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khamoshii - 19th January 2016, 01:49 PM

Roz ki tarah hee din tha aaj bhi kuch naya nahi tha.vibha ghar ke kamo me se vaqt chura kar kuch padhne baith gayi thi kuch hee to shauk the uske..unme se ek ye bhi tha..purane gane chal rahe the radio pe aur is vaqt jo gana tha vo pahla gana tha jo kabhi ek saheli ke muh se suna tha aur uske baad purane gano ki deewani ho gayi thi vibha..

Aapki nazron ne samjha
Pyaar ke qabil mujhe.......

Gunguna hee rahi thi ki kisi ke hasne ki awaaz aayi oh pados ke ghar ki beti thi...rajni... din bhar kisi na kisi baat pe hanse rahte hain bachche hogi koi baat...par na jane kyun unke chehre par nazar thahar gayi vibha ki...rajni ne sakpaka ke poocha kya hua aunty ?to hosh aaya nahi kuch nahi..bas aise hee kah kar andar aa gayi...unki beparwaah hansii us zamane me le gayi jab vo bhi usi umra me hua karti thi...fark itna tha,,ki itni bindaas vo tab bhi nahi thi...sahmi si apne me rahne wali ek seedhi si ladki...haan par saheliyon ke sang hansii mazzak bilul aisa hee tha..class me man lagakar padhna sports me part lena...teachers ki pyari...ek achchi student.......

papa ke tabadle ki vajah se har do teen saal me shahar to badalte hee rahte the...purane doston ke chhootne ka gam to tha..par naye logon se milna achcha bhi lagta tha...aur yahi aadat aaj tak bhi hai......shayad isiliye har tarah ke logon ke sath asani se adjust kar pati thi vo...aur har mahaul me khush rahne ka tareeka bhi dhoondh leti thi....shayad ise hee zindgi kahte the uski nazar me....

Zindgi ke is safar me jitne shahar utne hee log utni hee achchi buri yadein judti gayiin.....aaj jo yaad aaya vo bachpan se jawani pe kadam rakhne ka pahla ehsaas tha....vo umra thi jab rishte, ehsaas in sab ke mayne bhi nahi jante the ...ghar se school tak bas chupchaap me jana aur school se ghar tak usi tarah aana...vo sath hee aata jata tha...kyun ki ek hee colony me rahte the vibha aur ashish..haan yaad aaya yahi naam tha us bhole se ladke ka.. papa ke dost a beta tha...ek hee class me..kuch bolta hee nahi tha...buddhu kahti thi ladkiyaa...sharmaya hua hota tha jab bhi usko dekho..aur sab dost uski is sharm ko vibha se jod dete the...aur kya wakai aisa hai ye dekhne ke liye kai baar vo chupchaap uski taraf dekhti bhi thi sabse chhup chhup ke...ghabra sa jata tha vo vibha ko apni taraf dekhte pakar..aur uski is ghabrahat par khilkhila ke hans deti thi vo...

......aaj bhi yaad hai ek baar school nahi aaya tha vo to ghar jakar pata chala tabiyat theek nahi uski....apni books dekar aayi thi ki kaam kar lena aur...jab lautane aaya to usne ek thank you bhi nahi kaha...huhhh manners hee nahi kah kar chid gayi thi vibha......uski badi bahan shalini bahut pyaar karti thi vibha ko aur unse milne ke bahane ghar aana jana bhi ho jata tha...magar mazaal hai ek lafz bhi usne kaha ho..bas ghar se bahar chala jata tha chupchaap...ajeeb hee ladka tha.......jane kahaan hoga ab......

Us shahar se aane ke baad koi khabar nahi mili un logon ki...kabhi papa ke muh se uncle ka naam sun leti to kadam thithak jate par poochne ki himmat nahi huyi ki khaan hain vo log..ab to is baat ko barson ho gaye....par na jane kyun rajni ki ankhon me ladappan ki vo chamak dekhkar us umra ka ye qissa aaj taza ho aya....

Shayad usne bhi kahiin is khamoshi ko yaad kiya hoga.......ek muskurahat tair gayi vibha ke chehre par aur khayaal aaya ki bete ko school lene jana hai...radio pe gano ka doosra programme shuru ho gaya tha...ghadi ne dopahar ke 2 baja diye the....apni yadon ke pitare ko band kar vibha vapas lag gayi thi zindgi ki bhaag daud me......
nayi yadein batorne me...........



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19th January 2016, 05:26 PM

ohhoo kya baat hai kyaa baat hai waah bhai waah..............

sach kahen to hame to bilkul yaqeen nahi ho rahaa hai ke itnii acchii kahaani aapne ham sab ko padhne ke liye pesh ki...... aap itnii acchiii kathaakaar bhii hain is baat ka hame aaj tak pata nahi chalaa aur aaj jab aapko padhaa to dil yaqeenan bahut khush huaa hai....

Madhu ji aapse guzarish hai ke aap ab is talent par bhi zor dijiye aur acchi acchii kahaani ham sab ke saamne laaiye... aapki badee mehrbaani hogii....


dil se ek baar fir aapko bahut saari daad is nayee paha ke liye aur duaaen dher saari ke aap is kshetra me hi mahaarat haasil karen......


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20th January 2016, 07:53 AM

Madhu,

Es kahani ke peeche ki haqiqat saaf chalak rahi hai, kehte hai ki jab dil se likho to ehsaas doodhdne nahi padte aur jab qirdaar apne ho to baat hi kya

jyaadaa kya kahun, aur likhna vibha ke dil mein aur bhi ehsaas hai jinse hum rubaruu ho sakte hai...



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20th January 2016, 12:48 PM

Ye vibha hai Ki Madhu....mujhe tumhari story lag rahi hai...

Bhai waah...

Main beqaraar Hu aage Ki kahaani kd liye.

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20th January 2016, 12:50 PM

Put pics to make it interesting. Shad bahi will help u he has lovely collection of pics.


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nice suggestion sarika jee... i will also keep this in mind in my future works...
but mere paas se pics ka kyaa relation hai wo mujhe samajh nahi aayaa:..
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Aap jab bhi koi tasweer daalte Ho apne sher ya Ghazal ke saath woh bohut khubsoorat hoti hai.
ohhhh to ye kahnaa chaah rahi theeen aap...
maaf kijiyegaa main aapka taatparya samajh nahii paayaa thaa..
lekin agar aap aisaa samajhtii hain to main aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon...

tasweeron ke liye bas itnaa kahnaa chahungaa ke google maharaj ki jayy...
wahin se dhundhaa karte hain pics aur khushnaseebi hamaari jo aapko wo pics pasand aati hai... bahot shukriyaa 😄😄


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ohhoo kya baat hai kyaa baat hai waah bhai waah..............

sach kahen to hame to bilkul yaqeen nahi ho rahaa hai ke itnii acchii kahaani aapne ham sab ko padhne ke liye pesh ki...... aap itnii acchiii kathaakaar bhii hain is baat ka hame aaj tak pata nahi chalaa aur aaj jab aapko padhaa to dil yaqeenan bahut khush huaa hai....

Madhu ji aapse guzarish hai ke aap ab is talent par bhi zor dijiye aur acchi acchii kahaani ham sab ke saamne laaiye... aapki badee mehrbaani hogii....


dil se ek baar fir aapko bahut saari daad is nayee paha ke liye aur duaaen dher saari ke aap is kshetra me hi mahaarat haasil karen......


khush rahen....

Shaad..........
Shaad ji...aapka bahut shukriya kahani ko padha aur pasand kiya aapne...main khud nahi janti hun ki kahani jaisa kuch likh sakti hun ya nahi...lekin aapne bharosa dilaya to laga ki shayad.....

Aapko pasand aaya likha hua...achcha laga..koshish karoongi aage kuch aur pesh kar sakoon.....

Apna sath banaye rakhiyega.....

Salamat rahein...
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[QUOTE=mast;490629]Madhu,

Es kahani ke peeche ki haqiqat saaf chalak rahi hai, kehte hai ki jab dil se likho to ehsaas doodhdne nahi padte aur jab qirdaar apne ho to baat hi kya

jyaadaa kya kahun, aur likhna vibha ke dil mein aur bhi ehsaas hai jinse hum rubaruu ho sakte

Anu..likhne wale ki mehnat safal ho jati hai agar padhne wale usme base ehsason ko mahsoos kar sakein.....behad khushi huyi...aapko kahani pasand aayi...

Aur haan..vibha ki zindgi ke kuch aur pahluu lekar aaungi agar vo razi huyi to......

Sath dete rahiyega...

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Madhu

Sabse pehle to maiN kahuuNga ke I'm impressed. Bohat achcha likhti ho tum. Pathak ko aakhir tak chipkaaye rakhne waali likhaii hai tumhari. Isse bhi jaari rakhna. Bhasha ka bohat rochak istemaal karti ho.

Ye Khani bohat achchi lagi. Mere khayal se issmeiN aage bhi kuchh hoga. Agar hai to intezaar rahega.

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Ye vibha hai Ki Madhu....mujhe tumhari story lag rahi hai...

Bhai waah...

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Ye story vibha ki hee hai...........

jaldi hee aur pahluu lekar aaungi

Pic wala suggestion bahut hee achcha hai...zaroor apply karne ki koshish karoongi....

Thank u soo much ...

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Madhu

Sabse pehle to maiN kahuuNga ke I'm impressed. Bohat achcha likhti ho tum. Pathak ko aakhir tak chipkaaye rakhne waali likhaii hai tumhari. Isse bhi jaari rakhna. Bhasha ka bohat rochak istemaal karti ho.

Ye Khani bohat achchi lagi. Mere khayal se issmeiN aage bhi kuchh hoga. Agar hai to intezaar rahega.

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namaskaar praveen ji...sabse pahle to bahut shukriya ki aapne vaqt nikaal kar kahani ko padha..bas chhoti si koshish thi meri aur janna chahti thi ki kaisi rahi isliye aapki rai ka besabri se intzaar tha...

mujhe khushi huyi ki apko meri writing pasand aayi....
koshish karoongi kuch aur likh sakoon..sath banaye rakhiyega..

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Thumbs up bahut khoob - 29th January 2016, 04:40 PM

Madhuuuuuuuu....dil khush ho gya kahani padkar, bahut acche se tumne apne ehsaas pesh kiye hai...hame Vibha ki zindgi ke ab tak ke har pehlu se ru-b-ru karvaogi to bahut accha lgega...muje kahani padna accha lagta hai, aik baar SHAAD bhai ne bhi kahani likhi thi...wo bhi dil mein bas gye thi...aur muje umeed hai yeh kahani bhi kuch aisa hi asar chodegi dil par.

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