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3rd April 2006, 02:13 PM
Papa mere tum baitho paas
muje de do wahi atmavisvas jo diya karte they tum kabi jab paas tumare rehti thi mein unhi palo'n ko yaad kerti hun jab kandhey pe baith tumare ghumti thi saare ghar mei meri ek karahat se tum daudey aate they sab bhulkar meri khwaish per tum bhar dete they mera aanchal anginat chocolate'on se. Mere Papa tum to mere pyare dost hua kartey they Tume hi to apna Boy friend kaha kerti thi mein Tum hi to meri Maa they saathi bi to tum hi they. Ajao mere paas tum Papa dek lo aakar mujhe mein wahi choti si jaan hun tumari jiske aaspas mamta ka bichona nehin hei. Papa ke pyar se bana hua wo takiya bi nehin hei. Kaanch |
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3rd April 2006, 02:33 PM
aaj aapne papa ki yaad dila di mere pyaare papa hmm i am going to call him today only
sach mai missing him ek baar hsadi ho jaye to sab kuch kitan door ho jata hai sach mai papa has been very close to me i love my papa thnx kaanch ji for such a sweet poem shrdh 
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3rd April 2006, 02:46 PM
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Aapko bi papa ki yaad aayi to khusi hui. jaldi call karlijye unhe. wese ye ek sach hi hei jise meine baya kiya hei, bhale hi iske alfaz sadharan hein magar ehsas usi choti bachi ke dil se nikle hein. aapne sahi kah ki shadi ke baad duri ban jati hei. Magr mein abi bi single hun. meri mom or papa chandigarh mei hein or mei dehradun mein. apna khyal rakhiyga. aapki kaanch |
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3rd April 2006, 03:18 PM
Kanchan,
Wonderful.... i like these kind of poetry... ones which are heart felt... it shows ur love for ur dad ... Liked it Take Care Rohin |
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3rd April 2006, 03:24 PM
Bohat acha laga aapko padhkar...hamesha hi lagta hai par jab koi rachna khud par yaha use mehsoos kar k likhi jaye to aur bhi usme nikhar aa jata hai aur ye bhi dil se likhi hui hai aur ishke sabad bhi dil mein utar gaye aaj
Shukriyah................ Apka Diggaj Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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3rd April 2006, 03:29 PM
bahut dino baad ankhon ko nam karen walee ek rachana samne ayee mere dil ko choo gayee kabhee papa betee ke sambandh ko le kara maien bhee ek rachana poste ke ethee yahan woh bhee yaad aa gayee waqt mile to dekhana
bahut hee khoobsoorat hai ye rachana jo tum ne kahee meree kavita dekhana ---> http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=46198 anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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3rd April 2006, 04:11 PM
Kanchan Ji,
Very very emotional  Do keep sharing. ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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3rd April 2006, 05:47 PM
Sweet...so very sweet... Parental support is so important in our life... We become the way they groom us... Am lucky in this respect... have always been with my parents.. Touchwood...
Ehsaas bayaan karti rahiye... khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd April 2006, 08:08 PM
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3rd April 2006, 08:10 PM
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3rd April 2006, 08:15 PM
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4th April 2006, 11:07 AM
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poochunga nahin ki kaisi ho....kyonki tumhne ismei likh diya hei. hmm....sochna parhega ab  Khair, Papa ki jab itni yaad aarahi hai tow tumhne unse milney jaana chahiye. Kaanch, tumhney aam zindagi se jo shabd utthaye hain unhe parhkar bahaut aacha laga. Ek komal si rachna hai yeh, marm ehsaas chupa hai. Waise kaam hee sab kuch nahin hota hamesha, rishtey bhi humaari zindagi mein maayne rakhtey hain. aise shabd humey paraahney ke liye mera dhanyavaad. vipin ...ek dost 
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5th April 2006, 03:05 PM
HI Kanchan!!!
waisey to humey jayda waqt nahi milta, sayad aapki tarah mai v thoda busy hota hoon, lekin aaj jab thodi der ke liye apney ek ristedar ki brachna padney es site per aaya, to achanak meri nazar "PAPA" word per ruki, or mai bata nahi sakta ek ajib si hal chal mach gayi mere under, mai apney PAPA ke saath bitaye un puraney dino me chala gaya, maine dekha , kuchh logo ne isey padkar apney "PAPA" ko phone kiya, lekin Kaanch, meri majboori to ye hai na ki mai unhey phone lagaoon v to kaisey, unhoney apna koi number hi nahi diya humey, pichhley saal hi es duniya se kisi or duniya me gaye the, or aaj tak unhey hamari yaad nahi aayi, bhool gaye wo humey, lekin haumey unki yaad abhi v aati hai, usi yaadon ko aapney taja kar diya aaj fir.... pata hai kaanch, tumhari kavita padkar mai thoda senti ho gaya tha, lekin ab mai ro raha hoon............agar un tak tumhari aawaj pahoonche na, to bol dena, "rohit is waiting for ur (PAPA)number..........number na dena to na sahi, lekin us sey baaten jaroor kar lo....., he is really missing u" kitni massomiyat se likha hai tumney..( vishesh kar ye line "dek lo aakar mujhe", waqai bhai, touching one !!!)... Papa mere tum baitho paas muje de do wahi atmavisvas jo diya karte they tum kabi jab paas tumare rehti thi mein Ajao mere paas tum Papa dek lo aakar mujhe mein wahi choti si jaan hun tumari jiske aaspas mamta ka bichona nehin ..... kaanch, aaj pahley hi din mujhe tumsey ek sikayat ho gayi, tumney humey rula diya... LEKIN KOI BAAT NAHI BHAI, isi wajah se mai apne PAPA ke bahut karinb hokar aa gaya, ek bar fir wahi ehsaas mahsoosh kiya maine........aaj rokar man halka ho gaya, pichhle 1 saal se mai udas jaror tha, lekin roya kabhi nahi tha, kuchh khoney ka ehsaas to jaroor tha, lekin mahssosh karney ka mauka nahui mila , aaj wo mauka aapney diya, thanks, thanks a lot Kaanch bhai!!! Rohit Sinha here |
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5th April 2006, 03:35 PM
HI Kanchan!!!
waisey to humey jayda waqt nahi milta, sayad aapki tarah mai v thoda busy hota hoon, lekin aaj jab thodi der ke liye apney ek ristedar ki brachna padney es site per aaya, to achanak meri nazar "PAPA" word per ruki, or mai bata nahi sakta ek ajib si hal chal mach gayi mere under, mai apney PAPA ke saath bitaye un puraney dino me chala gaya, maine dekha , kuchh logo ne isey padkar apney "PAPA" ko phone kiya, lekin Kaanch, meri majboori to ye hai na ki mai unhey phone lagaoon v to kaisey, unhoney apna koi number hi nahi diya humey, pichhley saal hi es duniya se kisi or duniya me gaye the, or aaj tak unhey hamari yaad nahi aayi, bhool gaye wo humey, lekin haumey unki yaad abhi v aati hai, usi yaadon ko aapney taja kar diya aaj fir.... pata hai kaanch, tumhari kavita padkar mai thoda senti ho gaya tha, lekin ab mai ro raha hoon............agar un tak tumhari aawaj pahoonche na, to bol dena, "rohit is waiting for ur (PAPA)number..........number na dena to na sahi, lekin us sey baaten jaroor kar lo....., he is really missing u" kitni massomiyat se likha hai tumney..( vishesh kar ye line "dek lo aakar mujhe", waqai bhai, touching one !!!)... Papa mere tum baitho paas muje de do wahi atmavisvas jo diya karte they tum kabi jab paas tumare rehti thi mein Ajao mere paas tum Papa dek lo aakar mujhe mein wahi choti si jaan hun tumari jiske aaspas mamta ka bichona nehin ..... kaanch, aaj pahley hi din mujhe tumsey ek sikayat ho gayi, tumney humey rula diya... LEKIN KOI BAAT NAHI BHAI, isi wajah se mai apne PAPA ke bahut karinb hokar aa gaya, ek bar fir wahi ehsaas mahsoosh kiya maine........aaj rokar man halka ho gaya, pichhle 1 saal se mai udas jaror tha, lekin roya kabhi nahi tha, kuchh khoney ka ehsaas to jaroor tha, lekin mahssosh karney ka mauka nahui mila , aaj wo mauka aapney diya, thanks, thanks a lot Kaanch bhai!!! Rohit Sinha here |
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5th April 2006, 03:36 PM
Papa mere tum baitho paas
muje de do wahi atmavisvas jo diya karte they tum kabi jab paas tumare rehti thi mein unhi palo'n ko yaad kerti hun jab kandhey pe baith tumare ghumti thi saare ghar mei meri ek karahat se tum daudey aate they sab bhulkar meri khwaish per tum bhar dete they mera aanchal anginat chocolate'on se. tumhari bahut yaad aati hai papa.. her pal man entjaar kiya kerta hai..anginat baate hai jo tumse kahani hai aur sunani hai dil ko sukun dene vaali baate.. tum kab aaoge papa... Mere Papa tum to mere pyare dost hua kartey they Tume hi to apna Boy friend kaha kerti thi mein Tum hi to meri Maa they saathi bi to tum hi they. her jagah hi to maine tumhe paya tha papa.. chahe mujhe dost ki jarurat ho ya phir maa ki kami, tumhe dekhane ko taras rahi hain meri aankhe.. tum aa jao papa.. Ajao mere paas tum Papa dek lo aakar mujhe mein wahi choti si jaan hun tumari jiske aaspas mamta ka bichona nehin hei. Papa ke pyar se bana hua wo takiya bi nehin hei. tumne mujhe jo diya tha.. khushiyo ka gharaunda.. aaj suna sa pad raha hai.. mamata ki mahak.. papa ki khanak... de jao vo sangeet jo dhundh rahi hai ye aatma.. aa jao papa.. tum aa jao... Kanchan ji aapki yah kavita bahut pasand aayi... aur mujhe mahsoos ho raha hai ki yah kitani real hai... sach aapke shabdo se maine hakikat ke aiane me se gujara.. bahut khub aapne likha.. likhati rahiye, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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5th April 2006, 04:48 PM
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aaj tumare muh se sunker acha laga ki ...kaam sab kuch nahin hota, ristey bi hote hein. Thanks a lot vipin aapki Kaanch |
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5th April 2006, 04:50 PM
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Muje sach mei bohat duk hua aapki baat jankar. Is post ne aapke dukon ko taja kar diya us'se or duk hua. Yeh duniya ka niyam hi to hei ki sabi ko ana-jana hei.kal aapko, muje or sabko ye jagah khali kerni hei aane walon ke liy. Mein janti hun aapka duk baton se kam nehi hoga magr hum kar bi kya sakte hein. Aapke samne puri zindagi hei, jise aapne bohat aage le jana hei. Aapke apno ka sath dena hei. Islye himat rakye or apno ka sath dijye Kaanch |
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5th April 2006, 04:52 PM
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kitne ache alfaj diye hein aapne. bohat achey lage, thanks Kanchan |
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6th April 2006, 09:16 AM
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meri Kaanch, papa ko padhaye yah ahesaas? bhav ka sagar... baha sakte hai kuch saamanya shabd bhi ... aur yahi shabd ki taakat hai k .. huamre dil k ander ootar sakte hai yah shabd ...... apna khayal rakhna tumhari meena |
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6th April 2006, 09:37 AM
don no why it made my cry today...
felt sorry for one of my close friends...when i read the title papa...mere paas aajao... really nice... ur papa is always with u take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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6th April 2006, 09:09 PM
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Kaanch is ehsaas ko lekar Papa se milney chali gayi hai. Bahaut khush thi woh. vipin
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7th April 2006, 07:45 AM
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mere Mitr Vipin, humari dosti mai shukria jaise shabd jaha maaina nahi rakhte hai waha par hi oosi pal is shabd ko soche to bahut sa maaina rahta bhi hai.. jaha dosto par haq bana lete hai .. waha par hi dost ka sath hona.. woh bhi sahi waqt par.. sath hona.. - muje meri likhi hui pankti sarthak nazar aayi... dost ki dahliz par sar jhukana... bhagwaan ko yaad karna hota hai. Kaanch ki is khushi ko muj tak pahunchane ke liye shukria. mai yah bhi jaanti hu ke Kaanch yah khushi paa sake oos mai tumhara pratyaksh/ apratyaksh bahut hi sath hai.. aur mere pichhlae bechaine dino mai, har pal mere sath rahne ke liye .. tumhari aabhari hu . Vipin tumhari dosti ke aage mai humesha nat mastak hu. tumhari Mitr Meena |
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7th April 2006, 07:43 PM
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Namastey ! Mei thodi der ke liy net per ayi to aapka message pada. mei abi chandigarh mei hun mom or papa se milney ayi. bohat khush hun mein. ek baat batani thi to yahi bata rhi hun, mei jab yaha pahuchi to ek mera yaha ek surprise intejar kar rah tha. papa ne mere liy chota sa get-together raka tha, jabki meine unhe bataya nehi tha ki mei arahi hun or na hi har baar esa hota hei ki koi surprise mile. to ab aap khud andaja laga lijye ki ye kese hua....lol, muje yakin hei aap samaj jayngi. anyway, aapke lafzo mei chupa hosla pada meine, shukriya Meena Ji aapki kaanch |
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7th April 2006, 07:45 PM
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