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Plz...read This Once -
11th May 2004, 10:55 AM
gira ek moti aankh se aaj phir
juda ek apna dil se aaj phir rehta hai har waqt patjhar ka mausam na jaane aayi kyon bahar aaj phir I KNOW IT'S NOT THAT GUD...BUT I DO NOT KNOW URDU..ALTHOUGH I LOVE SHAYRI AND ALSO A REGULAR VISITOR OF SHAYRI.COM...ACTUALLY,THIS SHER WAS COMPOSED WHEN I REMEMBERED SOME1 VERY CLOSE TO MY HEART.. THANKX 4 READING THIS! BUBYE  aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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ruchi..... this is LUV + KHUSH =SURYA |
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ruchi..... this is LUV + KHUSH =SURYA -
11th May 2004, 11:26 AM
HEY RUCHI,
FANTASTIC MAN, WHAT IF U DONNO URDU? U HAVE DONNIT BETTER YAAR. COOL DATS TOUCHING MAN. MY PRAYER WILL ALWAYS BE WITH U AND ONE MORE THING LET THAT FELLA WHO IS IN YOUR HEART BE SOON NEAR U...  KEEP POSTING GOOD ONES... TILL DEN ITSME LUV + KHUSH =SURYA |
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11th May 2004, 11:28 AM
Hey Ruchika,
A poem written from the heart is always good, just like yours Keep visiting our little world of shayri here, we always have room for more poets! Jahaan bhi ho khush rehna hameshaa --Anu |
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Bahut khoob |
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Bahut khoob -
11th May 2004, 11:44 AM
Bahut saral shabdoN se aapne bahut achchha keh diya hai....
YooNhi likhte rahiyega. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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11th May 2004, 02:34 PM
thankx suresh,anupama and chand ji,thank u all 4 reading this aand commenting on this.i am really very happy.
as suresh,now i do not want that person to be with me and chand,i am a grt fan of urs.thankx. anupama ji...bahut shukriya aapka ki aapne yeh padha bye frnds... ruchika...a true friend aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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5th July 2004, 11:55 PM
gira ek moti aankh se aaj phir
juda ek apna dil se aaj phir rehta hai har waqt patjhar ka mausam na jaane aayi kyon bahar aaj phir ************************************************* its good one... thode se words change kerke dekhte hain....... gira ek moti aankh se iss kadar huaa ye dil"beqraar" aaj phir meri jist me thee patjhar ki shirkat uski yaad lekar aayi bahaar aaj phir" well.. waise jo tumne likha wo bhee kaafi accha thaa. you know my first poetry was... kal bhee mai yahee kehta thaa,or aaj bhee mera yahi nara hai ye tera nahi ye mera nahi, ye bharat desh humara hai, you will definatly improve because you got the whole life waiting for you ..but be enthusiastic and bleave me.. because you can understand depth of poetrys in such a young age.. tumhare ander bhee koi na koi shayar jaroor chupa baitha hai.. just nourish your art and i will be there to tell you how to do it.. keep on writeing izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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kya yaar! -
6th July 2004, 09:11 PM
vaise,thankx for replying karan
par pata hai,kisi ki shayri,chahe woh acchi ho ya buri,badal kar dekhne ka sochna bhi nahi chahiye!koi baat nahin,par phir kabhi mat karna,plz ! ruchi-a true friend aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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