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andhero.n mei.n ujaalo.n mei.n (gazal) - 15th October 2014, 10:13 AM
Dosto apni ek naii gazal ke saath hazir hoon..umeed hai aapka pyar zaroor milega...Raj..


andhero.n mei.n ujaalo.n mein
khoye ho kin khyaalo.n mei.n....

kabhi hamse bhi kaho kush
uljhe ho kin sawaalo.n mei.n......

dil khila hai phool ki manind
lagaa du.n? tere baalo.n mei.n......

nasha mad mast zoban ka
chhalka do in pyaalo.n mei.n......

jo rang hai tere aarizo.n ka
nahi fagun ke gulaalo.n mei.n......

ganwa de kaise ik pal mein
tumhe paya hai saalo.n mei.n.....

'Raj' tum hi manalo usko
kya rakha hai malaalo.n mei.n......

Aapki rai ka muntzir.....

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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15th October 2014, 02:47 PM
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Dosto apni ek naii gazal ke saath hazir hoon..umeed hai aapka pyar zaroor milega...Raj..


andhero.n mei.n ujaalo.n mein
khoye ho kin khyaalo.n mei.n....

kabhi hamse bhi kaho kush
uljhe ho kin sawaalo.n mei.n......

dil khila hai phool ki manind
lagaa du.n? tere baalo.n mei.n......

nasha mad mast zoban ka
chhalka do in pyaalo.n mei.n......

jo rang hai tere aarizo.n ka
nahi fagun ke gulaalo.n mei.n......

ganwa de kaise ik pal mein
tumhe paya hai saalo.n mei.n.....

'Raj' tum hi manalo usko
kya rakha hai malaalo.n mei.n......

Aapki rai ka muntzir.....
raaj saahab...... kyaa kahun aapki is peshkash par... dil jhooom uthaa hai meraa.... bas waah hi waahhhh

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15th October 2014, 03:18 PM
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Dosto apni ek naii gazal ke saath hazir hoon..umeed hai aapka pyar zaroor milega...Raj..


andhero.n mei.n ujaalo.n mein
khoye ho kin khyaalo.n mei.n....

kabhi hamse bhi kaho kush
uljhe ho kin sawaalo.n mei.n......

dil khila hai phool ki manind
lagaa du.n? tere baalo.n mei.n......

nasha mad mast zoban ka
chhalka do in pyaalo.n mei.n......

jo rang hai tere aarizo.n ka
nahi fagun ke gulaalo.n mei.n......

ganwa de kaise ik pal mein
tumhe paya hai saalo.n mei.n.....

'Raj' tum hi manalo usko
kya rakha hai malaalo.n mei.n......

Aapki rai ka muntzir.....
Aadaab Raj Bhaee,

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अति सुंदर राजवीर साहब बहुत खूब....एक मुद्दत बाद पडा आपको भी....
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very good poem Raj ji.
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15th October 2014, 05:02 PM
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Dosto apni ek naii gazal ke saath hazir hoon..umeed hai aapka pyar zaroor milega...Raj..


andhero.n mei.n ujaalo.n mein
khoye ho kin khyaalo.n mei.n....

kabhi hamse bhi kaho kush
uljhe ho kin sawaalo.n mei.n......

dil khila hai phool ki manind
lagaa du.n? tere baalo.n mei.n......

nasha mad mast zoban ka
chhalka do in pyaalo.n mei.n......

jo rang hai tere aarizo.n ka
nahi fagun ke gulaalo.n mei.n......

ganwa de kaise ik pal mein
tumhe paya hai saalo.n mei.n.....

'Raj' tum hi manalo usko
kya rakha hai malaalo.n mei.n......

Aapki rai ka muntzir.....

wahhh wahhhh Rajveer ji, badi romantic shayri pesh ki hai aapne
etni deir se aapki kalam chup kaise thi ?

sabhi ashiyaar tareef ke kabil hai...bahut khoobsurat gazal bani hai

aapki dost

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16th October 2014, 06:38 PM
SSA maalko,

kitthe rahe ainey din?

aap to bhai gaayab hi ho gaye the, apne haal aur chaal donoN ki khabar dijiyega


Ghazal khoob hui hai, mubarakbaad haazir hai


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19th October 2014, 11:40 AM
Sameer ji ko Raj ka adaab ...janaab aapki wah wah sar aankho par..aapne apna keemti waqt meri gazal ke naam kiya so dil se dhanyabaad...khush rahiye..Raj...

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Ahmad bhai ko raj ka adaab...janaab ham is qabil kahan hai.n aap ne to bhut jiyada ijjat baksh dii ..khair aapka tah e dil se shukarguzaar hoo.n jo aapne apna keemti waqt mujh nacheez ki adna c koshish ko diya .
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21st November 2014, 11:36 PM
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Dosto apni ek naii gazal ke saath hazir hoon..umeed hai aapka pyar zaroor milega...Raj..


andhero.n mei.n ujaalo.n mein
khoye ho kin khyaalo.n mei.n....

kabhi hamse bhi kaho kush
uljhe ho kin sawaalo.n mei.n......

dil khila hai phool ki manind
lagaa du.n? tere baalo.n mei.n......

nasha mad mast zoban ka
chhalka do in pyaalo.n mei.n......

jo rang hai tere aarizo.n ka
nahi fagun ke gulaalo.n mei.n......

ganwa de kaise ik pal mein
tumhe paya hai saalo.n mei.n.....

'Raj' tum hi manalo usko
kya rakha hai malaalo.n mei.n......

Aapki rai ka muntzir.....
bohat khoob veer ji humesha ki tarah acha likha hai aap ne

Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
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22nd November 2014, 10:10 AM
rajveer hameshaa kee tarah se bahut khoobsoorat hai

mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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