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Love Mere Mehaboob Aaj Qayamat Hogi - 1st July 2014, 10:17 AM
Mere Mehabaab Aaj Qayamat Hogi
Teri Yaadon Se Meri Zamanat Hogi,

Zara Sambhal Kar Rakhna Pairon Ko
Tere Aas Paas Meri Mohabbat Hogi,

Mere Ashk To Hai Yun Hi Behne Ko
Ho Mehafuz Tu Meri Ibadat Hogi,

Gum-e-Dariya Honge Majbur Rukne Ko
Alla-e-Tala Se Jo Kabhi Raahat Hogi,

Toot Kar Hai Dil Bikhar Ne Ko
Jalad Aazmaa Lo Aapki Inayat Hogi,

Tu Jo De Gayi Judaai Rone Ko
Mere Dard Ko Bhi Tujhse Shikayat Hogi...!!
   
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1st July 2014, 10:59 AM
bahot khoob likha hai aapne .... likhte rahiye

Zara Sambhal Kar Rakhna Pairon Ko
Tere Aas Paas Meri Mohabbat Hogi,

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Mere Mehabaab Aaj Qayamat Hogi
Teri Yaadon Se Meri Zamanat Hogi,

Zara Sambhal Kar Rakhna Pairon Ko
Tere Aas Paas Meri Mohabbat Hogi,

Mere Ashk To Hai Yun Hi Behne Ko
Ho Mehafuz Tu Meri Ibadat Hogi,

Gum-e-Dariya Honge Majbur Rukne Ko
Alla-e-Tala Se Jo Kabhi Raahat Hogi,

Toot Kar Hai Dil Bikhar Ne Ko
Jalad Aazmaa Lo Aapki Inayat Hogi,

Tu Jo De Gayi Judaai Rone Ko
Mere Dard Ko Bhi Tujhse Shikayat Hogi...!!
bahut khoob likha hai Masoom pyaar bhai.......radhe radhe

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1st July 2014, 02:59 PM
Mere Mehabaab Aaj Qayamat Hogi
Teri Yaadon Se Meri Zamanat Hogi,

waise aapki ghazal poori ke poori acchi lagi magar khaas daad mai aapko aapke matle par dena chaunga.

itna depth lana ek sher me bahut hi rare hai...aapne to mehboob ko itna bada darja de diya jiski kum misaal mile.

is sher ke liye meri taraf se platinum covered daad.

ulaa ke 'hogi' ne khoob play kiya hai...'it is' or 'will happen'...the vaguenesss is bewitching

bahut abstract hai....ek common ulaa ko aisa saani diya ke lajawaab kar diya aapne

ye sher to poora bhul bhulaiiyyahai..full jalebi but very very sweet indeed
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Thanks Shaad Ji................................................ .!!!


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bahot khoob likha hai aapne .... likhte rahiye

Zara Sambhal Kar Rakhna Pairon Ko
Tere Aas Paas Meri Mohabbat Hogi,

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Thanx Bhai.......i m Happy U Like My Post............................!!

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Mere Mehabaab Aaj Qayamat Hogi
Teri Yaadon Se Meri Zamanat Hogi,

waise aapki ghazal poori ke poori acchi lagi magar khaas daad mai aapko aapke matle par dena chaunga.

itna depth lana ek sher me bahut hi rare hai...aapne to mehboob ko itna bada darja de diya jiski kum misaal mile.

is sher ke liye meri taraf se platinum covered daad.

ulaa ke 'hogi' ne khoob play kiya hai...'it is' or 'will happen'...the vaguenesss is bewitching

bahut abstract hai....ek common ulaa ko aisa saani diya ke lajawaab kar diya aapne

ye sher to poora bhul bhulaiiyyahai..full jalebi but very very sweet indeed
   
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1st July 2014, 10:02 PM
Sundar ghazal par daad Maasoom Pyaar ji

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1st July 2014, 10:54 PM
sudhir bhai . bahut lajawab lagi aap ki ghazal ..
Aap ko dil se daad


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Mere Mehabaab Aaj Qayamat Hogi
Teri Yaadon Se Meri Zamanat Hogi,

Zara Sambhal Kar Rakhna Pairon Ko
Tere Aas Paas Meri Mohabbat Hogi,

Mere Ashk To Hai Yun Hi Behne Ko
Ho Mehafuz Tu Meri Ibadat Hogi,

Gum-e-Dariya Honge Majbur Rukne Ko
Alla-e-Tala Se Jo Kabhi Raahat Hogi,

Toot Kar Hai Dil Bikhar Ne Ko
Jalad Aazmaa Lo Aapki Inayat Hogi,

Tu Jo De Gayi Judaai Rone Ko
Mere Dard Ko Bhi Tujhse Shikayat Hogi...!!
waah masoom sahab ...bahut khoobsooratt ghazal paish farmai hai aap ne...........daad qabool kijiye ga......
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Masha Allah bohat khoob surat ghazal hai sudhir sahab. .

Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain

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Sukriyan Zaraa Shahab.......i m Happy u like my Poem........mai aapka dil se Sukriyan karta hu.............

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Thanx..........Hamdam Bhai..............................Mai Aapka Sukarguzar Hu............Aapko meri ye choti si poem pasand aayi..................!!!

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Thanx Harash ji................................................ .............................!!!!

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Thanx Zainy Ji................................................ ....................................!!!!

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Thanxxxx Qadir Bro............................................... ............................!!!

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