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yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi.... - 12th May 2016, 03:52 PM
yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi
tera naam leke nikal gayi..

Ki haNsi haNsi ki baat thi..
Meri ziNdgi hee badal gayi..

kya vo khaaq lambi thi raat fir
Jo faqat nigahoN me dhal gayi..

na shikayteiN na gila kiya..
teri batoN se hee bahal gayi..

maiN laboN ko iski saza duN kya
thi zara si baat fisal gayi..

tune haNs ke jo kaha madhu
to balayeiN sari ye tal gayii..

madhu..


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[QUOTE=Madhu 14;492787][CENTER][SIZE="3"][COLOR="DarkGreen"][FONT="Fixedsys"]Yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi
Tera naam leke nikal gayi..

Ki hansi hansi ki baat thi..
Meri zindgi hee badal gayi..

Kya vo khaak lambi thi raat fir
Ja fakat nigahon me dhal gayi..

Na shiyatein na gila kiya..
Teri baton se hee bahal gayi..

Main labon ko iski saza dun kya
Thi zara si baat fisal gayi..

Tune hans ke jo kaha madhu
To balayein sari ye tal gayii..

madhu..

Kya kahu madhu ji

kitna khubsurat andaaz-e-bayaan hai aapka
Behtareen ghazal ki ye misaal hai

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16th May 2016, 06:13 AM
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Yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi
Tera naam leke nikal gayi..

Ki hansi hansi ki baat thi..
Meri zindgi hee badal gayi..

Kya vo khaak lambi thi raat fir
Ja fakat nigahon me dhal gayi..

Na shiyatein na gila kiya..
Teri baton se hee bahal gayi..

Main labon ko iski saza dun kya
Thi zara si baat fisal gayi..

Tune hans ke jo kaha madhu
To balayein sari ye tal gayii..

madhu..


waahh madhu ji kyaa baat hai subah subah aisi taaza ghazal padhne ka naseeb haasil huaa ke sau shukraane.......

bahut hi flow me aur romantic andaaz me likha gaya kalaam hai ye aapka.. mujhe behad pasand aayaa.... likhti rahen, aati rahen....

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vaa,h madhu ji buhet achi ghazal hey aa,p ki
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Saba tah e dil se shukriya aapka jo aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya.....

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[CENTER][SIZE="3"][COLOR="DarkGreen"][FONT="Fixedsys"]Yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi
Tera naam leke nikal gayi..

Ki hansi hansi ki baat thi..
Meri zindgi hee badal gayi..

Kya vo khaak lambi thi raat fir
Ja fakat nigahon me dhal gayi..

Na shiyatein na gila kiya..
Teri baton se hee bahal gayi..

Main labon ko iski saza dun kya
Thi zara si baat fisal gayi..

Tune hans ke jo kaha madhu
To balayein sari ye tal gayii..

madhu..

Kya kahu madhu ji

kitna khubsurat andaaz-e-bayaan hai aapka
Behtareen ghazal ki ye misaal hai

Zor-e-kalaam aur bhi
Shukraguzar hun mujahid sahab jo aapne ise pasand kiya..

Salamat rahein...

Aate rahiyega
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waahh madhu ji kyaa baat hai subah subah aisi taaza ghazal padhne ka naseeb haasil huaa ke sau shukraane.......

bahut hi flow me aur romantic andaaz me likha gaya kalaam hai ye aapka.. mujhe behad pasand aayaa.... likhti rahen, aati rahen....

Shaad....
Bas aap ne padh li to samajhiye mujhe bhi khaas lagne lagi ghazal.....aate rahiyega...

Hausla afzai ka behad shukriya

Apna khayaal rakhein...

Madhu.


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Yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi
Tera naam leke nikal gayi..

Ki hansi hansi ki baat thi..
Meri zindgi hee badal gayi..

Kya vo khaak lambi thi raat fir
Ja fakat nigahon me dhal gayi..

Na shiyatein na gila kiya..
Teri baton se hee bahal gayi..

Main labon ko iski saza dun kya
Thi zara si baat fisal gayi..

Tune hans ke jo kaha madhu
To balayein sari ye tal gayii..

madhu..
umdaa bayaangi saadgi bhara andaaz haal-e-dil ko alfaaz khoob diye hai aapne....mazaa aa gaya

yunhi likhti rahiYeGaa


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umdaa bayaangi saadgi bhara andaaz haal-e-dil ko alfaaz khoob diye hai aapne....mazaa aa gaya

yunhi likhti rahiYeGaa
Ye likhne aur padhne ka silsila yun hee chalta rahe....
Bas yahi chahte hain ham.... jo khayaal dil me aate hain unhe seedhe sade alfaz me aap sab ke samne rakh deti hun..par khushi hoti hai jab itne dil se padhe jate hain .....aur pasand kiye jate hain..

Ghazal par vaqt dene ka dil se shukriya .....

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Yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi
Tera naam leke nikal gayi..

Ki hansi hansi ki baat thi..
Meri zindgi hee badal gayi..

Kya vo khaak lambi thi raat fir
Ja fakat nigahon me dhal gayi..

Na shiyatein na gila kiya..
Teri baton se hee bahal gayi..

Main labon ko iski saza dun kya
Thi zara si baat fisal gayi..

Tune hans ke jo kaha madhu
To balayein sari ye tal gayii..

madhu..

madhu jee jitne khoobsoorat khyaal utni hi khoobsoorat bayaani hai aapki
daad hi daad
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bahut shukriya..

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Khhsh rahe.. Apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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yun hee shab tamaam kal gayi
tera naam leke nikal gayi..

Ki haNsi haNsi ki baat thi..
Meri ziNdgi hee badal gayi..

kya vo khaaq lambi thi raat fir
Jo faqat nigahoN me dhal gayi..

na shikayteiN na gila kiya..
teri batoN se hee bahal gayi..

maiN laboN ko iski saza duN kya
thi zara si baat fisal gayi..

tune haNs ke jo kaha madhu
to balayeiN sari ye tal gayii..

madhu..


Madhu Bala....khoobsurat ehsaasoN ke liye dil se daad hazir hai....jo sher muje bahut kamaal ka lga wo yeh hai:

kya vo khaaq lambi thi raat fir
Jo faqat nigahoN me dhal gayi..

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Namaste

Aik achchhi koshish... Yuunhi Likhte rahen aage bhee

Khhsh rahe.. Apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka
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kya vo khaaq lambi thi raat fir
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bahut gehrai hai eh sher meiN.
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