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Kal talak jo molvi..... - 5th August 2015, 08:24 PM

Here is a parody to Ghalib's famous sher:
Ishq ne Ghalib nikamma ker diya
Verna hum bhi aadmi they kaam ke

Kal talak jo molvi masjid mei.N they
Aaj bun bethe bhagat woh Raam ke

Din dhale jub woh mileNge aan ker
Muntazir hei.N hum to bus us shaam ke

AaNsoo nikal padey hei.N aaNkho.N se baarha
Hansna bhi agar chaha is dil ko thaam ke

Her aahato.N pe tere aane ka dhoka
Aaey hei.N aesey lamhe bhi meri shaam ke

Kal talak baahosh ik insaan they
Aaj diwaney hei.N tere naam ke

Raho.N mei.N woh milna neechi nigah kiye
Dil muntazir hey ab bhi tere salam ke

Zindagi bher piyaar mei.N tadpa kiye
Kub mileNge din hamei.N aaram ke

Yaad tujhko kiyo.N kare Fakhri koii
Jub aaya na kaam tou kisi khaas-o-aam ke

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5th August 2015, 08:29 PM

it should not read:
Her aahato.N pe tere aane ka dhoka

But it should be :
Her aahato.N pe tere aane ka woh dhoka
   
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11th August 2015, 11:51 AM

Bahut khoob..fakhri sahab.....
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11th August 2015, 12:07 PM

AaNsoo nikal padey hei.N aaNkho.N se baarha
Hansna bhi agar chaha is dil ko thaam ke


khoob sher huaa hai Fakhrii ji............. likhte rahiye

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Behad shukria Madhuji aur Shaadsaheb himmat afzaii ka. koshish kerta rahoo.Nga
   
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achha likha hai fakhiri sahib............................................


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15th August 2015, 09:04 PM

shukria Ishkji hosla afzaii ka.
   
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