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Usne Humko Tadpaaya Bohat...! - 15th October 2014, 12:24 PM

एक सादा बहर मे एक सादा सी ग़ज़ल आपके सामने रख रहा हूँ.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवाज़ियेगा ...


दिल ने दिल को दिल की राहों पे ही उलझाया बोहत..
मे गिरा उठ कर चला फिर खुद पे मुस्काया बोहत..

आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं..
मैं लहर बन उनके कदमो से भी टकराया बोहत...

थी बड़ी बेशर्म हमारी जाँ जो निकली ही नहीं..
कर सितम रह रह के उसने हमको तड़पाया बोहत..

कौन जाने की परिंदों को कहाँ किस्मत मिले..
सोच के हमने परों को अपने फैलाया बोहत..

ज़िन्दगी है या पहेली मैं नहीं ये जानता..
इसने उलझाया बोहत तो मैंने सुलझाया बोहत..

और..!

तुम सिफर थे मैं सिफर था इस कहानी के लिए..
जो भी हो इश्क तो शिद्धत से फरमाया बोहत..


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Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat..
Main gira uth kar chala phir khud pe Muskaaya bohat..

Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi..
MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat..

Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi..
kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat..

Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile..
Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat..

Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta..
Isne uljhaya bohat to maine sujhaaya bohat...

Aur...!

Tum sifar the main sifar tha is kahaani ke liye.
Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat..


Kunaal(Sifar)


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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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15th October 2014, 12:58 PM

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एक सादा बहर मे एक सादा सी ग़ज़ल आपके सामने रख रहा हूँ.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवाज़ियेगा ...


दिल ने दिल को दिल की राहों पे ही उलझाया बोहत..
मे गिरा उठ कर चला फिर खुद पे मुस्काया बोहत..

आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं..
मैं लहर बन उनके कदमो से भी टकराया बोहत...

थी बड़ी बेशर्म हमारी जाँ जो निकली ही नहीं..
कर सितम रह रह के उसने हमको तड़पाया बोहत..

कौन जाने की परिंदों को कहाँ किस्मत मिले..
सोच के हमने परों को अपने फैलाया बोहत..

ज़िन्दगी है या पहेली मैं नहीं ये जानता..
इसने उलझाया बोहत तो मैंने सुलझाया बोहत..

और..!

तुम सिफर थे मैं सिफर था इस कहानी के लिए..
जो भी हो इश्क तो शिद्धत से फरमाया बोहत..


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Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat..
Main gira uth kar chala phir khud pe Muskaaya bohat..

Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi..
MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat..

Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi..
kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat..

Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile..
Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat..

Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta..
Isne uljhaya bohat to maine sujhaaya bohat...

Aur...!

Tum sifar the main sifar tha is kahaani ke liye.
Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat..


Kunaal(Sifar)


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15th October 2014, 02:43 PM

waahh waahh kunaal saahab... kyaaa kahne aapki taazaa ghazal ke baare me...

bahot shiddat se likhaa hai aapne, aur aaapki wo tadap nazar aa rahi hai is kalaam me...

merii jaanib se bahot si daad aur duaaen pesh hain.... mubaarakbaad zindabaad...

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15th October 2014, 03:24 PM

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एक सादा बहर मे एक सादा सी ग़ज़ल आपके सामने रख रहा हूँ.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवाज़ियेगा ...


दिल ने दिल को दिल की राहों पे ही उलझाया बोहत..
मे गिरा उठ कर चला फिर खुद पे मुस्काया बोहत..

आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं..
मैं लहर बन उनके कदमो से भी टकराया बोहत...

थी बड़ी बेशर्म हमारी जाँ जो निकली ही नहीं..
कर सितम रह रह के उसने हमको तड़पाया बोहत..

कौन जाने की परिंदों को कहाँ किस्मत मिले..
सोच के हमने परों को अपने फैलाया बोहत..

ज़िन्दगी है या पहेली मैं नहीं ये जानता..
इसने उलझाया बोहत तो मैंने सुलझाया बोहत..

और..!

तुम सिफर थे मैं सिफर था इस कहानी के लिए..
जो भी हो इश्क तो शिद्धत से फरमाया बोहत..


कुनाल (सिफर)



Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat..
Main gira uth kar chala phir khud pe Muskaaya bohat..

Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi..
MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat..

Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi..
kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat..

Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile..
Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat..

Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta..
Isne uljhaya bohat to maine suljhaaya bohat...

Aur...!

Tum sifar the main sifar tha is kahaani ke liye.
Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat..


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Sub'hanAllah! Bayhadd dilkas wa dilfareb ghazal inaayat ki haye aap janaab nay hamayn!! Dili daad qabool farmaayayn, Zeel k ashaar nay dil mayn ghar kar-liyaa.. bayhad shukriya aapki payshkash ka... ilteja haye aap-say yoon-hee mahfil sajaatay rahayn...

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Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi..
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Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile..
Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat..

Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta..
Isne uljhaya bohat to maine suljhaaya bohat...


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Kunal Bhai Aadaab ...!

Kyaa baat hai bhai bus gazab ki kalaam kahi hai aapne ...
Itna waqt to nahi tha ke koii reply kar sakuN lekin aapki gazal ke maqte ne aur ulaa sher ne jaane nahi diya ...

Is khoob gazal par meri hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye ...
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kunaal jee...bahut hee umda kalaam likha hai......ek khanjar sa utarta hua.laga mujhe seene mein.....daad kubul karein



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17th October 2014, 11:26 AM

kunaal bhai:

namaste!

kaise haiN aap?

umdaah Ghazal aur ehsaas bhee laa-jawaab... khushi huii aapko bazm mein deKh kar... yuunhi bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye aage bhee

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Kunaal bhai... aapko bahot bahot mubaarak ho Gauhar-e-SDC ka hissa banne ke liye..

aage bhi hame aapkke khoobsurat kalaamoN ka intzzaar rahegaa...

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Betareen gazal kunaal ji..gauhar e sdc ka hissa banne ke liye mubarakbaad..aise hi umda kalaam padne ka mauka dete rahe hame....



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आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं..
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Shukraguzaar huN moderators ka .. main iske kaabil nahi samajhta khud ko.. par mujhe yahan rakhne ke liye shukria .. mere khaak alfaazoN ko izzat bakshi main mutmayiN huN aapke isteqbaal se .. aur kya kahuN..

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19th October 2014, 02:29 AM

mubarak ho Kunaal bhai

lekin mubarakbaad se pehle daad par aapka haq ziyaada ban'ta hai aur aapka shukriya adaa karna bhi hum sab ka farz hai jo aapne itte saaloN se is mehfil ko apne Ghar jaisa samm'aan diya hai aur aaj hum sab aapke ba-kamaal qalam se nikle hue besh-qemaati motiiyoN ki chamak ka sukooN haasil kar rahe haiN

ek mayaari qalaam raqm karne par dilii mubarkbaad haazir hai aur shukriya alag se "Tikaa" lijiyega


aap jaise sho'ra se hi is bazm ki raunak bar-qaraar hai aur inshah allah aage bhi rahegi


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Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat..
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Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi..
MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat..

Aisa laga padhke is line ko mere hatho likhi jani chahiye thi bahut
Ye to meri feelings hai..

Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi..
kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat..

Besharam jaan nhi hogi kisi ki dua mai honge ap usika hoga asar

Kunaal bahut acha likhte ho ap...meaningfull aap bahut lucky ho jjo apne vichar kitabo mai ache se uttar sakte ho.....kash ki mai bi
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har sher apne aap mein ek duniya hai aur ghazal kaaynaat

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Bahut achhe kunnu..

Lajawaab ..

Aapki kaarigari Ne dil ko bahlaya bahut
Chaahta to tha magar ye kah nahi paya bahut

Sher aapki shaan me tha kubool farmaaeiN

Dil baag baag ho gaya


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एक सादा बहर मे एक सादा सी ग़ज़ल आपके सामने रख रहा हूँ.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवाज़ियेगा ...


दिल ने दिल को दिल की राहों पे ही उलझाया बोहत..
मे गिरा उठ कर चला फिर खुद पे मुस्काया बोहत..

आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं..
मैं लहर बन उनके कदमो से भी टकराया बोहत...

थी बड़ी बेशर्म हमारी जाँ जो निकली ही नहीं..
कर सितम रह रह के उसने हमको तड़पाया बोहत..

कौन जाने की परिंदों को कहाँ किस्मत मिले..
सोच के हमने परों को अपने फैलाया बोहत..

ज़िन्दगी है या पहेली मैं नहीं ये जानता..
इसने उलझाया बोहत तो मैंने सुलझाया बोहत..

और..!

तुम सिफर थे मैं सिफर था इस कहानी के लिए..
जो भी हो इश्क तो शिद्धत से फरमाया बोहत..


कुनाल (सिफर)



Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat..
Main gira uth kar chala phir khud pe Muskaaya bohat..

Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi..
MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat..

Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi..
kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat..

Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile..
Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat..

Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta..
Isne uljhaya bohat to maine sujhaaya bohat...

Aur...!

Tum sifar the main sifar tha is kahaani ke liye.
Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat..


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Wah waah waaaaah.....

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एक सादा बहर मे एक सादा सी ग़ज़ल आपके सामने रख रहा हूँ.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवाज़ियेगा ...


दिल ने दिल को दिल की राहों पे ही उलझाया बोहत..
मे गिरा उठ कर चला फिर खुद पे मुस्काया बोहत..

आके साहिल पे भी मुझको देख पाए क्यूँ नहीं..
मैं लहर बन उनके कदमो से भी टकराया बोहत...

थी बड़ी बेशर्म हमारी जाँ जो निकली ही नहीं..
कर सितम रह रह के उसने हमको तड़पाया बोहत..

कौन जाने की परिंदों को कहाँ किस्मत मिले..
सोच के हमने परों को अपने फैलाया बोहत..

ज़िन्दगी है या पहेली मैं नहीं ये जानता..
इसने उलझाया बोहत तो मैंने सुलझाया बोहत..

और..!

तुम सिफर थे मैं सिफर था इस कहानी के लिए..
जो भी हो इश्क तो शिद्धत से फरमाया बोहत..


कुनाल (सिफर)



Dil ne dil ko dil ki raahoN pe hi uljhaaya bohat..
Main gira uth kar chala phir khud pe Muskaaya bohat..

Aake saahil pe bhi mujhko dekh paaye kyuN nahi..
MaiN lehar ban unke kadmo se bhi takraaya bohat..

Thi badi besharm humaari JaaN Jo Nikli hi nahi..
kar sitam reh reh ke usne humko tadpaaya bohat..

Koun jaane ke parindoN ko kahan kismat mile..
Soch ke humne ParoN ko apne failaya bohat..

Zindagi hai ya paheli mai nahi ye jaanta..
Isne uljhaya bohat to maine sujhaaya bohat...

Aur...!

Tum sifar the main sifar tha is kahaani ke liye.
Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat..


Kunaal(Sifar)
Tum sifar the main sifar tha is kahaani ke liye.
Jo bhi ho par Ishq to shiddat se farmaaya bohat..


Kunaal kehar dhaa gaye tum is ghazal ke saath...behad umdaa

Yunhi likhte raho..

tumhara apnaa



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Bahut hi umda ghazal likhi hai aapne.. bahut khub..

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