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Intezaar - 28th September 2006, 05:28 PM

Mere alfaazon mein tera naam nahin aayega,
aayega har koi tera badnaam nahin aayega.

tumko to shikayat hai ke satate hain bahut hum,
lo ab tera deewana sar-e-shaam nahin aayega.

mana ki mohabbat chhupate hain bahut log,
lekin ye sach hai kab ye ilzaam nahin aayega.

tum samme wafa jalakar akele mein intezaar karo
tere shauk ka ye parwaana sar-e-aam nahin aayega.

aa jao mohabbat tujhe aawaz deti hai sada,
kya dil me basa hai jo wo mehmaan nahin aayega.

"majboor" jindagi bhar intezaar mat karo tum,
mumkin hai tere khaate mein koi eenaam nahin aayega......


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30th September 2006, 04:19 PM

Bhoot khoob
bhoot achi kohih hay..

ap kay is sher hay

aa jao mohabbat tujhe aawaz deti hai sada,
kya dil me basa hai jo wo mehmaan nahin aayega.

Awaz dayna = Sada

ya choti se mistake hay... dono lafzo ka ek he matlab hay.. kinldy correct it..

over all it is nice,,


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Re: Intezaar - 3rd October 2006, 11:31 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by R.L.Awasthi
Mere alfaazon mein tera naam nahin aayega,
aayega har koi tera badnaam nahin aayega.

tumko to shikayat hai ke satate hain bahut hum,
lo ab tera deewana sar-e-shaam nahin aayega.

mana ki mohabbat chhupate hain bahut log,
lekin ye sach hai kab ye ilzaam nahin aayega.

tum samme wafa jalakar akele mein intezaar karo
tere shauk ka ye parwaana sar-e-aam nahin aayega.

aa jao mohabbat tujhe aawaz deti hai sada,
kya dil me basa hai jo wo mehmaan nahin aayega.

"majboor" jindagi bhar intezaar mat karo tum,
mumkin hai tere khaate mein koi eenaam nahin aayega......
buhut khub wasthi ji buhut acha likha hai aur dil ko chu gaye app ki ghazal keep writing
   
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3rd October 2006, 11:37 PM

bahut hi accha likha hai aapne.



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11th October 2006, 04:22 AM

bahut umda likha hai. isse jyada kuch nahi keh sakta.
alfaz kam hain.
bas dua hai ki aapki soch aise hi bani rahe.


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