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oh kinna taniu yaad “maikasha” kardi hovegi - 20th October 2015, 04:58 AM

poh diyaaN raataN, kalli-kalli Thar’di hovegi
se’k teri bukkal da chete kardi hovegi
taare gin gin phir jad hauNke bhar’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

kothey uttoN raahaaN tak’yiaaN jaaNdiyaaN hon’giyaaN
sunniyaaN galiyaaN rooh nu vadh-vadh khaaNidyaaN hon’giyaaN
biNdey-jhaTTey aa boohe te khaR’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

mehram jad koi dil nu thes lagauNda hove’ga
akkhaaN muuhrey ishq tera lehrauNda hovega
paa ke aape baat, huNgaare bhardi hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

utTh sawere pauNdi honi choori kaavaaN nu
saara din phir tak’di rehndi honi raahaN nu
gheo de deeve baal gali vich dhar’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

tainu pher milan de supne bun’dee honi aa
jholi choN haNjuaaN de moti chun’dee honi aa
aas de chullhe reejh di roTi saD’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha” kardi hovegi

akkhraaN vichoN chehra TohNdi honi aa kamli
kaaGhaz seene laa ke ronNdi honi aa kamli
naam tera jad kisey Ghazal vich paDh’di hovegi
oh kinna taniu yaad “maikasha” kardi hovegi



ਪੋਹ ਦੀਆਂ ਰਾਤਾਂ ਕੱਲੀ-ਕੱਲੀ ਠਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਸੇਕ ਤੇਰੀ ਬੁੱਕਲ਼ ਦਾ ਚੇਤੇ ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਤਾਰੇ ਗਿਣ-ਗਿਣ ਫਿਰ ਜਦ ਹੌਕੇ ਭਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿਨਾਂ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ "ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ" ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਕੋਠੇ ਉਤੋਂ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਤੱਕੀਆਂ ਜਾਂਦੀਆਂ ਹੋਣਗੀਆਂ
ਸੁਨੀਆਂ ਗਲ਼ੀਆਂ ਰੂਹ ਨੂੰ ਵੱਡ-ਵੱਡ ਖਾਂਦੀਆਂ ਹੋਣਗੀਆਂ
ਬਿੰਦੇ ਝੱਟੇ ਆ ਬੂਹੇ ਤੇ ਖੜਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਮਹਿਰਮ ਜਦ ਕੋਈ ਦਿਲ ਨੂੰ ਠੇਸ ਲਗਾਉਂਦਾ ਹੋਵੇਗਾ
ਅੱਖਾਂ ਮੂਹਰੇ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਤੇਰਾ ਲਹਿਰਾਉਂਦਾ ਹੋਵੇਗਾ
ਪਾ ਕੇ ਆਪੇ ਬਾਤ ਹੁਂਗਾਰੇ ਭਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਉੱਠ ਸਵੇਰੇ ਪਾਉਂਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਚੂਰੀ ਕਾਂਵਾਂ ਨੂੰ
ਸਾਰਾ ਦਿਨ ਫਿਰ ਤੱਕਦੀ ਰਿਹਂਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਨੂੰ
ਘਿਉ ਦੇ ਦੀਵੇ ਬਾਲ਼ ਗਲ਼ੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਧਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਤੈਨੂੰ ਫੇਰ ਮਿਲਣ ਦੇ ਸੁਪਨੇ ਬੁਣਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ
ਝੋਲ਼ੀ ਚੋਂ ਹੰਜੂਆਂ ਦੇ ਮੋਤੀ ਚੁਣਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ
ਆਸ ਦੇ ਚੁੱਲੇ ਰੀਝ ਦੀ ਰੋਟੀ ਸੜਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਅੱਖਾਂ ਵਿਚੋਂ ਚਿਹਰਾ ਟੋਹਦੀਂ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ ਕਮਲ਼ੀ
ਕਾਗਜ਼ ਸੀਨੇ ਲਾ ਕੇ ਰੋਂਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ ਕਮਲ਼ੀ
ਨਾਮ ਤੇਰਾ ਜਦ ਕਿਸੇ ਗ਼ਜ਼ਲ ਵਿੱਚ ਪੜਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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poh diyaaN raataN, kalli-kalli Thar’di hovegi
se’k teri bukkal da chete kardi hovegi
taare gin gin phir jad hauNke bhar’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

kothey uttoN raahaaN tak’yiaaN jaaNdiyaaN hon’giyaaN
sunniyaaN galiyaaN rooh nu vadh-vadh khaaNidyaaN hon’giyaaN
biNdey-jhaTTey aa boohe te khaR’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

mehram jad koi dil nu thes lagauNda hove’ga
akkhaaN muuhrey ishq tera lehrauNda hovega
paa ke aape baat, huNgaare bhardi hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

utTh sawere pauNdi honi choori kaavaaN nu
saara din phir tak’di rehndi honi raahaN nu
gheo de deeve baal gali vich dhar’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

tainu pher milan de supne bun’dee honi aa
jholi choN haNjuaaN de moti chun’dee honi aa
aas de chullhe reejh di roTi saD’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha” kardi hovegi

akkhraaN vichoN chehra TohNdi honi aa kamli
phir kaaGhaz seene laa ke ronNdi honi aa kamli
naam tera jad kisey Ghazal vich paDh’di hovegi
oh kinna taniu yaad “maikasha” kardi hovegi


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Ustaad ji jinni vaari vi tusi likhya dil ton har baar aah nikaldi hae..ek vaar fer kamaal kar tusi....padh ke dil hauke maarda rehaa ta aankh'cho athruu vagde rahe.....hats off to you again sir.....keep writing...



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Ustaad ji jinni vaari vi tusi likhya dil ton har baar aah nikaldi hae..ek vaar fer kamaal kar tusi....padh ke dil hauke maarda rehaa ta aankh'cho athruu vagde rahe.....hats off to you again sir.....keep writing...
yaar Anu eh "ustaad" na keha kar, dost,yaar,veer zyada chaNga lagdaa

Many thanks for your kind words.

tuhaade varge khair-khwaahaaN te hamdardaaN da saath te hausla-afzaai bohat hi mayine rakhde ne, dil khush ho jaaNda, nazm bhaaveN kisey kam di hove ya na hove

tuhaadiyaaN mohabbataaN da dil diyaN tehaN toN shukurguzaar haaN

ek baNdh jehDa nazm ch darj karna bhul geya, usde do misrey :

appney hi parchaaveN toN jad dar'di hovegi
us weley tainu yaad laazmi kardi hovegi


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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aahhhh maikash bhai baahut dard hai apki kavita me.......
i accept ke mujhe poori arah se to samajh nahi aaya magar pyaar ki koi zubaaan naahi hotii aur apke alfaaz mere dil tak utarte chale gaye....

mujh gareeb ki naaaqis daad pesh hain aapko.. qubool kijiyegaa.....

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aahhhh maikash bhai baahut dard hai apki kavita me.......
i accept ke mujhe poori arah se to samajh nahi aaya magar pyaar ki koi zubaaan naahi hotii aur apke alfaaz mere dil tak utarte chale gaye....

mujh gareeb ki naaaqis daad pesh hain aapko.. qubool kijiyegaa.....

Shaad....
Shaad bhai yeh aapki bepanaah mohabbat hai jo mujh naalaayiq ki is qadar hauNsla-afzaii karte haiN, is muravvat aur apne-pan ke liye "shukriya" jaisa adnaa sa lafz kaafi nahiiN hai

aapki daad-o-mohabbat sar aaNkhoN par miyaaN


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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Dil ke bohut kareeb raha aapka kalaam veerji. Bohut saal yahi sab karte Maine guzaare hain. Bohut shaamein chat par guzaari hain tanha. Bohut baar diye jalaaye hain.

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poh diyaaN raataN, kalli-kalli Thar’di hovegi
se’k teri bukkal da chete kardi hovegi
taare gin gin phir jad hauNke bhar’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

kothey uttoN raahaaN tak’yiaaN jaaNdiyaaN hon’giyaaN
sunniyaaN galiyaaN rooh nu vadh-vadh khaaNidyaaN hon’giyaaN
biNdey-jhaTTey aa boohe te khaR’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

mehram jad koi dil nu thes lagauNda hove’ga
akkhaaN muuhrey ishq tera lehrauNda hovega
paa ke aape baat, huNgaare bhardi hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

utTh sawere pauNdi honi choori kaavaaN nu
saara din phir tak’di rehndi honi raahaN nu
gheo de deeve baal gali vich dhar’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha’ kardi hovegi

tainu pher milan de supne bun’dee honi aa
jholi choN haNjuaaN de moti chun’dee honi aa
aas de chullhe reejh di roTi saD’di hovegi
oh kinna tainu yaad “maikasha” kardi hovegi

akkhraaN vichoN chehra TohNdi honi aa kamli
kaaGhaz seene laa ke ronNdi honi aa kamli
naam tera jad kisey Ghazal vich paDh’di hovegi
oh kinna taniu yaad “maikasha” kardi hovegi



ਪੋਹ ਦੀਆਂ ਰਾਤਾਂ ਕੱਲੀ-ਕੱਲੀ ਠਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਸੇਕ ਤੇਰੀ ਬੁੱਕਲ਼ ਦਾ ਚੇਤੇ ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਤਾਰੇ ਗਿਣ-ਗਿਣ ਫਿਰ ਜਦ ਹੌਕੇ ਭਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿਨਾਂ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ "ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ" ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਕੋਠੇ ਉਤੋਂ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਤੱਕੀਆਂ ਜਾਂਦੀਆਂ ਹੋਣਗੀਆਂ
ਸੁਨੀਆਂ ਗਲ਼ੀਆਂ ਰੂਹ ਨੂੰ ਵੱਡ-ਵੱਡ ਖਾਂਦੀਆਂ ਹੋਣਗੀਆਂ
ਬਿੰਦੇ ਝੱਟੇ ਆ ਬੂਹੇ ਤੇ ਖੜਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਮਹਿਰਮ ਜਦ ਕੋਈ ਦਿਲ ਨੂੰ ਠੇਸ ਲਗਾਉਂਦਾ ਹੋਵੇਗਾ
ਅੱਖਾਂ ਮੂਹਰੇ ਇਸ਼ਕ ਤੇਰਾ ਲਹਿਰਾਉਂਦਾ ਹੋਵੇਗਾ
ਪਾ ਕੇ ਆਪੇ ਬਾਤ ਹੁਂਗਾਰੇ ਭਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਉੱਠ ਸਵੇਰੇ ਪਾਉਂਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਚੂਰੀ ਕਾਂਵਾਂ ਨੂੰ
ਸਾਰਾ ਦਿਨ ਫਿਰ ਤੱਕਦੀ ਰਿਹਂਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਨੂੰ
ਘਿਉ ਦੇ ਦੀਵੇ ਬਾਲ਼ ਗਲ਼ੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਧਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਤੈਨੂੰ ਫੇਰ ਮਿਲਣ ਦੇ ਸੁਪਨੇ ਬੁਣਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ
ਝੋਲ਼ੀ ਚੋਂ ਹੰਜੂਆਂ ਦੇ ਮੋਤੀ ਚੁਣਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ
ਆਸ ਦੇ ਚੁੱਲੇ ਰੀਝ ਦੀ ਰੋਟੀ ਸੜਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

ਅੱਖਾਂ ਵਿਚੋਂ ਚਿਹਰਾ ਟੋਹਦੀਂ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ ਕਮਲ਼ੀ
ਕਾਗਜ਼ ਸੀਨੇ ਲਾ ਕੇ ਰੋਂਦੀ ਹੋਣੀ ਆ ਕਮਲ਼ੀ
ਨਾਮ ਤੇਰਾ ਜਦ ਕਿਸੇ ਗ਼ਜ਼ਲ ਵਿੱਚ ਪੜਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ
ਓਹ ਕਿੰਨਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਯਾਦ “ਮੈਕਸ਼ਾ” ਕਰਦੀ ਹੋਵੇਗੀ

maikash


Maikash ji....menu te lafz nahi mil rhe ena ehsaasa lye, tuhade ehsaas pad ke ek film jehi aakha saamne goom gye, jive koi film chal rhi hove, ek ek lafz bemisaal hai, aida apne ehsaas bayaan karan lye bada jigra chahida hai.

khush rho
rabb raakha


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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