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Love pyaar ki dor - 24th January 2003, 12:21 PM

mere tumhaare beech yeh jo ek kachhi si dor hai pyaar ki
usi dor se bandhi hai zindgaani meri
kabhi naa todnaa ye mujhse apna taaluq tum
ki khatm ho jaayegi zindgi ki kahaani meri

Maine chaaha tumko tut kar yeh khabar sabhi ko hai
hai agar bekhabar koi to sirf tu hi sanam
main na kar saki koi bhi shikwaa tujhse
Bhale hi aas tujhe paane ki ho chali khatm

Mere dil mein tujhe khone ka dard hai kitna
yeh to kaise woh samjhega jisne paaya tujhe
main bhale tujhe yaad ek pal naa aayee
magar maine kabhi ek pal bhi nahi bhulaaya tujhe


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24th January 2003, 10:43 PM

hi mahima! bohot hi acha likha apne. ésp to last 4 lines dil ko bohot lagi. kyuki aksar log dilon ke rishton ko bhula dete hai. jo aisa nahin kar pate sari zindagi bas wohi yaad rakhte hai.
well said!


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