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Yaar ki batein.......( Ghayel ) -
17th February 2010, 12:24 PM
Zainy jee ki guzarish par is kalam ko yaha bhi post kar raha hu.......kindly follow the link also to take part in the competition.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...152#post384152
Kaise kare bayaa.N hum, yaar ki batein
Hai mehboob se mansoob, beshumar si batein
Kabhi zakhm hai koi, kabhi marham hai woh mera
Kabhi dard ki, to hai kabhi qarar ki batein
Kabhi khoobiyaa.N ginaye, kabhi badnamiyaa.N woh meri
Kabhi karam kare humpar, kabhi takraar ki batein
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar* ki batein
Na Ghayel ko sikhao, sabak aashiqui ka koi
Nibhayee hai zamane me, usi ne pyaar ki batein
-Sajid Ghayel-
* Khumaar = Utarta Nasha
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
Mob.: +971 501297654
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23rd March 2010, 12:26 AM
Woh alfaz hi kaha, Ghayel ki shayri me
Bayaa.N kar sake jo tere, rukhsaar ki batein...
SG
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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23rd March 2010, 01:35 PM
Sajid Bhai aadaab.......!
Aapki har kalam hume pasand aati hai....... Kyunki aapka andaaz behad khoob hai... yeh kalam bhi bahut umdaa rahi... Dil se daad kabool kjiye..
Kabhi mere bhi ishq ke liye aise ahsaas hua karte the per aaj mere ahsaas aise ho gaye hai... Jo yeh sher mein bayan kar raha hun jo sher bhi aapka hi hai...
Ishq mohobbat pyaar ki baateN
Sab lagti hai ab bekaar ki baateN
Yeh to waqt waqt ki baat hai, insaan ki taqdeer nahi badalti per waqt badalta hai...
Keep it up.......
Khuda Hafez......
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24th March 2010, 12:52 AM
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Sajid Bhai aadaab.......!
Aapki har kalam hume pasand aati hai....... Kyunki aapka andaaz behad khoob hai... yeh kalam bhi bahut umdaa rahi... Dil se daad kabool kjiye..
Kabhi mere bhi ishq ke liye aise ahsaas hua karte the per aaj mere ahsaas aise ho gaye hai... Jo yeh sher mein bayan kar raha hun jo sher bhi aapka hi hai...
Ishq mohobbat pyaar ki baateN
Sab lagti hai ab bekaar ki baateN
Yeh to waqt waqt ki baat hai, insaan ki taqdeer nahi badalti per waqt badalta hai...
Keep it up.......
Khuda Hafez......
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Mere bhai mere dost aapki bato ne gamzada kar diya............main koi itna zaheen ya badi soch wala insaa.N to nahi par ek sher jo aapka reply padhkar zehan me aaya pesh kar raha hu.....
Yeh zaruri nahi, kamyaab Ishq ho
Ha yeh zaruri hai magar, Ishq ho
SG
Ishq ko uske anjaam se mat tolo dost, ishq to har haal me khoobsurat hai, haseen hai, dilkash hai.........
Aapne mere jaise mamuli aur khaak shayer ke sher ko apni misaal ka zariya banaya yeh dekhkar apni zaat par fakhr karne ko dil karta hai halaki main janta hu ke main is kabil nahi.
Allah aapke seene ko phir se Ishq ke jazbaat se aabad karde aur aapki duniya mohabbato se bhar jaye....AAMEEN
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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29th March 2010, 07:46 PM
Mashallah!!...bohat khoobsurat hai aapke yaar ki bateiN,gul-e gulzaar ki bateiN, bepanaah pyar ki bateiN...yeh sher hameiN behad pasand aaya.....
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
yuhi likhte rahiye.............apki ghazaleiN mehfil ki raunak badha deti haiN.......
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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30th March 2010, 07:36 PM
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar* ki batein
Nice One ........Sajid Bhai........Bahut umdaa soch aur competition rahi aapki....yunhi likhte rahen.....
tahe dil se daad hazir hai......qubuul farmaayen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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31st March 2010, 08:11 PM
kya baat hai..............bahut khoob bhai............saare sher bahut achche hain ye kuch khas raha.......
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
shukriy
ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai.
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6th April 2010, 12:09 AM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Mashallah!!...bohat khoobsurat hai aapke yaar ki bateiN,gul-e gulzaar ki bateiN, bepanaah pyar ki bateiN...yeh sher hameiN behad pasand aaya.....
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
yuhi likhte rahiye.............apki ghazaleiN mehfil ki raunak badha deti haiN.......
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Aapki daad to Ghayel ke kalaam se zyda khoobsurat hai Zainy Jee..............bohat shukriyaa.N inayto ka
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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7th April 2010, 12:07 PM
Ghayal ji,
Your poetry is beautiful beyond words! Daad kubul kijiye
Mann
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15th April 2010, 02:17 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar* ki batein
Nice One ........Sajid Bhai........Bahut umdaa soch aur competition rahi aapki....yunhi likhte rahen.....
tahe dil se daad hazir hai......qubuul farmaayen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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Nawazish Karam Naresh saheb............
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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16th June 2010, 08:00 PM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Kaise kare bayaa.N hum, yaar ki batein
Hai mehboob se mansoob, beshumar si batein
Kabhi zakhm hai koi, kabhi marham hai woh mera
Kabhi dard ki, to hai kabhi qarar ki batein
Kabhi khoobiyaa.N ginaye, kabhi badnamiyaa.N woh meri
Kabhi karam kare humpar, kabhi takraar ki batein
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar* ki batein
Na Ghayel ko sikhao, sabak aashiqui ka koi
Nibhayee hai zamane me, usi ne pyaar ki batein
-Sajid Ghayel-
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Sajid ji, aaj dobara parha. Ek baar firse daad qubuul kijiye.
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17th June 2010, 10:43 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
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Kaise kare bayaa.N hum, yaar ki batein
Hai mehboob se mansoob, beshumar si batein
Kabhi zakhm hai koi, kabhi marham hai woh mera
Kabhi dard ki, to hai kabhi qarar ki batein
Kabhi khoobiyaa.N ginaye, kabhi badnamiyaa.N woh meri
Kabhi karam kare humpar, kabhi takraar ki batein
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar* ki batein
Na Ghayel ko sikhao, sabak aashiqui ka koi
Nibhayee hai zamane me, usi ne pyaar ki batein
-Sajid Ghayel-
* Khumaar = Utarta Nasha
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sajid jii, aapke pyar ki baateN hume behad pasand aaye, dil jhoom gaya aapke iqraar ki baateN padkar, bahut mast mast likha hai aapne apni gul-e-gulzaar ke liye.........
kush rahiye
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st June 2010, 11:51 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Zainy jee ki guzarish par is kalam ko yaha bhi post kar raha hu.......kindly follow the link also to take part in the competition.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...152#post384152
Kaise kare bayaa.N hum, yaar ki batein
Hai mehboob se mansoob, beshumar si batein
Kabhi zakhm hai koi, kabhi marham hai woh mera
Kabhi dard ki, to hai kabhi qarar ki batein
Kabhi khoobiyaa.N ginaye, kabhi badnamiyaa.N woh meri
Kabhi karam kare humpar, kabhi takraar ki batein
Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein
Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar* ki batein
Na Ghayel ko sikhao, sabak aashiqui ka koi
Nibhayee hai zamane me, usi ne pyaar ki batein
-Sajid Ghayel-
* Khumaar = Utarta Nasha
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sajid bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob daad dil se
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