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Takiye Ko Aansuon Se Bhigoya To - 20th March 2014, 06:36 AM

takiye ko aansuon se bhigoya to kya
hua ?
Mai bhi kisi ki yaad main roya to kya
hua ??
dil ko sukoon hai ki woh khwabo
main khoye hain,
main hi tamaam raat na soya to kya hua ?
woh phool hai, jo seh na sake oss
(shabnam) ka wazan,
maine ghamon ke bojh ko dhhoya to
kya hua ?
nikle the hum kisi ki vafa ki talaash
main,
is justuju main khud ko hi khoya to
kya hua ?
ilzaam shayri ka ise de diya gaya !!
Lafzon main haal dil ka piroya to kya hua?
'khavar' woh khat bhi jhoot tha,
shayad isiliye,
har lafz maine ashkon se dhoya to kya
hua ?
Ghulam Mohd 'khavar'

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27th September 2014, 06:49 PM

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Aapki koshish dil ko pasand aayiin

Aage bhi yuunhi likhte rahiye. . . Dil se daad

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takiye ko aansuon se bhigoya to kya hua ?
Mai bhi kisi ki yaad main roya to kya hua ??

dil ko sukoon hai ki woh khwabo main khoye hain,
main hi tamaam raat na soya to kya hua ?

woh phool hai, jo seh na sake oss (shabnam) ka wazan,
maine ghamon ke bojh ko dhhoya to kya hua ?

nikle the hum kisi ki vafa ki talaash main,
is justuju main khud ko hi khoya to kya hua ?

ilzaam shayri ka ise de diya gaya !!
Lafzon main haal dil ka piroya to kya hua?

'khavar' woh khat bhi jhoot tha, shayad isiliye,
har lafz maine ashkon se dhoya to kya hua ?

Ghulam Mohd 'khavar'
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Sub'hanAllah buhat aala wa paayaydaar ghazal inayat kee haye aapnay is bazm ko!! Har shayr lajawaab, aalatareen shayari ka muzaahera.. ilteja haye aapsay yoon-hee is bazm ki rawnaq barhaatay rahayn!


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29th September 2014, 01:48 AM

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takiye ko aansuon se bhigoya to kya
hua ?
Mai bhi kisi ki yaad main roya to kya
hua ??
dil ko sukoon hai ki woh khwabo
main khoye hain,
main hi tamaam raat na soya to kya hua ?
woh phool hai, jo seh na sake oss
(shabnam) ka wazan,
maine ghamon ke bojh ko dhhoya to
kya hua ?
nikle the hum kisi ki vafa ki talaash
main,
is justuju main khud ko hi khoya to
kya hua ?
ilzaam shayri ka ise de diya gaya !!
Lafzon main haal dil ka piroya to kya hua?
'khavar' woh khat bhi jhoot tha,
shayad isiliye,
har lafz maine ashkon se dhoya to kya
hua ?
Ghulam Mohd 'khavar'


Khavar saheb,

aadaab tasleem farmaiiyeaur bazm meiN aapka swaagat hai

aapki Ghazal paDhi, is gohar ko shaareek-e-bazm ke hawaale karne ke liye aapna iNtehaayi shukurguzaar hooN , mayaari qalaam apna pataa meeloN door se diya karta hai yahi aapki is pur-asar Ghazal ka maqaam hai


ummeed hai aapse mulaqaat hoti rahegi

rab raakha
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thanks alot my friends ,aapne mujh nacheez ki hausla afzayi ki bahut acha laga. ,aur maazrat chahta hun ku kafi arse hazire khidmat na ho saka,
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thanks alot my friends ,aapne mujh nacheez ki hausla afzayi ki bahut acha laga. ,aur maazrat chahta hun ku kafi arse hazire khidmat na ho saka,
aapko bazm me dekhkar khushi huyi....aate rahiye aur apne khoobsoorat kalaam hame padhne ka mauka dete rahiye...



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