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tere naam ka kutta pala......... -
9th April 2010, 01:18 PM
kya kahun doston ek dost hua karta tha kisi zamane me waqt ke sath sath wo bhi badal gaya bhool gaya apni dosti ja baitha kisi aur ki mehfil me...........ussi dost ke naam ka maine ek kutta pala aur dekhiye us naam ka us kutte par assar ke wo bhi wafadar na raha...........
 tere naam ka kutta pala tere jaisa dhila dhala sabse hai yaari uski bagal me rahti pyari* uski din bhar chhat par mara sa rahta khana pani bas dhara sa rahta halat uski dekhi na jaye karun kya kuch samajh na aaye vaidh - hakeem sabko dikhlaya marz uska koi bata na paya ek din padosi ghar par aaya sang apne wo pyari laya tabhi raja babu niche aaye pyari ne bhi diye nayan milaye kutta mera kuch badal gaya tha ishq me wo fisal gaya tha marz uska kuch kuch samajh me aaya padosi ko bhi hamne samjhaya ban kazi unka nikah padwaya apne kutte ko marne se bachaya ab uska chhat par jana nahi hota apna ghar bhi ab thikana nahi hota kabhi kabhi ghar bhi aata hai warna to pados se hi aawaz lagata hai shukKar hai tere naam ka sher nahi pala warna main hi hota tera pehla niwala pyari - mere tommy ki timmi mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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9th April 2010, 02:39 PM
Ha ha ha ha h..............
Secret sahab achcha likha hai.... shabdon se khelne ka hunar bahut hai aap mein... Bahut khoob............ Daad hazir hai........... janab aajkal koun wafadaar hai duniyaa ka sabs bada neta bhi gaddar hai.... o bechara kuta kahan se wafadaar rahenga.. 
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9th April 2010, 06:33 PM
wahhhhhhhhhh.... janab.... aap to ghazab dhaane lage hai.... shabdon ki jugalbandi bahut khoob hai... dil se daad...
ek guzarish hai aapse...aap achcha likhte ho... kyu na kabhi koi serious topic pe bhi likha jaye... intezaar rahega aapki sanjeeda shayri ka.... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye....   "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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9th April 2010, 07:09 PM
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apki tareef ne to seena fula diya........ aisa laga mano suraj khud diye se kah raha ho ke teri roshni kamal hai.............  apki yehi baatein to apka kayal bana deti hain mujhe...... apka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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9th April 2010, 07:18 PM
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 apka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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8th May 2010, 07:51 PM
waah waah 'gupt' bhai sahab... Bahut he badhiya aur romanchak poem pesh ki hai... Haste -2 paet phool gaya
aapne 'tommy'* se dosti achhi tarah nibhayi hai... Uske na hote hue bhi uski shadi jo karayi hai....!!! Ab 'tommy'# bhi aapse wafa karta rahega... Aapke padosi k yaha he susu karta rahega...!!! Fir kuch mahino baad aapki shamat aayegi... Jab 'timmy' 6 bachho k saath aapke ghar rehne aayegi..!! *= human dost #= kutta dost khair.... rachna ne aapki dil khus kar diya tfs |
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26th May 2010, 09:44 PM
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waise kisi ne kya khub kaha hai "shuk'R hai ke main wafadar nahi hoon wafadar to kutte hotein hain" mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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30th May 2010, 04:42 PM
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SADA LIKHATE RAHE BAHUT HI ACHI TARAH LIKHA HE APANE SADA KHUSH Rahe |
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30th May 2010, 06:25 PM
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namaste, aapko meri haasya kavita pasand aayi, aapne isse saraha apka bahut bahut dhanyawad, aasha karta hoon aage bhi issi tarah mera sath deti rahengi............ aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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31st May 2010, 11:12 AM
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31st May 2010, 11:34 AM
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Waise sher paalne ka khayaal b acha lga mujhe..... Regards, Kavita Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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31st May 2010, 01:39 PM
Buland bhai........................
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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31st May 2010, 02:15 PM
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rahi baat sher paalne ki to aaj kal desh me sher bache hi kahan hain aur jo hain bhi wo sab kutte hi hai jo sher ka mukhota pahan ke ghum rahe hain......... mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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3rd June 2010, 02:41 PM
aapne to kutton ki bhi wafadari ko insano ki wafadari ke barabar bata diya
 waise hanste hanste pait me dard ho gaya mere yaar humourous shayari me plz. likhte rahiye........ |
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3rd June 2010, 08:01 PM
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aur insanoon ke barabar meri kaya majal ke kutto.N ko rakhun  insaan to ............kya hain apko bhi malum hai aur mujhe bhi......... aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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11th June 2010, 06:02 PM
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ek choti si koshish thi meri sabko haNsane ki lagta hai kamyab rahi....... yuhin sath dete rahiyega aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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12th June 2010, 11:04 PM
Secret admirer saaheb, Kunaal bhaa'ii aur sabhee doston:
aap sab se yahee darKhaast haii ki kahiin bhee ees tarah ki gandi bhaasa kaa istemaal ko'ii bhee member Gar kar rahaa hoN tou aap moderators ko inform zaruur kare.n! waise tou hum threads check karte hi haiN par saath hi saath aap sab ki bhee utni hi zimmedaari banti hai! derii ke liye mai.n aap se M'waafii maangataa huuN..!kyuuNki merii nazar haal hi meN ees Thread par paDii! duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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13th June 2010, 05:34 PM
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deri ki koi baat nahi hai "der aaye par durusst aaye" aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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