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shayri e mashhoor shayr`-parveen shakir - 29th March 2016, 06:13 PM

adaab doston...

Is mahine ham jis mashhoor shakhshiyat ki poetry se rub ru ho rahe hain...vo ek umda shayra hain jinki har poetry dil ko chhuu lene wali hoti hai...mujhe yakeen hai jitni mutasir main huyi hoon inhe padh kar aap bhi honge....to pahle kuch basic infomation jaan lete aate hain aur fir rukh karte hain inki umda shayri ki taraf......


Parveen Shakir--- (24 November 1952 – 26 December 1994) was an Urdu poet, teacher and a civil servant of the Government of Pakistan.

Parveen started writing at an early age and published her first volume of poetry, Khushbu [Fragrance], to great acclaim, in 1976.[2] She subsequently published other volumes of poetry – all well-received – Sad-barg [Marsh Marigold] in 1980, Khud Kalami [Talking To Oneself] and Inkaar [Denial] in 1990, Kaf-e-Aina [The Mirror's Edge] besides a collection of her newspaper columns, titled Gosha-e-Chashm [Corner of the Eye], and was awarded one of Pakistan's highest honours, the Pride of Performance for her outstanding contribution to literature in 1976. The poetry books are collected in the volume Mah-e-Tamaam [Full Moon] with the exception of Kaf-e-Aina.

Parveen died in 1994 in a car accident while on her way to work.



Style of poetry
Shakir employed mainly two forms of poetry in her work, one being the prevalent ghazal and the other being free verse. The most prominent themes in Shakir's poetry are love, feminism, and social stigmas, though she occasionally wrote on other topics as well.

Arguably, Shakir can be termed the first female poet to use the word larki (girl) in her works—the male-dominated Urdu poetry scene seldom employs that word, and uses masculine syntax when talking about the 'lover'. Similarly, she often made use of the Urdu first-person, feminine pronoun in her verses which, though extremely common in prose, was rarely used in poetry, even by female poets, before her.

Birth
Parveen was born on 24 November 1952 in Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan.

Education
Shakir was highly educated. She received two undergraduate degrees, one in English literature and the other in linguistics, and obtained MA degrees in the same subjects from the University of Karachi. She also held a PhD, and another MA degree in Bank Administration.[2]

In 1982, Shakir qualified for the Central Superior Services Examination. In 1991, she obtained an MA degree in Public Administration from Harvard University, USA.

Family and death
Shakir married a Pakistani doctor, Syed Naseer Ali, with whom she had a son, Syed Murad Ali—but the marriage did not last long and ended in a divorce.

On 26 December 1994, Shakir's car collided with a bus while she was on her way to work in Islamabad. The accident resulted in her death, a great loss to the Urdu poetry world.[2] The road on which the accident took place is named after her now (Parveen Shakir Road).

Books
Following is a list of Shakir's published books. A translation of each book's title follows in italics.

Volumes of Poetry

Khushbu (1976) – Fragrance
Sad-barg (1980) – Marsh Marigold
Khud-kalaami (1990) – Talking to oneself
Inkaar (1990) – Refusal
Maah-e-Tamaam (1994) – Full Moon
Kaf-e-Aa'ina – The Edge of the Mirror
Prose

Gosha-e-Chashm – Corner of the eye

pesh hai ek khoobsoorat kalaam..


Mere Wajood Ki Jageer Ussne Mangi Hai
Ajab Khawab Ki Tabeer Ussne Mangi Hai

Usski Qaid Me Rehti Hoon Mein Pehle Bhi
Naa Jaane Phir Kyun Zanjeer Uss Ne Mangi Hai

Guman Hota Hai Woh Bhool Sakta Hai Mujhe
Kyunke Aaj Meri Tasveer Ussne Mangi Hai

Mere Khuda Mujhe Usske Naseeb Me Likh De
Ke Mujh Se Meri Hi Taqdeer Ussne Mangi Hai.



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Gulaab hath me ho.... - 29th March 2016, 08:21 PM

Gulaab haath meN ho, aaNkh mein sitaaraa ho
Koi wujood mohabbat ka iste’aaraa ho

MaiN gahray paani ki is ro ke saath bahti rahuN
Jazeeraa ho ke muqaabil koi kinaaraa ho !


Kabhi kabhaar usay dekh leN, kahiN mil leN
Yeh kab kaha tha ke woh khushbadan hamaaraa ho

Qusoor ho to hamaare hisaab meN likh jaaye
MohabbatoN meN jo ehsaan ho, tumhaaraa ho

Yeh itni raat gaye kaun dastakaiN degaa
KahiN hawa ka hi uss ne na roop dhaaraa ho

Ufaq to kya hai dar-E-kehkashaaN bhi chhu aayeN
MusafiroN ko agar chaaNd ka ishaaraa ho

MaiN apne hissay ke sukh jiske naam kardaaluN
Koi to ho jo mujhe iss tarah ka pyaaraa ho

Agar wujood meN aahang hai to wasl bhi hai
MaiN chaahe nazm ka tukRa, woh nasr paaraa ho



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Is mahine ham jis mashhoor shakhshiyat ki poetry se rub ru ho rahe hain...vo ek umda shayra hain jinki har poetry dil ko chhuu lene wali hoti hai...mujhe yakeen hai jitni mutasir main huyi hoon inhe padh kar aap bhi honge....to pahle kuch basic infomation jaan lete aate hain aur fir rukh karte hain inki umda shayri ki taraf......


Parveen Shakir--- (24 November 1952 – 26 December 1994) was an Urdu poet, teacher and a civil servant of the Government of Pakistan.

Parveen started writing at an early age and published her first volume of poetry, Khushbu [Fragrance], to great acclaim, in 1976.[2] She subsequently published other volumes of poetry – all well-received – Sad-barg [Marsh Marigold] in 1980, Khud Kalami [Talking To Oneself] and Inkaar [Denial] in 1990, Kaf-e-Aina [The Mirror's Edge] besides a collection of her newspaper columns, titled Gosha-e-Chashm [Corner of the Eye], and was awarded one of Pakistan's highest honours, the Pride of Performance for her outstanding contribution to literature in 1976. The poetry books are collected in the volume Mah-e-Tamaam [Full Moon] with the exception of Kaf-e-Aina.

Parveen died in 1994 in a car accident while on her way to work.



Style of poetry
Shakir employed mainly two forms of poetry in her work, one being the prevalent ghazal and the other being free verse. The most prominent themes in Shakir's poetry are love, feminism, and social stigmas, though she occasionally wrote on other topics as well.

Arguably, Shakir can be termed the first female poet to use the word larki (girl) in her works—the male-dominated Urdu poetry scene seldom employs that word, and uses masculine syntax when talking about the 'lover'. Similarly, she often made use of the Urdu first-person, feminine pronoun in her verses which, though extremely common in prose, was rarely used in poetry, even by female poets, before her.

Birth
Parveen was born on 24 November 1952 in Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan.

Education
Shakir was highly educated. She received two undergraduate degrees, one in English literature and the other in linguistics, and obtained MA degrees in the same subjects from the University of Karachi. She also held a PhD, and another MA degree in Bank Administration.[2]

In 1982, Shakir qualified for the Central Superior Services Examination. In 1991, she obtained an MA degree in Public Administration from Harvard University, USA.

Family and death
Shakir married a Pakistani doctor, Syed Naseer Ali, with whom she had a son, Syed Murad Ali—but the marriage did not last long and ended in a divorce.

On 26 December 1994, Shakir's car collided with a bus while she was on her way to work in Islamabad. The accident resulted in her death, a great loss to the Urdu poetry world.[2] The road on which the accident took place is named after her now (Parveen Shakir Road).

Books
Following is a list of Shakir's published books. A translation of each book's title follows in italics.

Volumes of Poetry

Khushbu (1976) – Fragrance
Sad-barg (1980) – Marsh Marigold
Khud-kalaami (1990) – Talking to oneself
Inkaar (1990) – Refusal
Maah-e-Tamaam (1994) – Full Moon
Kaf-e-Aa'ina – The Edge of the Mirror
Prose

Gosha-e-Chashm – Corner of the eye

pesh hai ek khoobsoorat kalaam..


Mere Wajood Ki Jageer Ussne Mangi Hai
Ajab Khawab Ki Tabeer Ussne Mangi Hai

Usski Qaid Me Rehti Hoon Mein Pehle Bhi
Naa Jaane Phir Kyun Zanjeer Uss Ne Mangi Hai

Guman Hota Hai Woh Bhool Sakta Hai Mujhe
Kyunke Aaj Meri Tasveer Ussne Mangi Hai

Mere Khuda Mujhe Usske Naseeb Me Likh De
Ke Mujh Se Meri Hi Taqdeer Ussne Mangi Hai.
Bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam se aghaaz kiya hai aapne Madhu bahut aacha laga ki aap is baar chunkar ek aisi hasti ko mehfil mein laayi jinhone kam umr mein buland haunslon ke saath ek shikhar haasil kiya tha....

Inhi ka ek buland sher yaad aa raha hai,

abr baraste to inaayat uski
shaakh to sirf dua karti hai



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Waqt se koi shikayat na aflaaq se hai... - 30th March 2016, 01:55 PM

Praveen ji ki awaaz me unki ek aur umda ghazal.....zaroor suniyega....




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Gulaab haath meN ho, aaNkh mein sitaaraa ho
Koi wujood mohabbat ka iste’aaraa ho

MaiN gahray paani ki is ro ke saath bahti rahuN
Jazeeraa ho ke muqaabil koi kinaaraa ho !


Kabhi kabhaar usay dekh leN, kahiN mil leN
Yeh kab kaha tha ke woh khushbadan hamaaraa ho

Qusoor ho to hamaare hisaab meN likh jaaye
MohabbatoN meN jo ehsaan ho, tumhaaraa ho

Yeh itni raat gaye kaun dastakaiN degaa
KahiN hawa ka hi uss ne na roop dhaaraa ho

Ufaq to kya hai dar-E-kehkashaaN bhi chhu aayeN
MusafiroN ko agar chaaNd ka ishaaraa ho

MaiN apne hissay ke sukh jiske naam kardaaluN
Koi to ho jo mujhe iss tarah ka pyaaraa ho

Agar wujood meN aahang hai to wasl bhi hai
MaiN chaahe nazm ka tukRa, woh nasr paaraa ho

subhaan Allah kyaa nageenaa pesh kiyaa hai aapne madhu ji........... bahut khoob


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ek sher suna tha kahin, shaayad ke Parween saahiba ka hi hai... par agar unka na ho to gustaakhii muaaf ho aur sher ko dekhen, kitnaa dard liye hue hai......


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teri khushboo ka pata karti hai.. - 1st April 2016, 05:41 PM

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Inhi ka ek buland sher yaad aa raha hai,

abr baraste to inaayat uski
shaakh to sirf dua karti hai
waaah..behad umda sher pesh kiya hai anu...

ye poori ghzal hee kamaal hai..share kar rahi hoon...dekhiyega.

Teri khushbu ka pata karti hai
Mujh pe ehsan hawa karti hai

Shab ki tanhai main ab to aksar
Guftagu tujh se raha karti hai

Dil ko us rah pe chalna hi nahin
Jo mujhe tujh se juda karti hai

Zindagi meri thi lekin ab to
Tere kahne main raha karti hai

Us ne dekha hi nahin warna ye ankh
Dil ka ehwal kaha karti hai

Beniyaz-e-kaf-e-dariya angusht
Ret par nam likha karti hai

Sham parte hi kisi shakhs ki yad
Kucha-e-jan main sada karti hai

Mujh se bhi us ka hai waisa hi suluk
Hal jo tera ana??? Karti hai

Dukh hua karta hai kuch aur bayan
Bat kuch aur hua karti hai

Abr barse to inayat us ki
Shakh to sirf dua karti hai

Masla jab bhi utha chiragon ka
Faisala sirf hawa karti hai






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ek sher suna tha kahin, shaayad ke Parween saahiba ka hi hai... par agar unka na ho to gustaakhii muaaf ho aur sher ko dekhen, kitnaa dard liye hue hai......


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waah waah!!!!yakeenan ye sher khud me ek dastaan hai...

bahut shuriya ye nayaab sher hamare sath share karne ke liye..

aate rahiyega..



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waah waah!!!!yakeenan ye sher khud me ek dastaan hai...

bahut shuriya ye nayaab sher hamare sath share karne ke liye..

aate rahiyega..
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raat gehri hai magr chaand chamakta hai abhi - 2nd April 2016, 02:36 PM

ek nazm share kar rahi hun....jisme wasl ki rangat aur judai ka darr kitni khoobi se likha gaya hai........


raat gehri hai magr chaand chamakta hai abhi
mere maathey pe tera piyar damakta hai abhi
meri saaNsoN mai tera lams mehekta hai abhi
mere seene mai tera naam dhadkta hai abhi
zeest karne ko mere paas bhut kuch hai abhi

teri awaaz ka jaadu hai abhi mere liyeiN
tere malboos ki khushboo hai abhi mere liyeiN
teri baaheiN tera pehloo hai abhi mere liyeiN
sab se bad kar meri jaaN tu hai abhi mere liyeiN
zeest karne ko mere pass bhut kuch hai abhi
aaj ki shab to kisi touR guzar jaayegi!

aaj ke baad magr rang e wafa kya hoga
ishq hairaaN sar e sher e saba kya hoga
mere qatil! tera andaaz e jafa kya hoga!

aaj ki shab to bhut kuch hai, magr kal ke liyeiN
ek andesha e benaam hai aur kuch bhi nahi
dekhna ye hai ke kal tujh se mulaqaat ke baad
rang e umeed khilega ke bikhr jaayega!
waqt parwaaz karega ke teher jaayega!
jeet ho jaayegi ya khairl bigad jaayega!
khwaab ka sheher rahega ke ujad jaayega!!



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Chaaraa – gar haar gaya ho jaise - 4th April 2016, 09:57 AM

Chaaraa – gar haar gaya ho jaise
Ab to marnaa hi dawaa ho jaise



Mujhse bichhRa tha vo pahle bhi magar
Ab ke yeh dard naya ho jaise


Mere maathe pe tere pyar kaa haath
Rooh par dast E sabaa ho jaise


YuN bahut haNs k mila tha lekin
Dil hi dil me woh khafaa ho jaise


Sar chhupaayeN to badan khulta hai
Zeest muflis ki ridaa ho jaise



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waaah..behad umda sher pesh kiya hai anu...

ye poori ghzal hee kamaal hai..share kar rahi hoon...dekhiyega.

Teri khushbu ka pata karti hai
Mujh pe ehsan hawa karti hai

Shab ki tanhai main ab to aksar
Guftagu tujh se raha karti hai

Dil ko us rah pe chalna hi nahin
Jo mujhe tujh se juda karti hai

Zindagi meri thi lekin ab to
Tere kahne main raha karti hai

Us ne dekha hi nahin warna ye ankh
Dil ka ehwal kaha karti hai

Beniyaz-e-kaf-e-dariya angusht
Ret par nam likha karti hai

Sham parte hi kisi shakhs ki yad
Kucha-e-jan main sada karti hai

Mujh se bhi us ka hai waisa hi suluk
Hal jo tera ana??? Karti hai

Dukh hua karta hai kuch aur bayan
Bat kuch aur hua karti hai

Abr barse to inayat us ki
Shakh to sirf dua karti hai

Masla jab bhi utha chiragon ka
Faisala sirf hawa karti hai



Bahut khoob - yaha tak dil mein utar gayi ki ise gaane ki himaakat bhi kar baithaa...shukriyaa share karne ke liye



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Chaaraa – gar haar gaya ho jaise
Ab to marnaa hi dawaa ho jaise



Mujhse bichhRa tha vo pahle bhi magar
Ab ke yeh dard naya ho jaise


Mere maathe pe tere pyar kaa haath
Rooh par dast E sabaa ho jaise


YuN bahut haNs k mila tha lekin
Dil hi dil me woh khafaa ho jaise


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Bahut khoob nazm hai - ek sher jis par musalsal daad di use phir arz farmaa raha hoon

YuN bahut haNs k mila tha lekin
Dil hi dil me woh khafaa ho jaise



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Bahut khoob - yaha tak dil mein utar gayi ki ise gaane ki himaakat bhi kar baithaa...shukriyaa share karne ke liye
Bilkul ghazal ka jadu hai hee aisa....aur aapki awaaz me ise sunkar aur bhi lutf aaya....

Sath dene ka shukriya..



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Ek aur bahut pur asar ghazal aapke saamne rakh raha hoon

apni ruswai tere nam ka charcha dekhun
ek zara sher kahun aur main kya kya dekhun

nind a jaye to kya mahfilen barpa dekhun
ankh khul jaye to tanhai ka sahra dekhun

sham bhi ho gai dhundhala gai ankhen bhi meri
bhulnewale main kab tak tera rasta dekhun

sab ziden us ki main puri karun har bat sunun
ek bache ki tarah se use hansta dekhun

mujh pe cha jaye wo barsat ki khushbu ki tarah
ang ang apna usi rut main mahakta dekhun

tu meri tarah se yakta hai magar mere habib
ji main ata hai koi aur bhi tujh sa dekhun

main ne jis lamhe ko puja hai use bas ek bar
khwab ban kar teri ankhon main utarta dekhun

tu mera kuch nahin lagta hai magar jan-e-hayat
jane kyon tere liye dil ko dharakta dekhun



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Ek aur bahut pur asar ghazal aapke saamne rakh raha hoon

apni ruswai tere nam ka charcha dekhun
ek zara sher kahun aur main kya kya dekhun

nind a jaye to kya mahfilen barpa dekhun
ankh khul jaye to tanhai ka sahra dekhun

sham bhi ho gai dhundhala gai ankhen bhi meri
bhulnewale main kab tak tera rasta dekhun

sab ziden us ki main puri karun har bat sunun
ek bache ki tarah se use hansta dekhun

mujh pe cha jaye wo barsat ki khushbu ki tarah
ang ang apna usi rut main mahakta dekhun

tu meri tarah se yakta hai magar mere habib
ji main ata hai koi aur bhi tujh sa dekhun

main ne jis lamhe ko puja hai use bas ek bar
khwab ban kar teri ankhon main utarta dekhun

tu mera kuch nahin lagta hai magar jan-e-hayat
jane kyon tere liye dil ko dharakta dekhun

waah bahut khoobsoorat ghazal share ki hai mast ji...
har ek sher pe dil se waah nikli.....



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dasht-e-shab par dikhaa_ii kyaa dengii - 5th April 2016, 01:55 PM

dasht-e-shab par dikhaa_ii kyaa dengii
silavaTe.n roshanii me.n ubharengii

ghar kii diivaare.n mere jaane par
apanii tanhaa_iyo.n ko sochengii

u.Ngaliyo.n ko taraash duu.N phir bhii
aadatan us kaa naam likkhengii

rang-o-buu se kahii.n panaah nahii.n
Khvaahishe.n bhii kahaa.N amaa.N dengii

ek Khushbuu se bach bhii jaa_uu.N agar
duusarii nikahate.n jaka.D lengii

khi.Dakiyo.n par dabiiz parde ho.n
baarishe.n phir bhii dastake.n dengii



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dil kaa kyaa hai vo to chaahegaa musal_sal milanaa - 5th April 2016, 01:56 PM


dil kaa kyaa hai vo to chaahegaa musal_sal milanaa
vo sitam_gar bhii magar soche kisii pal milanaa

vaa.N nahii.n vaqt to ham bhii hai.n adiim-ul-fursat
us se kyaa kahiye jo har roz kahe kal milanaa

ishq kii raah ke musaafir kaa muqaddar maaluum
dasht-e-ummiid me.n andeshe kaa baadal milanaa

daaman-e-shab ko agar chaak bhii kar le.n to kahaa.N
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Tujh se to koi gila nahiN hai - 6th April 2016, 04:10 PM

Tujh se to koi gila nahiN hai
Qismat meN meri sila nahiN hai


BichhRe to na jane haal kya ho
Jo shakhs abhi mila nahiN hai

Jeeney ki to aarzu hi kab thi
Marne ka bhi housla nahiN hai

Jo zeest ko mo’tabar bana de
Aisaa koi silsila nahiN hai

Khushbu ka hisaab ho chuka hai
Aur phool abhi khila nahiN hai

Sarshari-E-rahbari meN dekha
Peechhay mera qaafila nahiN hai

Ek Thais pe dil ka phoot bahna
Chhunay meN to aabla nahiN hai



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Tera ghar aur mera jungle bheegta hai sath sath... - 10th April 2016, 03:55 PM

Tera ghar aur mera jungal bheegta hai saath saath
Aisi barsaateN ke badal bheegta hai saath saath


Bachpane ka saath hai phir aik se dono ke dukh
Raat ka aur mera aanchal bheegta hai saath saath


Woh ajab duniya, k sab khanjar bakaf phirte hain, aur
Kaanch ke peyaloN maiN sandal bheegta hai saath saath


Baarish-e-sang-e-malamat maiN bhi woh hamraah hai
MaiN bhii bheeguN khud bhi pagal bheegta hai saath saath


LaRkiyoN ke dukh ajab hote haiN sukh us se ajeeb
Hans rahi haiN aur kaajal bheegta hai saath saath



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BichhRe to na jane haal kya ho
Jo shakhs abhi mila nahiN hai

Jeeney ki to aarzu hi kab thi
Marne ka bhi housla nahiN hai

Jo zeest ko mo’tabar bana de
Aisaa koi silsila nahiN hai

Khushbu ka hisaab ho chuka hai
Aur phool abhi khila nahiN hai

Sarshari-E-rahbari meN dekha
Peechhay mera qaafila nahiN hai

Ek Thais pe dil ka phoot bahna
Chhunay meN to aabla nahiN hai
kya baat kya baat kya baat....bahut khoob



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kya baat kya baat kya baat....bahut khoob
aapke sath ka behad shukriya aate rahiyega....

pesh hai ek aur dil chhoo lene wala kalaam...

Sundar komal sapano ki baraat guzar gayi janaa,
Dhoop aankhon tak aa pahunchi hai raat guzar gayi jana.

Bhor samay tak jis ne humein baham uljhaye rakha,
woh albeli resham jaisi baat guzar gayi jana.

Sada ki dekhi raat humein iss baar mili toh chupke se,
Khali haath pe rakh ke kya saugaat guzar gayi jana.

Kis konpal ki aas mein ab tak waise hi sar-sabz ho tum?
Ab toh dhoop ka mausam hai barsaat guzar gayi jana.

Log na jaane kin raaton ki muraadein maanga karte hain?
Apni raat toh woh jo tere saath guzar gayi jana..!!




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aapke sath ka behad shukriya aate rahiyega....

pesh hai ek aur dil chhoo lene wala kalaam...

Sundar komal sapano ki baraat guzar gayi janaa,
Dhoop aankhon tak aa pahunchi hai raat guzar gayi jana.

Bhor samay tak jis ne humein baham uljhaye rakha,
woh albeli resham jaisi baat guzar gayi jana.

Sada ki dekhi raat humein iss baar mili toh chupke se,
Khali haath pe rakh ke kya saugaat guzar gayi jana.

Kis konpal ki aas mein ab tak waise hi sar-sabz ho tum?
Ab toh dhoop ka mausam hai barsaat guzar gayi jana.

Log na jaane kin raaton ki muraadein maanga karte hain?
Apni raat toh woh jo tere saath guzar gayi jana..!!

Bahut umdaa har sher pur asar.....



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aapke sath ka behad shukriya aate rahiyega....

pesh hai ek aur dil chhoo lene wala kalaam...

Sundar komal sapano ki baraat guzar gayi janaa,
Dhoop aankhon tak aa pahunchi hai raat guzar gayi jana.

Bhor samay tak jis ne humein baham uljhaye rakha,
woh albeli resham jaisi baat guzar gayi jana.

Sada ki dekhi raat humein iss baar mili toh chupke se,
Khali haath pe rakh ke kya saugaat guzar gayi jana.

Kis konpal ki aas mein ab tak waise hi sar-sabz ho tum?
Ab toh dhoop ka mausam hai barsaat guzar gayi jana.

Log na jaane kin raaton ki muraadein maanga karte hain?
Apni raat toh woh jo tere saath guzar gayi jana..!!

Bahut umdaa har sher pur asar.....



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Ek aur bahut hi umdaa ghazal ki taraf rukh karte hain.

chalne ka hosla nahin, rukna muhaal kar diya
ishq k is safar ne to mujh ko nihaal kar diya

milte huwe dilon k beech aur tha faisla koi
us ne magar bicharte waqt aur sawal kar diya

ae meri gul zameen tujhe chaah thi ik kitaab ki
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Ek aur bahut hi umdaa ghazal ki taraf rukh karte hain.

chalne ka hosla nahin, rukna muhaal kar diya
ishq k is safar ne to mujh ko nihaal kar diya

milte huwe dilon k beech aur tha faisla koi
us ne magar bicharte waqt aur sawal kar diya

ae meri gul zameen tujhe chaah thi ik kitaab ki
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ab ke hawa k saath hay daaman-e-yaar muntazir
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mumkina faislon main aik hijar ka faisla bhi tha
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chehra-o-naam aik saath aaj na yaad aa sake
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muddaton baad us ne aaj mujh se koi gila kiya
mansab-e-dilbari pe kya mujh ko bahaal kar diya


waah aapne behad khoob ghazal share ki hai..

pahle bhi kai baar suni hai..aur aaj dubara sun ke vahi lutf hasil hua....

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pahle bhi kai baar suni hai..aur aaj dubara sun ke vahi lutf hasil hua....

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Kuch to hawa bhi sard thi kuch tha tera khayal bhi - 18th April 2016, 10:13 AM

Ek aur haseen ghazal mehfil ki nazar...

Kuch to hawa bhi sard thi kuch tha tera khayal bhi
Dil ko Khushi ke sath sath hota raha malal bhi

Baat vo adhi raat ki, raat vo poore chand ki
Chand bhi ain chet ka, us pe tera jamal bhi

Sab se nazar bacha ke vo mujh ko aise dekhtay
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Ek aur haseen ghazal mehfil ki nazar...

Kuch to hawa bhi sard thi kuch tha tera khayal bhi
Dil ko Khushi ke sath sath hota raha malal bhi

Baat vo adhi raat ki, raat vo poore chand ki
Chand bhi ain chet ka, us pe tera jamal bhi

Sab se nazar bacha ke vo mujh ko aise dekhtay
Ek dafa to ruk gaye gardish-e-mah-o-sal bhi

Dil to chamak sake ga kya, phir bhi tarash ke dekh lo
Shishagaran-e-shahar ke hath ka ye kamal bhi

Us ko na pa sake the jab dil ka ajeeb hal tha
Ab jo palat ke dekhiye baat thi kuch muhal bhi

Meri talab tha ek shakhs, vo jo nahin mila to phir
Hath dua se yun gira, bhool gaya sawal bhi

Sham ki na-samajh hawa pooch rahi hai ik pata
Mauj-e-hava-e-ku-e-yar kuch to mera Khayal bhi


Waah...umda sharing.....

Bahut shukriya................



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Bahut shukriya................
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ek aur haseen ghazal

vo to Khushbu hai havaon men bikhar jayega
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ham to samajhe the ke ek zaKhm hai bhar jayega
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Waaahhhh....haseen kalaam share kiya hai aapne bahut khoob..



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Waaahhhh....haseen kalaam share kiya hai aapne bahut khoob..
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ChiraaGh maangte rahne ka kuch sabab bhi nahiN - 21st April 2016, 01:31 PM

ChiraaGh maangte rahne ka kuch sabab bhi nahiN
Andhera kaise batayeN k ab to shab bhi nahiN


Main apne zo’m mein ek bazyaft par khush huN
Ye waqia hai ke mujh ko mila wo ab bhi nahiN


Jo mere shai’r meN mujh se zayada boltaa hai
Main os ki bazm meN ek harf zer-e-lab bhi nahiN


Aur ab to zindagi karne ke sau tareeqe haiN
Hum us ke hijr meN tanha rahe thay tab bhi nahiN


Kamal shakhs tha jis ne mujhe tabaah kiya
Khilaaf us ke ye dil ho saka hai ab bhi nahiN


Ye dastakeN ye meri zindagi ki aadhi raat
Hawaa ka shor samajh luN to kuch ajab bhi nahiN


Ye dukh nahiN K andheroN se sulh ki hum ne
Malaal ye hai ke ab subH ki talab bhi nahiN


Hisaab-e-dar-badari tujh se maang saktaa hai
Ghareeb-e-shahr magar itna be adab bhi nahiN


HameN bahut hai ye saadaat-e-ishq ki nisbat
Ke ye qabeela koii aisa kam nasab bhi nahiN



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Andhera kaise batayeN k ab to shab bhi nahiN


Main apne zo’m mein ek bazyaft par khush huN
Ye waqia hai ke mujh ko mila wo ab bhi nahiN


Jo mere shai’r meN mujh se zayada boltaa hai
Main os ki bazm meN ek harf zer-e-lab bhi nahiN


Aur ab to zindagi karne ke sau tareeqe haiN
Hum us ke hijr meN tanha rahe thay tab bhi nahiN


Kamal shakhs tha jis ne mujhe tabaah kiya
Khilaaf us ke ye dil ho saka hai ab bhi nahiN


Ye dastakeN ye meri zindagi ki aadhi raat
Hawaa ka shor samajh luN to kuch ajab bhi nahiN


Ye dukh nahiN K andheroN se sulh ki hum ne
Malaal ye hai ke ab subH ki talab bhi nahiN


Hisaab-e-dar-badari tujh se maang saktaa hai
Ghareeb-e-shahr magar itna be adab bhi nahiN


HameN bahut hai ye saadaat-e-ishq ki nisbat
Ke ye qabeela koii aisa kam nasab bhi nahiN
Har sher pur asar bahut umdaa ghazal share ki Madhu aapne

Hisaab-e-dar-badari tujh se maang saktaa hai
Ghareeb-e-shahr magar itna be adab bhi nahiN


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Malal Hai Magar Itna Malal Thorhi Hai
Ye Aankh Rone Ki Shiddat Se Laal Thori Hai

Bus Apne Wastey Hi Fikar-Mand Hain Sab Log
Yahan Kisi Ko Kisi Ka Khayal Thorhi Hai

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Ye Khof-E-Hijr Hai, Shoq-E-Wisal Thori Hai

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ek aur dil ajeez ghazal aap sab ke samne pesh hai....


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Bus Apne Wastey Hi Fikar-Mand Hain Sab Log
Yahan Kisi Ko Kisi Ka Khayal Thorhi Hai

Paron Ko Kaat Dia Hai Urhan Se Pehle
Ye Khof-E-Hijr Hai, Shoq-E-Wisal Thori Hai

Maza To Jab Hai K Har Ke Bhi Hanstay Raho
Hamaisha Jeet Hi Jana Kamal Thorhi Hai??

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ek aur dil ajeez ghazal aap sab ke samne pesh hai....


Bhulanay Se Jo Bhuly Na Wo Kahani Chor Jaoungi
Teri Ankhoon Me Pani Ki Aisy Nami Chor Jaoungi

Lipat Kar Dair Tak Dar-O-Dewar Roye Gy
Main Aisi Sog Me Lipti Jwani Chor Jaoungi

Mitao Gy Kahan Thak Tum Meri Batan Meri Yadan
Main Har Ik Mor Per Apni Nishani Chor Jaoungi

Mera Ya Lafz Mujha Mar Kay Bhi Marna Nahi Dain Gay
Main Chup Ho Kay Bhi Lehje Ki Rawani Chor Jaoun Gi

Kuch Is Tarhan Se Niklon Gi Is Dunya Ko Thukra Kar
Main Dushman Kay Bhi Chehry Par Herani Chor Jaoungi
Bahut khoob ghazalein mehfil mein lekar aayi ho Madhu - yunhi yeh rawaangi musalsal chalti rahe



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