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Exclamation mujhko SAAWAN ke aane ka intezaar hai...!! - 11th July 2010, 12:59 PM

ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!


Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!




Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….


Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………



BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….



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11th July 2010, 01:12 PM

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ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!


Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!

wow............................kya mast mast likha hai


Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….


Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………



BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….



ab ke jo aayega saawaN,
apne rang meiN tuje,
rang loongi maiN saajaN,
rakh looNgi dunia se chuppa ke,
apne aaknkoN ka kaajal bana ke.

Dear Lucky............sawaaN to muje bhi bahut pasand hai, barish meiN bheegna aur aur aur.......barish meiN bheegne ka bhi alag majja hai aur barish meiN jab dard uthta hai dil mein to bhi alag hi sakooN deta hai dil ko....aapne bahut accha likha hai.....maine bhi do lafz likh diye haiN, zara masti meiN aakar, aapki poetry pasand hi etni aaye ki main bhi likhe bina na rah saki.

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Baarish ki boondoN me bheege romaani ehsaas padhke accha laga...
kahiiN antar ko giilaa karte lage mujhe....Lucky Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen...khush rahen...

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ab ke jo aayega saawaN,
apne rang meiN tuje,
rang loongi maiN saajaN,
rakh looNgi dunia se chuppa ke,
apne aaknkoN ka kaajal bana ke.

Dear Lucky............sawaaN to muje bhi bahut pasand hai, barish meiN bheegna aur aur aur.......barish meiN bheegne ka bhi alag majja hai aur barish meiN jab dard uthta hai dil mein to bhi alag hi sakooN deta hai dil ko....aapne bahut accha likha hai.....maine bhi do lafz likh diye haiN, zara masti meiN aakar, aapki poetry pasand hi etni aaye ki main bhi likhe bina na rah saki.

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bahut der se jawab dene ke lye maafi ka talabgaar hun, par thoda shayri ki taraf rukh nahin kar paya tha, aapki daad sar aankhon pe umeed karta huN aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate raheNge.....!!



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ghayal bhai , jaan hi nikaal di aapne, mere yahan badal to hai'n par barish nahi'n,aapki is nazam ne is qadar bijli girai dil pe ki maine phone uthaya aur unke shahar ki barish ka haal poochhte poochhte balance hi khatam ho gya, please recharge karva do na,
Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
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Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!


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Lucky ji ,
yahan barish 3din se lagatar ho rahi hai ....
upar se aapki yeh rachna ......saawan bhi padh le to pani mein aag lag jayegi
very romantic ji
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ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!


Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!




Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….


Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………



BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….
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ghayal bhai , jaan hi nikaal di aapne, mere yahan badal to hai'n par barish nahi'n,aapki is nazam ne is qadar bijli girai dil pe ki maine phone uthaya aur unke shahar ki barish ka haal poochhte poochhte balance hi khatam ho gya, please recharge karva do na,
Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!


Samne ye koun aya dil me hui halchal
dekh ke bas ek hi jhalak ho gae hum ghayal

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ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!


Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!




Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….


Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………



BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….
Bahut khoob lucky ji, kya baat hai..... .....dil se daad hazir hai qubool kijiyega.....


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Ghayal sahab AadaaB!

Wah janab Ghayal bhi ho aur aise khayaal....
Janab aapki is romantic sawaaN ki bunde to kafi damdaar rahi kya baat hai waqai bahut umdaa likha hai aapne..... ahsaas aise the ke mann machal utha....

Wel Aapka ab ka sawaN yaadoN meiN guzra hai to dua karuNga ke agla sawaaN in khawaboN ko pura karke guzre.....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez........


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Lucky ji ,
yahan barish 3din se lagatar ho rahi hai ....
upar se aapki yeh rachna ......saawan bhi padh le to pani mein aag lag jayegi
very romantic ji
daad kabul kijiye

apna khayal rakhiye
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ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!


Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!




Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….


Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………



BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….
bahut khoob ghayal ji....
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ahl-e-bazm ko nacheez ka aadaab, Barish ho rahi hai baahar, aur mujhe barsaat humesha se bahut jyada pasand rahi hai... par kuch dino pehle hue ek accdny ke kaaran maiN is barish me dhang se bheeg v nahiN paa raha, par koi nahiN, sawan pe hi kuch likh daalte haiN.....!!


Abki baar jo aaya saawan,, baarish me bheega tera wo badan,, mujhse aa kar lipatna tera,, aur kehna saajan, saajan,, bearish ki booNdoN ki wo khan-khan, khan-khan,, teri payaliya ki chan-chan, chan-chan,, vichlit hota mera mann,, abki baar jo aaya saawan…………………..!!!!




Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai………….


Wo biNdiya,wo pallu,wo kaajal,wo kangana,
Hai yaad ab v, humse tera wo milna,
Wo saawan ki bearish me tera aana,
Mujhse lipat ke thoda sharmaana….!

Bearish ki booNdoN me tera hi deedaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Wo bearish me tera mujhko bhigaana,
Kagaz ki kashti me sapne bahaana,
Saawan me tera wo mujhko saajan bulaana,
Bhula nai jaata wo saawan deewaana…..!

Tujhse fir milne ko dil beqaraar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………



BadaloN ka,humara pyar asmaN se chupana,
Tera wo mujhko pallu me sehlaana,
Jab v aashiqoN ke bare me pooche zamaana,
To saawan ka humari kahani sabko sunaana….!

Kya bataauN,tujhse mohabbat kitni beshumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse……………


Mujhko saawan ke aane ka intezaar hai,
Wo v sajni ki yaadoN me shumaar hai,
Mujhko tumse, haaN tumse, sirf tumse hi pyar hai……….
lucky bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob likha hai aapne dil se daad


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Ghayal sahab AadaaB!

Wah janab Ghayal bhi ho aur aise khayaal....
Janab aapki is romantic sawaaN ki bunde to kafi damdaar rahi kya baat hai waqai bahut umdaa likha hai aapne..... ahsaas aise the ke mann machal utha....

Wel Aapka ab ka sawaN yaadoN meiN guzra hai to dua karuNga ke agla sawaaN in khawaboN ko pura karke guzre.....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez........
samer bhai aap aaye, aur aako lekhan pasand aaya, jaan kar dil ko behad khushi hui, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aapka saath yuNhi bana rahe...!!



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last one is tooo.. good....
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ishq ji pranaam, kaise haiN aap, bas yunhi saath dete rahiye....!!



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