pita ji

komalparveen · 11:49 AM

Zainy ji ki nazam maa se inspire ho ke "pita ji" nazam likhi hai,koshish achhi hai likhta rahunga.Apko bhi pakka pasand aegi, Guaranty hai bhaa ji,
Irshaad keejie.

DostoN bohat dinoN se soch rahi tha ke PITA JI title per kuch likhuN, chaliye GTM per "PITA JI"..topic per contest chal raha hai tou isi bahane maine bhi kuch likhne koi koshish ki hai..

Ummid hai aap sab ko pasand aayega...

Yeh nazm mere pyaare Baapu ke naam.............................

Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa........

Hai uljhan dimaag ki band ho gai ghadi hai
Meri teacher hai zaalim aur bedard badi hai,
Danda neem ka haathoN me liye khadi hai
Is teacher se mujhko bacha lena..
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa........

Kya sochkar school me mujhe daala tuune
Mera bag kiun nahin sambhala tuune
NaazoN ka maara mujhko bhaala tuune
Ghar ate hi danda mat uthaa lena
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa.......

Ghar ke bartan agar tootenge
Mom ji apse jaroor roothenge
Gilass pyale phuutenge
Dust bin mein samaa lena
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa.......

Hai bas chaante meri raahoN meiN
Mai awara hoon sabki nigahoN meiN
Kitna sukoon hai pizza parlour ki raahoN meiN
Ek do ghoont sprite ke lagaa lena
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa.......

-komal-

janumanu · 18th June 2010, 12:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by komalparveen

Zainy ji ki nazam maa se inspire ho ke "pita ji" nazam likhi hai,koshish achhi hai likhta rahunga.Apko bhi pakka pasand aegi, Guaranty hai bhaa ji,
Irshaad keejie.

DostoN bohat dinoN se soch rahi tha ke PITA JI title per kuch likhuN, chaliye GTM per "PITA JI"..topic per contest chal raha hai tou isi bahane maine bhi kuch likhne koi koshish ki hai..

Ummid hai aap sab ko pasand aayega...

Yeh nazm mere pyaare Baapu ke naam.............................

Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa........

Hai uljhan dimaag ki band ho gai ghadi hai
Meri teacher hai zaalim aur bedard badi hai,
Danda neem ka haathoN me liye khadi hai
Is teacher se mujhko bacha lena..
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa........

Kya sochkar school me mujhe daala tuune
Mera bag kiun nahin sambhala tuune
NaazoN ka maara mujhko bhaala tuune
Ghar ate hi danda mat uthaa lena
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa.......

Ghar ke bartan agar tootenge
Mom ji apse jaroor roothenge
Gilass pyale phuutenge
Dust bin mein samaa lena
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa.......

Hai bas chaante meri raahoN meiN
Mai awara hoon sabki nigahoN meiN
Kitna sukoon hai pizza parlour ki raahoN meiN
Ek do ghoont sprite ke lagaa lena
Apni 8vi class me fail ho jaun to,
Pita ji mujhko tu chupaa lenaa.......

-komal-

mazaa aa gayaa
aur bahut sahi, likha hai ...

repsss for this

komalparveen · 20th June 2010, 08:45 AM

thanks janu ji, bhut mehrbaani