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Sad Once Upon a Time................. - 5th February 2003, 08:46 PM

That was all mine,his happiness,his sorrows,his pain,his smiles
Yes that was all mine
That was all mine,that warmth in his arms
the love in his eyes & the feeling of being secured
that was all mine
But a sudden storm washed it all away
his happiness,his sorrows,his smiles
were no longer mine
That warmth was no longer felt
the love in that eyes was no longer mine

But i had to tell this story of mine

Once upon a time that was all mine...
   
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5th February 2003, 08:56 PM

hello hotmale,
you have written a very nice poem..I like it.
Keep your spirits high and write a lot more.
Kiran.


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Love raj_6957@rediffmail.com - 6th February 2003, 07:49 PM

ETNI SHIDAT SE CHAHA KE KHUD KO HUM BHOL GAYE
YAD RAHE TU SIRF TUM ,SARI DUNIA HUM BHOL GAYE

DIN SAARA GUZARA TUMHARE HI KHEYALOON MAIN
RAAT BHI AAI PAR HUM SOONA HI BHOL GAYE

SOOCHTE RAHE TERI BAATAIN ,TERI CHAHAT KO HUM
APNE SAARE GHUM,, SAARE DARD ,,HUM BHOL GAYE

UTHA KE HATH MANGI KHUDA SE SIRF TUMHARI HI KHUSIAN
APNE LEYE TU HUM KUCH BHI MANGNA BHOL GAYE

DEKH KE ON HONTOON KI HUNSI KO WAFA
AAJ HUM APNI ANKH KE ANSOO BHI BHOL GAYE


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