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Peeta hu..... - 20th April 2006, 05:39 AM

Naya hu .. kuch ehsaas ko kalam ke zariye peesh karne ki koshish kar raha hu .. muaffi chahuga agar likhne mein koi galti ki ho

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Peeta hu jaam,tanha raat mein chand sitaron ke sath mein peeta hu
Jab na koi thikana,Maikhane ko ghar banakar peeta hu....

Bhool jate hai hosh mein,yaad karne usse mein peeta hu
tasveer banakar baitha hu,woh har boond mein usse peeta hu...

Beewafa baan kar chale gaye,apni waafa ke sahare peeta hu
Kismat pe kya roona,ab tho zindagi haste haste mein peeta hu...

Khush hu mein,har saans ke sath ab mein peeta hu
shayad taQdeer banayi thi usne,ab miita kar usse mein peeta hu...

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Re: Peeta hu..... - 20th April 2006, 09:38 PM

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Naya hu .. kuch ehsaas ko kalam ke zariye peesh karne ki koshish kar raha hu .. muaffi chahuga agar likhne mein koi galti ki ho

-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_-~-~_

Peeta hu jaam,tanha raat mein chand sitaron ke sath mein peeta hu
Jab na koi thikana,Maikhane ko ghar banakar peeta hu....

Bhool jate hai hosh mein,yaad karne usse mein peeta hu
tasveer banakar baitha hu,woh har boond mein usse peeta hu...

Beewafa baan kar chale gaye,apni waafa ke sahare peeta hu
Kismat pe kya roona,ab tho zindagi haste haste mein peeta hu...

Khush hu mein,har saans ke sath ab mein peeta hu
shayad taQdeer banayi thi usne,ab miita kar usse mein peeta hu...

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hello fasil sahab
kya baat hai,bahut aacha laga aapko padkar,kamal ka likha hai aapne,yuhi likhte rehiyega
bye and take care
passionate......


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pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra"

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Behaad khushi huyi apko mera likhna accha laaga..Khoshish yehi rahegi .. izzat ke liye shukurguzaar hun

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