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Zindagi..........! -
30th October 2010, 06:49 PM
ZINDAGI
Jaane kya kya rang dikhati hai zindagi, kabhi apna , kabhi begana banati hai zindagi, agar sikhna chaho tum is se, to bahut kuch hume sikhati hai zindagi....... Mata-pita k kartavyon ko sirf unka farz na samjho, kyunki phir se yahi waqt tumhe lautati hai zindagi, agar tum samjhe nahi is sanket ko to umar bhar tumhe phir rulati hai zindagi jaane kya kya rang dikhati hai zindagi......... Doston k dosti ko kabhi tutne na do.. Jinhe chaho use ruthne na do zindagi me kuch karna hai tumhe is mann ki aas ko kabhi tutne na do phir dekho har pal kaise muskurati hai zindagi jaane kya kya rang dikhati hai zindagi........... milte hain hum zindagi me kitne hi chehron se har chehra hume kabhi yaad nahi hota par jo dil k kareeb hote hain, unki dooriyon ka ehsaas nahi hota pyar ka khushnuma ehsaas karati hai ye zindagi jaane kya kya rang dikhati hai zindagi......... Gamon se tum kabhi na ghabrana gam to hai khusi se pehle ka nazrana agar tumne har pal khush rehna sikh liya zindagi jine ka hunar tumhe aa gaya. Gam aur khusi dono ka gyan karati hai zindagi. Jaane kya kya rang dikhati hai zindagi........ |
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30th October 2010, 06:55 PM
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hello frnds......this is my 3rd post.........hope u'll like it....... my this poem is about our LIFE...........& its various aspects....... plz comments.........ur suggestions.......if any...... |
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4th November 2010, 12:11 PM
Loved your thoughts Puregold jee..........please keep writing.
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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6th November 2010, 01:13 AM
jhoot na sahi tu sach hi bayan kar de
mere dil ko sab jhelne ki aadat si ho gayi hai.............. |
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6th November 2010, 12:53 PM
bade sundar ehsaas hain keep it up....................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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7th November 2010, 02:20 PM
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 Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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8th November 2010, 09:40 AM
Haan, kuch aisa hi samajh lijiye....
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10th November 2010, 04:38 PM
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With regards, sneha |
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11th November 2010, 10:34 PM
thanx dear........! ya yun kahe ...'Shukriya....Shukriya'
waise...... Dil par aakar hi to aksar thahar jati hai baatein............ rehte hain intzaar me hum us 'Chaand' k didar k liye aur isi intzaar me juzar jati hai na jaane kitni raatein......... |
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12th November 2010, 10:44 AM
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14th November 2010, 01:55 AM
haan..........dear...! ye aapke liye hi hai........
bas aapne likha k meri shayri dil par aakar thahar gayi...to maine is baat par socha aur ye lines likh diya............... abb bataiye kaisi thi................hai na ye fact............in d most cases....... |
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15th November 2010, 01:35 PM
Hummmmmmmmm That's true ....Thanks for reply my post......I hope aap aise hi dil ko chhune wali dero shayri likhte rahenge..........Thanks again....
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17th November 2010, 12:57 AM
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 YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th November 2010, 03:30 AM
Shukriya....Aapka!
Aapke signature ko padh k maine mann me kuch lines banayi jo main share karna chahta hun "chirag to umeedon ka hum kab se dil me jalaye baithe hai, bas unke aane ki aas me hum palkein bichaye baithe hai..." |
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18th November 2010, 11:21 AM
puregold ji
"chirag to umeedon ka hum kab se dil me jalaye baithe hai, bas unke aane ki aas me hum palkein bichaye baithe hai..." Wow !!!!!!!!!! Wah wah wah sach aapne dil khush kar dia .........dost ! Kya me apka real name jan sakti hu.....................please ......... |
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19th November 2010, 01:56 PM
Thanx Sneha ji....
Waise naam me kya rakha hai ... But aapne request ki hai so...I've 2 tell u Kundan - means 'puregold' |
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20th November 2010, 11:30 AM
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you tell me.........bilkul sahi name rakha he,,,,,,,,,,,,,aap or aapki shayri dono kundan...........yani pure gold.............Thanks again........KUNDAN....... |
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21st November 2010, 03:20 PM
hiiii, Sneha ji
maine kuch lines likhi hai jo aapsab ke saath share karna chahta hoon........ Duniya ki bheed me kahin kho na jana, badi zalim hai duniya ye tune na jana abhi to jaise ghari hai imtihaan ki abhi se tum ghabra na jana saath dunga main tera har kadam par zara ek baar mujhe aawaz lagana........... |
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22nd November 2010, 11:15 AM
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23rd November 2010, 11:43 AM
Hiii, Sneha ji
thanks again 4 ur such a nice compliment waise aap bhi likhti to hogi na to kuch humare saath bhi share kijiye... |
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24th November 2010, 12:08 PM
Hello dost,,,,,,,sneha here,,,,,sorry,,,, me nahi likhti .........me to sirf aap jaise dosto ka hausla badati hu,,,,,,,,as this .............
*Rom-Rom mei humare voh base hai, Najare humari aur chehra unkha hai, Har saans mein humari voh base hai, Dhadkane humari aur dil unka hai..*.........I like it...........so so sweet...... |
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24th November 2010, 01:25 PM
Wah ! Kya baat hai
aap to itna accha likhti hai waise ye aapke pyar k baare me ishara kar rahi hai... |
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25th November 2010, 11:07 AM
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26th November 2010, 01:01 AM
maine aapko frnd request bheja tha par aapne join nahi kiya................???
kya bataun main apne baare me main to ek khuli kitab hoon jaise..... bas kuch baatein hain jo dil me basi hai mere par wo bhi jahlak jate hain aankhon se jaise........ I'm an engg. student and currently in final year. my branch is electronics & telecomm. what's abt u.........??? |
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27th November 2010, 01:36 PM
Hello dost,,,,Bus u hi nahi join kiya,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,have a nice day.!!!!!!!!!!1
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27th November 2010, 01:39 PM
PUREGOLD JI, SNEHA JI.......
Sdc per PM facility available hai .... plzz use it.. ......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th November 2010, 03:58 PM
@ zainy..........
hiii, zainy I didn't get wht u r advising.............plz would u explain.......... |
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27th November 2010, 04:45 PM
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Is site..(shayri.com=Sdc) per (pm) private messaging ki service available hai...aapko sneha ji se ya kisi bhi member se koi bhi baat karni ho tou private messaging dwara kijiye... threads per baat mat kijiye... ummid hai aapko samajh me aa gaya hoga... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th November 2010, 04:51 PM
@ sneha.......
wo to kehne ko yunhi hume dost kehte hai humne to socha ki wo sach me dost kehte hai soch kar yahi humne dosti ka haath kya badhaya.......... apne saare sawaalon ka jawaab unke shabdon me paya...... bye....... |
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