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Post nishaan ret pe.... - 15th December 2014, 04:46 PM

Ek tasveer ko dekh kar kuch khyaal zahan me aaye..
aapke sath share kar rahi hoon...

Nishaan ret pe mit hi jayenge
jo dariya e gam ne chaha to..
Aao kuch aisa karein ki
Yaad zamaana rakhe...

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...



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15th December 2014, 04:57 PM

waah waaaahhhhhhhhhh kyaa khayaal pesh kiye hain Madhu saahiba aapne......

har panktii apne aap me ek misaal hai..... bahot khoob..

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..



likhtii rahiye.......

Shaad....


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16th December 2014, 12:06 AM

Ek achcha khayal pesh liya aap ne ...Madhu ji

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...

Kash hum ye mayne Zindagi mein samajh payein ,,,

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16th December 2014, 01:31 AM

bahut khoob Madhu jee .....acche khyaal hain aapke.....touching and sensitive...



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9th March 2015, 06:34 PM

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waah waaaahhhhhhhhhh kyaa khayaal pesh kiye hain Madhu saahiba aapne......

har panktii apne aap me ek misaal hai..... bahot khoob..

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..



likhtii rahiye.......

Shaad....
Behad shukriya janaab...Aapki waah dekhkar bahut khushi hoti hai shaad jee....bas yoon hee sath banaye rakhein..aur daad ke sath meri galtiyon par bhi nazar rakhein to yakeenan kuch achcha likh sakti hoon main...



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7th April 2015, 11:57 AM

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Ek achcha khayal pesh liya aap ne ...Madhu ji

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...

Kash hum ye mayne Zindagi mein samajh payein ,,,

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15th May 2015, 04:17 PM

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bahut khoob Madhu jee .....acche khyaal hain aapke.....touching and sensitive...
ShukriyA arvind ji....jo aapko mere khyaal pasand aaye.........
Aate rahein .



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Ek tasveer ko dekh kar kuch khyaal zahan me aaye..
aapke sath share kar rahi hoon...

Nishaan ret pe mit hi jayenge
jo dariya e gam ne chaha to..
Aao kuch aisa karein ki
Yaad zamaana rakhe...

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..

Kyon na masroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...

Wah ji wah.. kya kehne.
Yeh mujh se chhuut gayi thi, paDh kar bohot sukoon mila.
Bohot baDhiya.


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Wah ji wah.. kya kehne.
Yeh mujh se chhuut gayi thi, paDh kar bohot sukoon mila.
Bohot baDhiya.
aapki inayaton ki bahut shukraguzar hooon sagar sahab....yoon hee sath dete rahiyega......
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Ek tasveer ko dekh kar kuch khyaal zahan me aaye..
aapke sath share kar rahi hoon...

Nishaan ret pe mit hi jayenge
jo dariya e gam ne chaha to..
Aao kuch aisa karein ki
Yaad zamaana rakhe...

Hath hathon me
bhale hi na ho kal..
Kadam ek doosre ke
Sang me jaana rakhe..

Rakhe ek doosre ko
Yoon dil me apne..
Yaad us rab ko
Jaise koi deewana rahke..

Kyon na mashroof ho
Ham kitni hi aur baton me
Baat ek doosre se karne ka
Koi to bahana rakhe...

Madhu Bala ......bahut accha likha hai aapne, ehsaasoN ko jubaan dena bahut khoobi se kiya aapne....god bless u


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Madhu Bala ......bahut accha likha hai aapne, ehsaasoN ko jubaan dena bahut khoobi se kiya aapne....god bless u
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