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teri tasveer...... - 19th December 2005, 04:22 AM

Salam..jus something i felt and poured it here.. forgive me for any mistakes ..since i m not so good with shayri's but can only try to..

teri tasveer dehk kar hum kuch aise dooba karte hai..
na jaane tumhai hum itna pyar kuy karte hai..

bheege bheege hum barsaat mein chala karte hai..
har boond mein tumhai kuch aise ehsaas kiya karte hai..

raato ki tanhayee mein chaat pe baitha karte hai..
sitaro mein tumhai dhek kar hum dil ke aafsaane likha karte hai..

Samandar ke kinare hum kuch aise khooya karte hai..
darya-e-dil mein tumhai kuch aise dhoonda karte hai..

"Falak" ko dheke hum kuch aise gungunaya karte hai..
Har zindagi mein tumhai paaoo khuda se yeh duaa karte hai

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19th December 2005, 04:56 AM

Hmm mashallah bahaut acchi koshish lagi aapki....
agar yeh aapka pehla kalaam hai toh bas yahi kahungi ke pehli baar ke liye bahaut umda hai...yuhin likhte rehna...practice makes a man perfect....welcome to shayri pariwaar..bye


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