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sharuaat..........(guj) - 19th February 2005, 09:57 PM

aaj thi mai ek navi prabhat kari chhe,
tara vagar jivvani sharuaat kari chhe,
padchhaya ne tan thi alag kari,
ekalta ni sathe may mulakat kari chhe......

vitela kshano nebhuli ne,
bandh aankho e aaje may raat kari chhe,
mara swaash mathi taru naam kadhi,
judai ma j milan ni suvash bhari chhe......

haiya thichhupavi man ne,
tara vicharo thi dur rehvani vaat kari chhe,
kal ni lehron thi aash chhodi,
aaj na sagar ma potana kinara ni talash kari chhe......

prem thi mahekta rango ne mitavi,
jindgi na haath ma alag j mehndi ni lalash kari chhe,
ha, aaje tu nati paase pan,
may to tari yadon ne tu samji bath bhari chhe......

aa rah per hu ekli j nathi,
aapna prem ni shuvarna palo e pan mari sangath kari chhe......
   
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20th February 2005, 10:45 AM

Aashi shu vaat chhe, shu kahu hu have, mane to khabar nathi padti... kharekhar khoobaj sundar lakhyu chhe!!! Bas aamaj lakhta rehjo...
   
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Aashiji, - 21st February 2005, 07:03 PM

Hi Aashi,

What a wonderful writing. You have shaken the heart. Its just mindblowing.

Keep making such wonderful creations.


Jo too hi sanam hamse bezaar hoga
To jeena hamen apna dushwaar hoga
~Meer Saab....

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hI! - 21st February 2005, 08:33 PM

Beautiful!! aa kavita ma sunder praso ni sathe....arth thi purn nahi pariprna bhavo che..u have managed 2 voice evry minute string of ur heart..Luved it..really very very impressive!..

apni biji rachana ni utsukta rehshe!

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hi - 21st February 2005, 08:47 PM

tame bahuj saras lakhyu che tamara word bahuj sara che.
aam gujrati shyari amne moklo to vadhare saru.
bas aamaj lakhta raho.
   
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~Antar mahi ek vaat~ - 21st February 2005, 09:18 PM

Antar mahi ek vaat chhe keme kari kahun?
prem tujne hun karu chhu kevi rite kahun?

Kyarek kehva jaoon tujne, hoy medni ma tu,
Prem no prastav ema kevi rite karu?

Ekant jyare hoy tyare shabdo nathi malta,
Maun maro prem chhe keme kari kahu?

Tu have jo nahi samje to modu thase bahu,
Tara vagar huun shunya chhu keme kari kahu?

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Jo too hi sanam hamse bezaar hoga
To jeena hamen apna dushwaar hoga
~Meer Saab....

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