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"ulajh rhe hain sambhl rhe hain" - 26th March 2009, 05:27 AM
ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhl rhe hain
zindagi ke paich o kham nikal rhe hain

ye gamri e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
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Aadaab o tasleemaat !

moHteram janab yeh sher kuch zyada hi acha laga mujhe

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ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhl rhe hain
zindagi ke paich o kham nikal rhe hain

ye gamri e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitare baldal rhe hain


bohat hi romantic ghazal hai aslam saheb....dil ko chu rahe hain saare ashaar...har sher khabil-e tareef hai.....yuhi likhte rahiye...



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ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhl rhe hain
zindagi ke paich o kham nikal rhe hain

ye gamri e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitare baldal rhe hain
Aslam ji...Aadaab !....bahut khubsurat rahi aapki yeh ghazal....sabhi ashaar lajawaab hai....har sher mai nazakat hai....aur kahi kahi masumiyat bhi jhalakti hai....nice creation....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....aur apna khayal rakhiyega....

dil se daad....kabul kijiye....

duaaon ke saath.....



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhl rhe hain
zindagi ke paich o kham nikal rhe hain

ye gamri e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitare baldal rhe hain

Very romantic ghazal Noor.
All the shers were good.

ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
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ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhl rhe hain
zindagi ke paich o kham nikal rhe hain

ye gamri e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitare baldal rhe hain
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ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhl rhe hain
zindagi ke paich o kham nikal rhe hain

ye gamri e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitare baldal rhe hain
Aslam sahaB............Aadaab janab

Aapki is gazal per to sahab kya kahuN har sher per bus wah hi nikal raha hai... behad khoob lagi aapki gazal kisi ek sher ko achcha kahuN nahi keh paya... sabhi sher lajawab hai... bahut khoob dil se daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rhaiye, aapke ashiqana khayal bahut khoob hai aage bhi aisi gazalen aapse padhne milengi yehi dua......

Khush rahiye...
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Bhut bhut shukriya zainy jee,


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Aslam ji...Aadaab !....bahut khubsurat rahi aapki yeh ghazal....sabhi ashaar lajawaab hai....har sher mai nazakat hai....aur kahi kahi masumiyat bhi jhalakti hai....nice creation....aise hi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye....aur apna khayal rakhiyega....

dil se daad....kabul kijiye....

duaaon ke saath.....

Is hosala afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukirya Naresh sahab dair se reply ke maazrat khwaah hu.n,



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Very romantic ghazal Noor.
All the shers were good.

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Aapki is gazal per to sahab kya kahuN har sher per bus wah hi nikal raha hai... behad khoob lagi aapki gazal kisi ek sher ko achcha kahuN nahi keh paya... sabhi sher lajawab hai... bahut khoob dil se daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rhaiye, aapke ashiqana khayal bahut khoob hai aage bhi aisi gazalen aapse padhne milengi yehi dua......

Khush rahiye...
Apna khayal rakhiye
Khuda Hafez....

kwahish Sahab is hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya dair se jawaab daine ke liyn maafi khwaah hu.n, you.n hi hosla baRhaate rahiye



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bahut badhiya....
Aslam saheb....aapki Ghazal padhte hue ek muskurahat aa gayee....aap ka yeh andaaz behad pasand aaya...

Aise hi likhte rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......

Aapka dost,
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bahut badhiya....
Aslam saheb....aapki Ghazal padhte hue ek muskurahat aa gayee....aap ka yeh andaaz behad pasand aaya...

Aise hi likhte rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......

Aapka dost,
Vikram...

Vikramjethi sahab isse achi aur bhala kya baat ho sakti hai ki meri ghazal paRDte huway aap muskura diye matlab koshish kaamyaab, hosla afzaaii ka bhut shukriya,



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Aslam Jii,,

A superb creation.....

I like every verse...
boht roomani pesh-kash hai...

Likhte rahiye ga,,

Take care,
Regardz,,


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Aslam Jii,,

A superb creation.....

I like every verse...
boht roomani pesh-kash hai...

Likhte rahiye ga,,

Take care,
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Thnxxxxxxx so much Hassan Sahab,



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ulajh rhe hain kabhi sambhl rhe hain
zindagi ke paich o kham nikal rhe hain

ye gamri e ehsaas e ishq hai daikho
wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitare baldal rhe hain
ji very very nice creation.......................


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wo shamma ki manind pighal rhe hain

abhi guftugoo kuch ke pardo mai hai
aur lafz behekne ko machal rhe hain

ye aaghaaz e mohabbat ke nakhre hain
wo behla rhe hain hum bhel rhe hain

unhay ye naaz ke humkalam hain unse
hame ye khusi ke raqeeb jal rhe hain

agr wo kehne mai jhijak rhe hain aslam
to samjh lo ke sitare baldal rhe hain


Janaab Aslam Bhai ko hamaara Aadaab, aaj itne dino ke baad aapka kalaam padhne ka naseeb haasil hua , maazrat chahta hoon jo ise itna late padh raha hoon, lekin janaab kya kahen, kya soch , kya khyaal, kya alfaaz , kya bayaani... waah saaab dil khush kar diya aapke ehsaason ne. Sari ghazal hi tareef ke kaabil hai isme se kisi ek sher ko point out karne ki gustaakhi nahi kar paa raha hoon.... likhte rahen

shaad...

Shaad...
   
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