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8th September 2014, 09:13 PM
Vo tera neela libaas
Aankho me kajal Hothon pe laali maathe pe bindiya Aur haathon me choodi Mujhe tera vo roop Aaj bhi yaad hai Kyonki usi din tune Aankho me aansu Hothon pe kampan Maathe pe silwat Aur haathon me mera haath Lekr kaha tha, 'main aaj ke baad nahin mil paungi'.... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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8th September 2014, 09:30 PM
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shabdon mein bayan kar diye ... khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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8th September 2014, 10:29 PM
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ayk mukhtasir si nazm mayn aap nay ayk daryaa e jazbaat o dard baandha haye.. Buhat aalatareen andaaz e bayaaN! Ahmad |
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8th September 2014, 11:07 PM
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thats sad................................. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th September 2014, 09:41 AM
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Aru bhai...aap thode se lafzoN meiN bahut badi badi baat keh jaate ho...yeh aapki khoobi hai. god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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9th September 2014, 11:19 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!
Arvind jii,, Bohat kamaal ka likha hai ... waqai qaabil-e-tehseen hai, thoDay lafzoN meiN dil ki poori baat keH di aap ne .. hur lafz meiN ishQ hi ishQ jhalak raha hai.... dard hi dard tapak raha hai... bas daad hi daad... Likhte rahiye,, DuaooN ke saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2014, 01:16 PM
bahut hi khoob Aru bhai kyaa kahun, ise padh kar to patthar bhi pighal gaye.... jawaab nahii iskaa..... superbb
Shaad.... |
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9th September 2014, 06:53 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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9th September 2014, 11:38 PM
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10th September 2014, 11:51 AM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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10th September 2014, 12:07 PM
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Bahut umdah arvind ji......insaani jajbaaton ke kuch unchuye paheluon ko saamne laati hai nazm.....ek sawaal bhi chod jaati hai zehan me .......aapko dhero mubaarakbaad bahut umdah......lajawaab... Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !! (Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab') |
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10th September 2014, 01:25 PM
waaaaaaah waaahhhhhhhhh aru bhaaiiiiiiii
bahut kuch kahti aapki ye rachnaa............. Quote:
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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11th September 2014, 11:29 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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15th September 2014, 07:13 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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19th September 2014, 06:43 AM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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kaafi dard bhari nazm taiyar ki hai aapne its very touching aruji.......awesome. |
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19th September 2014, 07:41 AM
Achcha hai ..inFact bahut achcha hai....bhai mere... ....kamaal ki punch line hai...main aaj Ke baad mil nahi paaungi ...
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17th October 2014, 10:57 AM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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17th October 2014, 11:02 AM
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hmmmmmmmmmmm.............aisa kya  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd October 2014, 08:17 AM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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13th May 2015, 09:53 PM
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';468154]bahut hi khoob Aru bhai kyaa kahun, ise padh kar to patthar bhi pighal gaye.... jawaab nahii iskaa..... superbb
Shaad....[/QUOT Thanx a lot shoiab jee......aapka saath yun hee bana rahe................ एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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27th May 2015, 09:42 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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28th May 2015, 12:02 PM
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Waah Arvind bhai bahut sundar radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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29th May 2015, 10:16 PM
Dear aru ji
jaha sach likha jaata hai vaha creation/poety/shayri kai baar nahi banati.. per uski chap bahut gahari hoti hai.. aapne ek line me bahut kuchh bayan kiye hain.. ek line mujhe mere hi likh aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai ki yaad aa gayi.. akhiri baar jab hum milea thea diary de-ke tujhe juda ho rahe thea tu kitana royee thi !!!!! meri aankho ko ashko se bhigoyi thi hum gale mile thea tum mujhe nahi chhod rahi thi vah pal jo mere jeevan me tu jod rahi thi.. aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai.. aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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