikale


huii is daur me.n ma.nsuub mujhase baadaa-ashaamii
phir aayaa vo zamaanaa jo jahaa.N se jaam-e-jam nikale


[ma.nsuub=association, baada_aashaamee=havign to do with drinks]


huii jinase tavaqqo Khastagii kii daad paane kii
vo hamase bhii ziyaadaa Khastaa-e-teG-e-sitam nikale


[tavaqqo=expectation; Khastagii=injury, daad=justice]
[Khasta=broken/sick/injured, teG=sword, sitam=cruelity ]


muhabbat me.n nahii.n hai farq jiine aur marane kaa
usii ko dekh kar jiite hai.n jis kaafir pe dam nikale


zara kar jor siine par ki tiir-e-pursitam nikale
jo vo nikle to dil nikale jo dil nikale to dam nikale


Khudaa ke vaaste pardaa na kaabe se uThaa zaalim
Kahii.n aisaa na ho yaa.N bhii vahii kaafir sanam nikale


Kahaa.N maiKhaane ka daravaazaa 'Ghalib' aur kahaa.N vaaiz
par itanaa jaanate hai.n kal vo jaataa thaa ke ham nikale


[vaaiz=preacher]

[abidhussain]

hi saddia, lagta hai aap meri bato ka bura maan gayi..accha chalo thik hai ab hum is par koi baat nahi karenge or ha...hame mirza ghalib ki ye ghazal bohot pasand hai or aapka teh-dil se shukriya ada karte hai ki aapne hamare liye ye zehmat uthayi..
aapka bohot bohot shukriya!!
to mai ummeed karunga ki hum ab se aache dost hai???
aapke jawab ka intezaar hoga!!
Allah-hafiz!!

[Saddia]

abidhussain janaab

Chaloo achha huva jo ap iss mozu par koyi guftagu nahi kari..shukriya!!!dost hone ki bat hai tau ye tau waqt batayega ki hum ache dost bante hai ki nahi..khuda hafiz