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Exclamation Ik Baat Kahoo - 19th February 2005, 01:17 AM

Ik Baat Kahoo

Ik baat kahoo ger sunte ho
tum mujh ko achhe lagte ho

kuch chnchal se kuch chupchap
kuch pagal pagal lagte ho

mere chahne waale aur bohat
mager tum me hai ik baat bohat

tum apne apne lagte ho
ik baat kahoo ger sunte ho

TUM MUJH KO ACHHE LAGTE HO
   
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Cool 20th February 2005, 12:29 AM

Need everybody's comments.

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20th February 2005, 11:01 AM

Nice one!!!
   
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aik bat kahoo - 20th February 2005, 06:20 PM

shamiii-------
AIK BAT KAHOOO GER SUNTY HOOO,
KION ITNIE BUTTERING KARTY HOO,
AIK BAT KAHOON GER SUNTY HOO,
KION ITNY SHERMILY SAY LAGTY HOO,
JOO LAGTY HOO KIA WOO LAGTY HOO


hahaha,just kidding-----


AIK BAT KAHOON GER SUNTY HOO,
COLLECTION BOHAT ACHIE RAKHTY HOO,
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thats really veryyyyyyyyyy good-----
my dear bro,bohat achie collection hay tumharie-----
AIK BAT KAHOON GER SUNTY HOO,
STUDY PAY BHI TAWAJ RAKHTY HOOOOOOOOO?????
-------- KHOOSH RAHOOO
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Wink 21st February 2005, 02:09 AM

Wow... great...
app nay too Shayri Shayri main hee sari batain kar deen
it means... app bhi bari choopi rustam hain...
hahahha

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21st February 2005, 09:15 AM

aik baat kahoo ger sunty hooo----
sabab ye tum sunty hoo,
bhai jo tum mairy lagty hoo,
tum bhi too chupy rustum hoo,
her bar heran kar daty hoo,
han zooq maira jaisa hi rakhty hoo,
bhai jo mairy lagty hoooooo,



hahahaha,
CHUPPYYYYYYYYYY RUSTAMMMMMMMM SHAMIIIIIIIII
HAMESHA KHOSH RAHOOOO,

tumharie sab collection achie haien orr bhool ja walie main nay tumhari nahie parhie thie kia tum nay send ki thie mujhy bhi woo bohat achie lagtie hay-----

KIA BAT HAY

TUMHARIE BADI BEHAN/FRIEND
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Wink yaarana - 26th February 2005, 10:14 AM

Har dil fariyad nahi karta,
Har koi kisiko yaad nahi karta;
Hum bhule tumhe ek palke liye,
Is baat pe dil aetbar nahi karta!"

"u hi tanhaiyoo mein hum dil ko saza dete hai,
naam tera likhte hai aur likh kar mita dete hai"

"Hamen apne dil men basaye rakhna,
Hamari yadon ke chirag jalaye rakhna;
Bahut lamba hai safar zindagi ka mere dost,
Ek hissa hamen bhi banaye rakhna!"

.. dil ki galiyon mein koi gam naho,
hamari yeh dosti kabhi kam na ho,
bas yahi hai dua ki tum khush raho,
kya pata hum "kal ho na ho "

Guzre hue zamane ki yaad ati hai ...
Kuch lamho se ankhen bhar ati hai ...
woh subah rangeen woh sham nirali,
Jab aap jaise dost ki yaad aati hai

Jab dosti ki dastaan waqt sunayega,
hum ko bhi koi shaks yaad ayega,
tab bhool jayenge zindagi ke gamon ko,
jab AAp ke saath guzra waqt yaad ayega

Dosti ke na jane kya dastur hote hain,
jinhe hum chate hain, wo hi hum se dur hote hai.

Chaman me bahar rahe to phool khilthe rahenge,
Zindagi bakhi rahe to hum milte rahenge

Chehre pe haseen chaa jati hai,
Aankhon main suroor aaa jata hai,
Jab tum mujhe apna kahte ho,
Apne pe ghuroor aa jata hai

yaad karke tujhko-e-dost
har khushi kam lagti hai ,
honthon par hansi hai
par aankhen num lagti hain.

yaad karte hai yaaron ko,
yaadon se dil bhar aata hai.
kabhi saath raha karte the sab,
aaj milne ko dil taras jata hai.
DOAT DOAT hota hai,
Mehsoos tab hota hai jab woh juda hota hai,
Bin dost ke jeena ek saaya hota hai
Aur dost tum jaisa ho to jeena ek mazaa hota hai !!!
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Cool 27th February 2005, 01:38 AM

Nice Poetry MR. ALI REHMAN... keep it up....

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Re: Ik Baat Kahoo - 27th February 2005, 01:42 AM

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Ik Baat Kahoo

Ik baat kahoo ger sunte ho
tum mujh ko achhe lagte ho

kuch chnchal se kuch chupchap
kuch pagal pagal lagte ho

mere chahne waale aur bohat
mager tum me hai ik baat bohat

tum apne apne lagte ho
ik baat kahoo ger sunte ho

TUM MUJH KO ACHHE LAGTE HO
baat kaho main sunti hoon
pata hai mujhko ki main tumko achi lagti hoon

chanchal nahi chupchap nahi
pagal tumhare pyar mein lagti hoon

honge chahne wale tumhare bahut
par humko chahne wala koi nahi

tum mujhko apne se lagte ho
par kya main tumhe achi lagti hon???????????????

Hi shaami ji
i hope u dont mind just tried to give you a reply

Regards Nidhi


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


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Thumbs up 27th February 2005, 02:40 AM

Ik Baat Kahoo

Ik baat kahoon kaya sunoo gii
tum mujh ko kyoon achhe lagoo gii

naa tum ko dekha na tum ko jana
phir yeeh saab kaysa hai faasana

batain tum ajeeb see karti ho
kuch pagal pagal lagte ho

mere chahne waale aur bohat
hayraan mager bhi hoon main bohat

mager tum me hai ik baat bohat
tum aik acchi Shayar lagti ho

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Hi Nidhi jee,
I hope u don't mind this too... I just wana give you a nice feedback... you gave a little time to write me... so, it was binding on me to give you some of my time too.

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Cool 28th February 2005, 01:58 AM

Wow i got more than 225 Hits on my Post.

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28th February 2005, 04:23 AM

Thanks shamiji

Regards nidhi


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


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2nd March 2005, 12:08 PM

AIK BATT KAHO AGER SONTE HOO
SHAME TUM MUJH KO KHAFA LAGTAY HOO

AIK BATT KAHE GAR SONTE HOO YAR SHAME MISS AIZA KO AAPI KEHTE HOO
AIK BATT KAHO AGAR SONTE HOO TUM AIZA SAY BARE LAGTAY HOO
AIK BATT KAHOO AGAR SONTE HOO TUM CHOTE KIO BANTE HOO


YAR TUMHEIN TANG KARNE MEIN MAZA AATA HAY

1 MESSAGE SHAME YAR AAGER SUNTE HOO TOO

While you are reading this page, if someone
appears in your mind,
then u are in love with that person

HUM MEIN SAY KESE NAY SUNA NAHE READ ZAROR KIA HAY AIK BATT AGER PARHTE HOO TUM MUJH KO KHAFA LAGTE HOO
   
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FRIENIDHI - 2nd March 2005, 12:10 PM

FRIENDNIDHI AAP K PASS OOR KOE PHOT NAHE THE KIA
   
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Lightbulb 3rd March 2005, 12:53 AM

Ik baat kahoon kaya suntay ho
batain tum ajeeb see kartay ho

mager tum me hai ik baat bohat
kuch pagal pagal lagtay ho

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hmm... so Mr. Ali, you better don't make assumptions about me. We are here to comment on Shayri only. take care

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hi - 3rd March 2005, 07:19 AM

hi shaam ji

nice poem, bhut hi achi hai aapki yeh poem par ke dil ko sakoo se ataa hai andi think its a beautiful way of expressing ur feelings to someone.

aik baat kaho suntey ho
tum bhut achi shayri likhte ho

jazbaat ki zubaa jaanteho
kalm ki pehchaan jaante ho

magar tum mai hai ik baat
bhut nadaan maloom hote ho

hey hope u dnt mind bas dil ne kaha kuch likhti jao.

keep on writing
take care
bye


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3rd March 2005, 10:19 AM

Tum rah me chup chap khade ho to gaye ho.
kis kis ko bataoge ghar kyu nahi jate....
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3rd March 2005, 11:16 PM

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Bulati hey jo pass apney kuch aysii ada thi tum main
tumharey hi isharey say howey haam mubtala tum main

bhut kuch yaad aya tha tumharee muskurahat say
woo rut thi charthey saaloon ki kashish thi bey baha tum main
   
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4th March 2005, 10:11 PM

wow... thats good... thanx

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