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ek baar -
27th January 2003, 11:14 PM
ek baar hi sahi tum palatkar to dekhte
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PAPULA JI -
7th February 2003, 07:33 AM
hi, kaise hai aap? bahut hi acha likha hai agar soche tho. aise hi likhte rehega plz
take care Ishiqka |
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7th February 2003, 08:08 AM
acha likha hai aapne.. ab meri taraf se chand lines jo aapka sher paD kar likhi haiN..
wafa dhuuNdne yaar tum kahaaN chal paDe koii us taraf dekhta nahiiN tum jahaaN chal paDe waise, umeed rakhta huuN ki aap agli baar izse lambii rachna likheN ge  aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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7th February 2003, 07:18 PM
Hi Ishiqka and Aman !!
Thanks for signning in. I am not a serious exibitor of thoughts through ink, therefor do not get to go beyond three four lines. Bas aap sabko salaam karnay chala aata hoon. Gustakhiyon ki maafi chahata hoon. paplu. |
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