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ਓ ਸ਼ਾਯਰ, ਨਿਕਲ ਹੁਣ ਜੁਲਫਾਂ ਦੀ ਗੁੰਝਲ ਤੋਂ ਨਿਕਲ,
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ਓ ਸ਼ਾਯਰ, ਨਿਕਲ ਹੁਣ ਜੁਲਫਾਂ ਦੀ ਗੁੰਝਲ ਤੋਂ ਨਿਕਲ, - 17th October 2012, 04:02 AM

ਸ਼ਾਯਰ, ਨਿਕਲ ਹੁਣ ਜੁਲਫਾਂ ਦੀ ਗੁੰਝਲ ਤੋਂ ਨਿਕਲ,

ਛਡ ਲਿਖਣਾ ਤੂੰ ਜ਼ੁਲ੍ਫ਼-ਜਵਾਨੀ ਤੇ ਛਡ,

ਛਡ ਲਿਖਣਾ ਤੂੰ ਅਖ ਮਸਤਾਨੀ ਤੇ ਛਡ,

ਛਡ ਸੋਹਨੀਦੀਆਂ ਗੱਲਾਂ, ਬਹਾਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਗੱਲ.

ਛਡ ਸੱਸੀ ਦੇ ਕਿੱਸੇ, ਕਰਾਰਾਂ ਦੀ ਗੱਲ,

ਓਏ ਜੇ ਤੂੰ ਲਿਖਣੈ ਚੰਨਾ, ਜ੍ਮਾਨੇੰ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਰੋਜ਼ ਨੇਤਾ ਦੇ ਨਵੇਂ, ਬਹਾਨੇ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਮਜਦੂਰ ਦੇ ਡਿਗਦੇ ਪਸੀਨੇ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਸਪਾਹੀ ਦੇ ਦੇਹ੍ਕਦੇ ਸੀਨੇ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਭਰਾਵਾਂ ਭਰਾਵਾਂ ਦੀ ਵੰਡ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਚਾਲੀ ਨੂੰ ਪਹੁੰਚੀ ਖੰਡ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਮੋਟੇ ਡਿਡਾਂ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ, ਖਾਲੀ ਚੁਹ੍ਲਿਆਂ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਮੁੰਡੇ ਵਾਲੀਆਂ ਦੇ ਬਹੁਤੇ ਮੂੰਹ ਖੁਲਿਆਂ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਹਾੱਸੇ ਨੂੰ ਛਡ, ਤੂੰ ਹਾੜੇ ਤੇਲਿਖ,

ਬਿਨ ਵਉਹਟੀਓਂ ਮੁੜਦੇ ਲਾੜੇ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਲਾਲ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ, ਤੂੰ ਗੁਲਾਬੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਦਲ ਦਲ ਧੱਸੇ, ਸ਼ਰਾਬੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਨਢੀ ਨੂੰ ਛਡ, ਤੂੰ ਵਢੀ ਤੇਲਿਖ,

ਗਰੀਬੀ ਦੀ ਲੰਬੀ, ਗੱਡੀ ਤੇਲਿਖ,

ਸੁਨਾਰ ਨੂੰ ਛਡ, ਤੂੰ ਸ੍ਮੈਕੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਓਏ, ਬਾਰ ਨੂੰ ਛਡ, ਬਲੈਕੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਕੇਸਾਂ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ, ਤੂੰ ਕਚੈਹਰੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਹੁੰਦੀ ਰਿਸ਼ਵਤ ਦੀ ਬੀਬਾ, ਨਹਰ ਗੈਹਰੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਤੂੰ ਪਾਵੇ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ, ਤੂੰ ਮੰਜੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਮੈਹੰਗਆਈ ਨੇ ਕੀਤੀ, ਟਿੰਡ ਗੰਜੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਕੌਲ ਨੂੰ ਛਡ, ਤੂੰ ਕਪੱਤ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਜਰਨੈਲੇ ਦੀ ਚੋੰਦੀ ਛਤ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਸ਼ਰਮ ਦੇ ਫਟਦੇ, ਰੁਮਾਲ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਮੂੰਗੀ ਦੀ ਧੋਤੀ ਦਾਲ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਪੀੰਗਾ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ, ਪਰਾਂਦੇ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਮਾਂ ਰੋਂਦੀ, ਪੁਤ ਬਾਹਰ ਜਾਂਦੇ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਛਡ ਵਧਾਈਆਂ, ਤੂੰ ਨਕਲੀ ਦਵਾਈਆਂ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਇਜ੍ਜ਼ਤ ਦੀ ਉਧੜੀ, ਰਜਾਈਆਂ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਗੇਹਰਾਈ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ, ਤੂੰ ਬੁਲੰਦੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਸ਼ਾਯਰ ਦੀ ਘਟੀਆ ਤੁਕਬੰਦੀ ਤੇ ਲਿਖ,

ਲਿਖਣ ਨੂੰ ਬਹੁਤ ਮੌਜ਼ੂ ਨੇ ਸ਼ਾਯਰ,

ਨਿਕਲ ਹੁਣ ਜੁਲਫਾਂ ਦੀ ਗੁੰਝਲ ਤੋਂ ਨਿਕਲ.

ਸ਼ਾਮਕੁਮਾਰ

O SHAYAR NIKKAL, HUN ZULFAN DEE GUHNJAL CHON NIKKAL,

CHHAD LIKHNA TOON ZULF-JVAANI TE LIKH,

CHHAD LIKHNA TOON AKH MASTAANI TE LIKH,

CHHAD SOHNI DEEYAN GALLAN, BAHARAAN DEE GALL,

CHHAD SASEE DE KISSE KRAARAN DEE GALL,

OYE JE TOON LIKHNAI O CHANNAN, ZMAANE TE LIKH,

ROZ NETA DE NAVEN BAHAANE TE LIKH,

MAZDOOR DE DIGDE PASEENE TE LIKH,


SPAAHEE DE DEHAKDE SEENE TE LIKH,


BHRAAVAN BHRAAVAN DEE VAND TE LIKH,


CHAALEE NOON PAUHNCHEE, KHAND TE LIKH,

MOTE DHIDAN TE LIKH, KHAALEE CHUHLIYAN TE LIKH,


MUNDE VALEYAN DE BAHUTE, MOOHN KHULIYAN TE LIKH,


HAASSE NOON CHHAD, TOON HAADE TE LIKH,


BIN VAUHTIYON MUD DE LADE TE LIKH,


LAAL TE LIKH, TOON GULAABI TE LIKH,


DAL DAL CH DHASSE SHRAABI TE LIKH,


NADHEE NOON CHHAD, TOON VAHDEE TE LIKH,


GAREEBI DEE LAMBEE GADDI TE LIKH,


SUNAAR NOON CHHAD, TOON SMAIKEE TE LIKH,


OYE BAAR NOON CHHAD TOON BLACKY TE LIKH,


KESAN TE LIKH TOON KACHEHRI TE LIKH,


HUNDI RISHVAT DEE BEEBA, NEHR GAIHREE TE LIKH,


TOON PAAVE TE LIKH, TOON MANJEE TE LIKH,


MEHNGAAYEE NE KEETI TIND GANJEE TE LIKH,


KAUL NOON CHHAD, TOON KPATT TE LIKH,


JARNAILE DEE CHONDI CHHAT TE LIKH,


SHARM DE FATDE RUMAAL TE LIKH,


MOONGEE DEE DHOTI DAAL TE LIKH,


PEEHNGA TE LIKH, PRAANDE TE LIKH,


MAAN RONDI CHHAD, PUT BAHR JANDE TE LIKH,


CHHAD VDHAAIYAN, TOON NAKLI DVAAIYAN TE LIKH,


IZZAT DEE UDHDI, RJAAIYAN TE LIKH,


GEHRAAIYAN TE LIKH TOON BULANDI TE LIKH,


SHAYAR DEE GHATIYA TUKBANDI TE LIKH,


LIKHAN NOON BAHUT MAUZU NE SHAYAR,


NIKAL HUN ZULFAN DEE GUHNJAL CHON NIKAL.

Sham Kumar

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17th October 2012, 09:27 PM

bahut hi vadhia likhia ji likhde hoe likhan da sandesh ajj de taza muddian te vadhia hai ji..........................


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Thanks..Infact I wrote this poem almost 35 years back. I remember writing
"Bhravan Bhravan De Vand Te Likh, Sadhe Chhe Dee kilo Khand Te Likh".. the one you are refering is a modified version. Anyway thanks once again. God Bless You.
   
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wahhhh....bahut vadiya likhiya hai ji tusi................................!


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Sham Kumar ji,
Theh punjabi vich eh kavita per ke man bara khuch hoya . Tuse jindage di karvi
sachhaian nu kinne vadiya tareeke nal pesh kita hain ,

Punjabi poets di kami hain is forum te, kirpa kar kihde raho.

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