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18th January 2005, 10:28 PM
dostoN...
maiN kunal ek bar phir se shayroN ki is duniya ko salaam waja lata huN ... darasal ye jo kalaam maiN aapke pesh e khidmat karne wala huN... maine mere bade bhaijaan mast ji ki mehfil (eberaat-e-ashqiya) maiN ... eitbaar shabd ko lekar likha tha ... halaNki kayi baar unki mehfil maiN shareek hua .. par jo aashaar aaj likhe kuch khud ke hi dil maiN chub aur bas se gaye ... socha aap sab se bhi shere kar loUn ..aur mere chahne waloN se gujarish hai .. ise chand jumalaat hi samjhe... shabbakhair.... ------------------------------------------------------------ ashq-e-nazar se jhakhm-e-dil ko bhar leNge.. inam-e-ishq se wo gham-e-dastaan bhar leNge... ujale se nikal ja phunche gumnaam andhere maiN.. jaam-e-jehar se roshan dar-e-kabristan ko kar leNge... tujhko bhula doouN ye kash munkin hota mere liye... nakabil-e-faramosh pal rukhsati-e-paigam ko kar leNge... *na bhoolne wala ** aakhiri khat... yadoN ke gali main bikta dikh raha "saccha_pyar"... keemat-e-wafa laga ghayal dil-o-jaan ko kar leNge... phir karegi ruswa mere jazbaat-e-dil ko jamane main... luta gairat-e-nazar, khuda eitbaar-e-yaar ko kar leNge... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th January 2005, 07:42 AM
ashq-e-nazar se jhakhm-e-dil ko bhar leNge..
inam-e-ishq se wo gham-e-dastaan bhar leNge... ujale se nikal ja phunche gumnaam andhere maiN.. jaam-e-jehar se roshan dar-e-kabristan ko kar leNge... tujhko bhula doouN ye kash munkin hota mere liye... nakabil-e-faramosh pal rukhsati-e-paigam ko kar leNge... *na bhoolne wala ** aakhiri khat... yadoN ke gali main bikta dikh raha "saccha_pyar"... keemat-e-wafa laga ghayal dil-o-jaan ko kar leNge... phir karegi ruswa mere jazbaat-e-dil ko jamane main... luta gairat-e-nazar, khuda eitbaar-e-yaar ko kar leNge... kunal [/B][/QUOTE] kunal, kal maine kaha thha oos se bhi kahi adhik aaj yah dil ko chhu gayi hai... khush raho... di |
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19th January 2005, 10:41 AM
tujhko bhula doouN ye kash munkin hota mere liye... nakabil-e-faramosh pal rukhsati-e-paigam ko kar leNge... Kunal...... ye kalam pada....... aur sach mein ek dard ki chuban ......phir se ek kalam dard pe...... tumhare is kalam pe Taamil ji ki nazm yaad aayi.....Mehndi hasan ji ki gaayi hui...... "main hosh mein tha to phir uspe mar gaya kaise..... ye zahar mere lahoo mein utar gaya kaise......" kabhi fursat mein poori nazm pesh karoonga..... abhi to delhi aana hai...... aa raha hoon....... milte hain 20th jan raat 9.15 baje.... New delhi station pe..... ek choti si mulakaat phir aage jaana hai...... tumhara bhai....... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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19th January 2005, 06:08 PM
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mujhe khudh nahi malooM ki maiN itna sanjeeda kaise likh gaya ... aapko accha laga .. mera likha safal hua.. taamil sahab ek aala darje ke fynkaaroN maiN se hai ... mujhe behad khushi ho rahi hai ki aapko mere kalaam ne unki nazm ko aapke dimaag maiN jinda kar diya ... mujhe intzaar rahega poori nazm ka milte hai delhi main... mulakaat bhale hi choti hogi .. par jazbaat had se jyada bade hoNge umeed hai ... shabbakhair aapki yaatra mangalmai ho ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th January 2005, 07:45 PM
tujhko bhula doouN ye kash munkin hota mere liye...
nakabil-e-faramosh pal rukhsati-e-paigam ko kar leNge... Kya baat hai kunaal bhaaii!!! Kaafi asardaar likha hai aap ne.. Taarif Kabul kijiye… MayanK |
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20th January 2005, 07:25 AM
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shukriya ... aapko mere chand alfaaz kuch asardar nazar aaye ...aapki tarif sir aaNkhoN pe kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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20th January 2005, 12:20 PM
Pyare Kunal,
Kya kahe, Itne dard bhare aur gehre kalaam likhte ho aur kehte ho ke koi gham nahi. Chalo tum kehte ho to maan lete hai. Bhai dil ke kareeb se guzra hai tumhara yeh kalaam. Chalo tumko seedha 65grams daad  Humesha khush raho. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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20th January 2005, 03:49 PM
well mr rajendra kumar ab main kya kahu????
sach batau mujhe hasi aayi.....plzz gussa na hona itne gehre kalam mein hasi aana...tumhe lag raha hoga ki aisa kyun???to batati hoon mein..uska reason tumne starting mein likha na "isse sirf alfaz hi samajhna" ...isliye hasi aayi...tum aajjkal specify kardete ho kii isse kalam hi samajhna taki tumpe koi gussa na kyun??????sahi kaha na maine.... kalam ka kahu to very good.... tujhko bhula doouN ye kash munkin hota mere liye... nakabil-e-faramosh pal rukhsati-e-paigam ko kar leNge... yadoN ke gali main bikta dikh raha "saccha_pyar"... keemat-e-wafa laga ghayal dil-o-jaan ko kar leNge... phir karegi ruswa mere jazbaat-e-dil ko jamane main... luta gairat-e-nazar, khuda eitbaar-e-yaar ko kar leNge mausam  Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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20th January 2005, 09:14 PM
Kunal mere yaar.,....bas yahi kahooNga ....
Ke bahut khoob likha hai tumne. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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21st January 2005, 02:34 PM
Kunal mere bhai..aacha kiya ki ise tumne yaha bhi post kiya....with the nature of that thread (ebarat-e-ashqiya) ispar wah to kar sakta tha par reply nahi...
pehle to mubariik baad ki itne sanjiide khayaal ko bahut sujh bhuj ke saath tumne nazm ke roop mein piroya hai ashq-e-nazar se jhakhm-e-dil ko bhar leNge.. inam-e-ishq se wo gham-e-dastaan bhar leNge... Yeh ek aur sher tumhare liYe: wahi saadiq hai jise naam-e-wafaa haasil hai wafaa-e-ishq mein sanam ehteraam kar lenge.. likhte rehNaa -tumharaa apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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21st January 2005, 09:15 PM
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kuch na kahe aap to kaise chalega ... bhai shayad maiNe pehle bhi likha tha ... ki shayri woh nahi ki jo bas hum hai ... apne aas paas aur apne hi dil ka koi kona hai shayri ... bas ek hasrat rehti hai ki apne kalaam se logoN ke dil ke us kone maiN ghol pauN ... gham aur khushi to khair har kisi ke paas hota hai ... kisi pas gham jyada to kisi ke paas kam .. aur mere lafz humesha koshish karte hai ki diloN ko dono ka ehsaas kara payeN ... aapki daad sir aaNkhoN pe ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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tum mera intro padte kyuN nahi bhai .. lag raha hai is baar bhi nahi padha padhna phir kuch kehna ,...pasnad aaya aapko ... mujhe khushi hai ... tumhara bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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masam shukra hai ... tumhe haNsi to aayi .. chalo koi baat nahi meri startinG se hi sahi ... well mujhe itni bar sunne ko mila hai .. to ab dar lagta hai is liye pehle hi likh deta huN maiN ... ki bhai kalam hi samajhna ... well accha laga tum aayi aur ise padha .. shukriya ... aur haN plz aate raha karo ... warna azeeb lagta hai bohat ... apna khayal rakhna tumhara dost kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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23rd January 2005, 01:01 PM
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shukriya ...aap aaye aur aapko pasand bhi aaya ... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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muafi maiN bhi chahuNga ... ki mehfil ki rangat ko yuN sare aam maiN le aaya ... aur bhai shukriya aapne mere is kalaam ko itni tavazzo di .. aur is par wah ke sath mujhe dad di mere khaak hunar ke liye .... shukriya aur jo aashar aapne jode hai .. wakai maiN kuch jo kami lag rahi thi kalam ki ... poori si lag rhai hai .. apne bhai ka yuN sath dene ke liye th dil se shukriya ... aap sath dete rahiye .. hum apni kalam ko se kagaz raakh karne ki koshish karte raheNge ... aapka chota bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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kyuN seena chalni karna chahte hai sorry keh kar.. bas gale lag dil maiN rahiye ... shukra hai ab to aap shant hai .. aur aapne is kalaam pe daad nahi di ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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28th January 2005, 12:40 PM
kunal ji....
yadoN ke gali main bikta dikh raha "saccha_pyar"... keemat-e-wafa laga ghayal dil-o-jaan ko kar leNge... phir karegi ruswa mere jazbaat-e-dil ko jamane main... luta gairat-e-nazar, khuda eitbaar-e-yaar ko kar leNge... ...in do sher me to jaise sari hi gazal ka arth nikal aya..bahut kkhoob...! |
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aapka isteqbaal karta huN apne post pe ... aaj pehli bar aapka aana hua hai khaksaar ki taraf... boliye kya leNgi chai ya thanda ... well shukriya aapko mera likha hua pasand aaya .. aur aapne apne beshkeemti chand alfazoN se nacheez ko nawaza ... shukriyaaap apna khyal rakhiyega... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd February 2005, 12:17 PM
raj bhai ...
kya wakai khafa hai ab tak nahi aaye .. wapas ... naraz na rahiyega ... aur jaldi se daad dena is kalaam pe.. apka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Kunaal ji, aap to shuru se bahut umda likhte aaye hai, yeh poetry aapki 2005 ki hai...tab bhi aap kamaal ka likhte thy ab to baat hi kuch aur hai. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Khair ab to kunaal miyaan aala darje ke shayar ho gaye hai par umeed hai unhe yeh padhkar ek pal ke liye to main yaad aaungaa. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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