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Kaash Kabhi Hota Mere Ikhtiyar mein!
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Kaash Kabhi Hota Mere Ikhtiyar mein! - 9th March 2005, 02:36 PM

Kaash kabhi hota yeh mere ekhtiyaar mein,
Mein tujh hi ko rang deta jaana apne pyaar mein,

Mein tujhko itna pyaar deta jaan-e-aarzoo,
Tu khud ko bhool jati mere aetbaar mein..

Tu jo kabhi bulati mulaqat ke liye
Bechain hokar phirtey mere intezar mein

Mein der se jo aata naraz hokey tum,
Har baat ka jawaab dete inkaar mein

Tu jo kissi baat par mujhse rooth jati
Phir mein tujhe manata bade israar mein

Maan kar tu mujhse sirf yeh hi kehti
Hai yakeen naheen kammi koi tere pyar mein

Kaash kabhi hota yah mere ekteyaar mein,
Mein tujh hi ko rang deta jaana apne pyaar mein...........



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Re: Kaash Kabhi Hota Mere Ikhtiyar mein! - 9th March 2005, 02:53 PM

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Kaash kabhi hota yeh mere ekhtiyaar mein,
Mein tujh hi ko rang deta jaana apne pyaar mein,

Mein tujhko itna pyaar deta jaan-e-aarzoo,
Tu khud ko bhool jati mere aetbaar mein..

Tu jo kabhi bulati mulaqat ke liye
Bechain hokar phirtey mere intezar mein

Mein der se jo aata naraz hokey tum,
Har baat ka jawaab dete inkaar mein

Tu jo kissi baat par mujhse rooth jati
Phir mein tujhe manata bade israar mein

Maan kar tu mujhse sirf yeh hi kehti
Hai yakeen naheen kammi koi tere pyar mein

Kaash kabhi hota yah mere ekteyaar mein,
Mein tujh hi ko rang deta jaana apne pyaar mein...........



azim (SPECIALLY TO ALL MY FRIENDS )
buhut khoob likha hai azim jee
kuch kehne ke liye lafz nahi hai sab aapne keh diya.

badal tum itna na barso ki
wo naa aa sake
jab wo aa jaye tab tab
itna barso ki wo
wapas jaa na sake.

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pyarr karo,pyarr ki inteha dekho
pyarr karo,pyarr ka intezaar karo.
   
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hi simran - 9th March 2005, 03:17 PM

hi simran jee

shookriya yeh to bas ek koshis ke hai meine aap ko pasand aaye yeh sunke muje bahoot accha laga bas yeh sab aap dostoon ke duwa aur aap dostoon ka pyar hai jo mien yeh likhne pe majboor kar raha hai any ways hope u be in touch and may u live happy and prosperous life.



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9th March 2005, 03:24 PM

apki feelings hai isme
apke jazbaat hai isse badi baat aur kya hu sakti hai
ju apne jazbaat loogo ko ek hi lafz mein bayaan kar de
uski tareef tu karni hi chaiye.

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Re: Kaash Kabhi Hota Mere Ikhtiyar mein! - 9th March 2005, 03:45 PM

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Originally posted by gulabjamun_4_u
Kaash kabhi hota yeh mere ekhtiyaar mein,
Mein tujh hi ko rang deta jaana apne pyaar mein,

Mein tujhko itna pyaar deta jaan-e-aarzoo,
Tu khud ko bhool jati mere aetbaar mein..

Tu jo kabhi bulati mulaqat ke liye
Bechain hokar phirtey mere intezar mein

Mein der se jo aata naraz hokey tum,
Har baat ka jawaab dete inkaar mein

Tu jo kissi baat par mujhse rooth jati
Phir mein tujhe manata bade israar mein

Maan kar tu mujhse sirf yeh hi kehti
Hai yakeen naheen kammi koi tere pyar mein

Kaash kabhi hota yah mere ekteyaar mein,
Mein tujh hi ko rang deta jaana apne pyaar mein...........



azim (SPECIALLY TO ALL MY FRIENDS )
wah gulabjamunji.... sahi mein bahut acha likha hai aapne..

kash koi aisa pyaar karne wala milta ...
jo manata hume...
kash koi aisa pyaar karne wala milta...
jo deta phool hume...
kaash koi aisa pyaar karne wala milta...
jo rang deta apne pyar mein hume.....

tried to reply....

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hi simran - 9th March 2005, 05:59 PM

hi simran je!


hmmmmmmm shayad aapne sach kaha hai likh to diya hai magar yeh sare feelings muje apne doston se he mili hia kyoon woh log itna pyar karte hai ke muje majboor karte hai likhne ke liye aur aap ke dosti ke liye bahoot bahoot shoookriya aur mein apne aap ko bahoot koosh naseeb samajta hoon ke tumse dosti hoon.


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hi priyanka - 9th March 2005, 06:01 PM

hi priyanka je


kya baat hai aaj aapne hamare shyrie ka reply diya hamare kismat khool gaye waise aapne pehle baar reply kiya hai aur mein aap ka reply dekh ke bahoot koosh hoon aur yeh baat se bhi koosh hoon ke aap ko meri shyrie pasand aaye aur appreciation ke liye shookriya .


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Re: hi priyanka - 10th March 2005, 04:37 PM

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hi priyanka je


kya baat hai aaj aapne hamare shyrie ka reply diya hamare kismat khool gaye waise aapne pehle baar reply kiya hai aur mein aap ka reply dekh ke bahoot koosh hoon aur yeh baat se bhi koosh hoon ke aap ko meri shyrie pasand aaye aur appreciation ke liye shookriya .


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hey gulabjamunji...

well agar humare aane se aapki kismat khul gayi hai.. to hum koshish karenge ki aapki kismat khulti rahe.....

aapko mere reply se khushi mili yeh jaankar mujhe bahut acha.. laga....aapki shayri sahi mein achi thi...

well hum aapka naam jaante hai par aapse hi humne poermission mangi thi aapko is naam se bulane ki ... agar pasand nahi aaya hoga.. to sorry... aur bata dena...

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hi - 10th March 2005, 04:42 PM

hi priyanka

well aap ka reply dekh kar muje bahoot kooshe hooe aur aap ka baat karne ka aur reply dene ka andaz bhi muje bahoot pasand aaya waise priyanka ek baat batana chata hoon yeh jo tumne permission ke baat ke yeh baat kooch muje jame nahi jab dost mante he hoto phir permission kaise chalo mein tumhein permission deta hooon tum muje koi bhi name se boola sakte ho magar permission matleta .


any ways thakns for appreciation

take care sweet dreams
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