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sawaal...? - 9th June 2016, 03:19 AM

Dosto apni ek nai kavita aap ke rubru kar raha huN,shikayatoN bhari hai.
lekin kaisi lagi aapne vichar likhna.thanks.


Aisa kyuN hai
vaisa kyuN hai
sochuN meiN jaisa
na vaisa kyuN hai....

ansuoN ka samanadr kyuN hai
samandr meiN babandar kyuN hai
kal tak yahaN sapno ka mahal tha
aaj bana yeh khandar kyuN hai.

paisa sab kuch hota nahi,
har baat meiN lekin paisa kyuN hai
rab ne banai sari dunia
koi na Rab ke jaisa kyuN hai.

Insaf ka mandir yahaN likha hai
insaf magar koi na paata kyuN hai
Gang nahaya, kumbh nahaya
man ka mail na jata kyuN hai.

Aisa kyuN hai, vaisa kyuN hai
sab ko jo bhay na vaisa kyuN hai.......?

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Dosto apni ek nai kavita aap ke rubru kar raha huN,shikayatoN bhari hai.
lekin kaisi lagi aapne vichar likhna.thanks.


Aisa kyuN hai
vaisa kyuN hai
sochuN meiN jaisa
na vaisa kyuN hai....

ansuoN ka samanadr kyuN hai
samandr meiN babandar kyuN hai
kal tak yahaN sapno ka mahal tha
aaj bana yeh khandar kyuN hai.

paisa sab kuch hota nahi,
har baat meiN lekin paisa kyuN hai
rab ne banai sari dunia
koi na Rab ke jaisa kyuN hai.

Insaf ka mandir yahaN likha hai
insaf magar koi na paata kyuN hai
Gang nahaya, kumbh nahaya
man ka mail na jata kyuN hai.

Aisa kyuN hai, vaisa kyuN hai
sab ko jo bhay na vaisa kyuN hai.......?

rajinderseep
Achchi kavita hai rajinder ji...

Aate rahein..

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9th June 2016, 05:26 PM

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Dosto apni ek nai kavita aap ke rubru kar raha huN,shikayatoN bhari hai.
lekin kaisi lagi aapne vichar likhna.thanks.


Aisa kyuN hai
vaisa kyuN hai
sochuN meiN jaisa
na vaisa kyuN hai....

ansuoN ka samanadr kyuN hai
samandr meiN babandar kyuN hai
kal tak yahaN sapno ka mahal tha
aaj bana yeh khandar kyuN hai.

paisa sab kuch hota nahi,
har baat meiN lekin paisa kyuN hai
rab ne banai sari dunia
koi na Rab ke jaisa kyuN hai.

Insaf ka mandir yahaN likha hai
insaf magar koi na paata kyuN hai
Gang nahaya, kumbh nahaya
man ka mail na jata kyuN hai.

Aisa kyuN hai, vaisa kyuN hai
sab ko jo bhay na vaisa kyuN hai.......?

rajinderseep


Rajinder ji...bahut hi acchi kavita bani hai, ehsaas bahut saache aur acche lge...sahi meiN kai baar aisi baate dimaag meiN chalti rehti hai ki aisa kyu hai, vaisa kyu hai...

likhte rhiye
aate rhiye


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buhet achi sunder kavita likhi hey aap ney


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Thank you.....thank you very much
sabaa kiyani ji,Madhu ji,Sunita ji.
aap sab ka daad k liay bahut bahut shukria.

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Dosto apni ek nai kavita aap ke rubru kar raha huN,shikayatoN bhari hai.
lekin kaisi lagi aapne vichar likhna.thanks.


Aisa kyuN hai
vaisa kyuN hai
sochuN meiN jaisa
na vaisa kyuN hai....

ansuoN ka samanadr kyuN hai
samandr meiN babandar kyuN hai
kal tak yahaN sapno ka mahal tha
aaj bana yeh khandar kyuN hai.

paisa sab kuch hota nahi,
har baat meiN lekin paisa kyuN hai
rab ne banai sari dunia
koi na Rab ke jaisa kyuN hai.

Insaf ka mandir yahaN likha hai
insaf magar koi na paata kyuN hai
Gang nahaya, kumbh nahaya
man ka mail na jata kyuN hai.

Aisa kyuN hai, vaisa kyuN hai
sab ko jo bhay na vaisa kyuN hai.......?

rajinderseep

bahut hi seedhe sacche sawaal pesh kiye hain aapne rajinder ji.......

sach, ye saare sawaal hamaara dil aksar ham se poochta hai aur hamare paas koi jawaab nahi hotaa aur ham niruttar hoke rah jaate hain... kaagaz pe in ehsaason ko utaar kar aapne bahut hi acche se chitran kiyaa hai.. bahut bahut badhaaiyaan is kalaam ko likhne ke liye.... aate rahiyega.
likhte raheiye
Shaad..........


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jo jaisa hai wo waisa kyu hai ka jawaab to uupar wale ke paas hi hai.......magar aapne jo likha wo hamein bohut pasand aaya.....khaskar ye chand lines dil ke kaafi kareeb rahi...

paisa sab kuch hota nahi,
har baat meiN lekin paisa kyuN hai
rab ne banai sari dunia
koi na Rab ke jaisa kyuN hai.


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jo jaisa hai wo waisa kyu hai ka jawaab to uupar wale ke paas hi hai.......magar aapne jo likha wo hamein bohut pasand aaya.....khaskar ye chand lines dil ke kaafi kareeb rahi...

paisa sab kuch hota nahi,
har baat meiN lekin paisa kyuN hai
rab ne banai sari dunia
koi na Rab ke jaisa kyuN hai.


likhte rahiye khush rahiye.

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Dosto apni ek nai kavita aap ke rubru kar raha huN,shikayatoN bhari hai.
lekin kaisi lagi aapne vichar likhna.thanks.


Aisa kyuN hai
vaisa kyuN hai
sochuN meiN jaisa
na vaisa kyuN hai....

ansuoN ka samanadr kyuN hai
samandr meiN babandar kyuN hai
kal tak yahaN sapno ka mahal tha
aaj bana yeh khandar kyuN hai.

paisa sab kuch hota nahi,
har baat meiN lekin paisa kyuN hai
rab ne banai sari dunia
koi na Rab ke jaisa kyuN hai.

Insaf ka mandir yahaN likha hai
insaf magar koi na paata kyuN hai
Gang nahaya, kumbh nahaya
man ka mail na jata kyuN hai.

Aisa kyuN hai, vaisa kyuN hai
sab ko jo bhay na vaisa kyuN hai.......?

rajinderseep

bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh poetry rajinder jee.............


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