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jaroori to nahi -
8th September 2007, 12:19 PM
Meri har baat me jikar ho tera jaroori to nahi,
par naam tera aa hi jata hai meri batoon me koi majboori to nahi.
bahte bahte bhi to sookh jate hai,
har daria hi sagar me gire jaroori to nahi.
tujhe pukara kia hai khamoshio me,
har sada tere dil ko chu jae yeh jaroori to nahi.
har phool ki kismat bhi alag hai,
har phool hi mandir me rakha jaye jaroori to nahi.
chot lagti hai to aansu bahte hai,
har chot pe ankh bhar aye yeh jaroori to nahi.
khwabon me to tum mil jate ho aksar hi,
har raat neend aa jaye yeh jaroori to nahi.
tujhe manga hai mane har dua me,
har pal koi tara toot jaye yeh jaroori to nahi.
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10th September 2007, 09:46 PM
Bahut hi pyara likhiya hai tusi taa,
Meri har baat me jikar ho tera jaroori to nahi,
par naam tera aa hi jata hai
meri batoon me koi majboori to nahi.
tujhe pukara kia hai khamoshio me,
har sada tere dil ko chu jae yeh jaroori to nahi.
har phool ki kismat bhi alag hai,
har phool hi mandir me rakha jaye jaroori to nahi.
Eh lines dil nu chhun waliya han, read kadrde sar hi LOST ho jayida hai
really good job dost
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12th September 2007, 11:33 AM
Thx HEER meri poem lai aapna kimti time den lai and ene pyare riply lai. ha tusi kafi din ho gye kujh nahi likhea asi sare thuhadi navi poem da itezaar kar rahe ha. umeed hai jald hi read karan lai milegi.phir to dhanwaad HEER tuhadi riply naal koi v poem read karan yog ho jandi hai.
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Jaruri tou nahi.............. -
27th September 2007, 03:34 PM
Hi dear..................kavita tey gr8t likhi hai ...............
mein bhi saal pahle ek kabita likhi thi............the title was jaruri tou nahi...............tuhade samne prastut kar riya haan.............
Mere har labz shabdo mein baya ho, ye jaruri tou nahi,
dil ke har jajbat aankho mein sama ho , ye jaruri tou nahi,
mumnkin hai har dard ko dil mein chupana bhi
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har riste ashq se bhige palke, ye jaruri tou nahi
Jiski mohabbat mein ,main kuch bhi kar gujar jauga,
usey bhi mujh par ho itna yakin ,ye jaruri tou nahi
Jiski yaado mein, main rat bhar soya nahi sayad ,
uske kwabo mein bhi ho mera intjaar,ye jaruri tou nahi
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har waqt khayi thi jisne sath marne ki kasmein,
wo de jindagi mein bhi sath , ye jaruri tou nahi..............
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27th September 2007, 03:44 PM
Mere har labz shabdo mein baya ho, ye jaruri tou nahi,
dil ke har jajbat aankho mein sama ho , ye jaruri tou nahi,
mumnkin hai har dard ko dil mein chupana bhi
..............
har riste ashq se bhige palke, ye jaruri tou nahi
Jiski mohabbat mein ,main kuch bhi kar gujar jauga,
usey bhi mujh par ho itna yakin ,ye jaruri tou nahi
Jiski yaado mein, main rat bhar soya nahi sayad ,
uske kwabo mein bhi ho mera intjaar,ye jaruri tou nahi
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har waqt khayi thi jisne sath marne ki kasmein,
wo de jindagi mein bhi sath , ye jaruri tou nahi.............
hello SANDESH_DIXIT ji welcome to shayri.com. aap ki poem meri poem se bhi jyada khubsurat hai. is ki har line me gehrai hai. har line dil ko choh leti hai .sach me hi aap bahut hi acha likhte hai likhte rahie.
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Thankyu ji.................. -
29th September 2007, 12:23 AM
Bas ji aap jaise logo ki dua hai......................I will try to be an active
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30th September 2007, 02:35 PM
namsakr,
bahut badiya likha hai aapne. sidhe dil ko chhu gayee. marm bhaut hia aapke shabdo mai. congrate!!!!!
rajesh
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