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dasht dekha hai gulsitaaN dekha - 13th September 2013, 12:19 AM
dasht dekha hai gulsitaaN dekha
saare aalam ko be-imaaN dekha

(dasht = wilderness)


azm har hote naa-tawaaN dekha
har jatan jaate raayegaaN dekha

(azm = resolve, naa-tawaan = weak, jatan = effort, raayegaan = futile)


jitna waaiz ko sargaraaN dekha
utna rindoN ko meherbaaN dekha

(waaiz = preacher / advisor, sargaraaN = arrogant / haughty, rindoN = drunk people / carefree)


is ujarhti huee si bastee ke
paasbaanoN ko shaadmaaN dekha

(paasbaanoN = guardians / protectors, shaadmaaN = happy / mirthful


gul-e-khandaaN pe ro raha hai chaman
usne hai mausam-e-khizaaN dekha

(gul-e-khandaaN = blooming flowers)


raunak-e-raahguzar roz barhe
ik naya roz laa-makaaN dekha

(laa-makaaN = homeless)


aabla-pa koyee to tha guzra
pa ka giriyaaN sa ik nishaaN dekha

(aabla-pa = one with blisters on feet, giriyaaN = weeping)


dikh raha aaeene meiN jo chehra
yaad aata naheeN kahaaN dekha



jaam haathoN meiN pee naheeN sakte
baar isse bhi kya garaaN dekha

(baar = burden, garaaN = heavy)


gul hi gul khil wahaaN wahaaN uth’the
hum ne tujh ko jahaaN jahaaN dekha



tere mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamzaa tera kahaaN dekha

(mizhgaaN = eyelashes, kham = curves, ghamzaa = amourous glance)


baat tab tak lagee raqeeb ki sach
kehte jab tak tujhe n haaN dekha



ek dooje se yooN theeN ummeedeiN
ek ranjish ko darmiyaaN dekha

(ranjish = unpleasantness)


ghar ki veeraaniyoN se oob gaye
ja ke baazaar meiN makaaN dekha



ooNchee ooNchee imaaratoN ke makeeN
n zameeN dekhi aasmaaN dekha

(makeeN = residents)


jitna dekha bahaut hai dekh liya
maana zyaada naheeN jahaaN dekha



khaar “zarraa” chunooN to log kaheiN
koyee aisa n gul-fishaaN dekha

(khaar = thorns, gul-fishaaN = one who is scattering flowers)





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13th September 2013, 11:08 AM
bohat khoob ashaar

bohat aalaa ghazal

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15th September 2013, 11:40 AM
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15th September 2013, 04:07 PM
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Jaisa ki amuman maine dekha hai ki aap ka andaaz nirala hai ..
Sari Ghazal achi lagi per matale ka javab nahin, Daad kabool karein

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15th September 2013, 06:11 PM
zarra jee....is khoobsurat ghazal pe aapko dheron badhaii...


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Waaahhhhhh..... Subhan Allaah janaab.....

Sabse acchhi baat mujhe aapke Kalaamo ki ye lagtii hai ke aap chun chun ke alfaazoN se apne khoobsurat ehsaasoN ko pirote hain... bilkul beshkeemti nageene si mehsoos hoti hain aapki har Ghazal, aur ye peshkash to sone pe suhaaga hai janaab...... behad ummdah, behad khoob.... ho zore qalam aur ziyaadah.... likhte rahen...

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17th September 2013, 09:03 PM
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Zarra Sahib,
Jaisa ki amuman maine dekha hai ki aap ka andaaz nirala hai ..
Sari Ghazal achi lagi per matale ka javab nahin, Daad kabool karein

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Waaahhhhhh..... Subhan Allaah janaab.....

Sabse acchhi baat mujhe aapke Kalaamo ki ye lagtii hai ke aap chun chun ke alfaazoN se apne khoobsurat ehsaasoN ko pirote hain... bilkul beshkeemti nageene si mehsoos hoti hain aapki har Ghazal, aur ye peshkash to sone pe suhaaga hai janaab...... behad ummdah, behad khoob.... ho zore qalam aur ziyaadah.... likhte rahen...

Shaad....

Aapka beshkeematee saath milta rehta hai, ye ek aham wajahon mein se hai ki is bazm se rabt bana rehta hai .... dost aapne jis gehraayee se qalaam ko baareekee se pharakh kar apnee daad ki mohar lagayee hai ... ye aapkee daanishmandi aur dariyadilee donon ka suboot hai ...

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21st September 2013, 06:02 PM
Zarra Sahaab Aadaab...

WaaH janab waaH behad khoob aur behad gehre ashaar bayaaN kiye haiN aapne... puri kalaam hi laa jawaab rahi janab...

Bahut khoob... kafi gehraai samaayi hai ashaaroN meiN...
Is umdaa kalaam par humari bharpur dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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22nd September 2013, 11:27 AM
Aadaab Khwahish ji .... apne qalaam ke ehsaasaat ko itni tawajjo si aur unhein apnaaya is ka tah e dil se apka shukrguzaar hoon aur apkee zarranawaazee ka qarzdaar bhi ... Duaon ke saath ... Zarraa


QUOTE=kwahish;454423]Zarra Sahaab Aadaab...

WaaH janab waaH behad khoob aur behad gehre ashaar bayaaN kiye haiN aapne... puri kalaam hi laa jawaab rahi janab...

Bahut khoob... kafi gehraai samaayi hai ashaaroN meiN...
Is umdaa kalaam par humari bharpur dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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